mera dard...sheba

by Sheba on April 16, 2010, 02:30:55 AM
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«Reply #15 on: April 21, 2010, 05:14:03 AM »
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Quote from: faisal314 on April 17, 2010, 10:53:26 AM
Good thoughts and ideas.

Just a little thing, please take goo care of "qafeeya" like namak, ferq, serek...etc. These words must be "humqafia".

Keep up!

i will try my best, thanx faisal ji
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«Reply #16 on: April 21, 2010, 05:14:56 AM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on April 17, 2010, 11:24:19 AM
Wah Sheba-ji sunder kalaam hai aapka....
Bade nape tule shabdo main bhoot wajandaar baat kahi hai aapne... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause




thank u koyal ji
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«Reply #17 on: April 21, 2010, 05:15:56 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on April 18, 2010, 10:30:32 AM
Wah bahut khoobsurat gazal pesh kiya aape Sheba ji.great creation. Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #18 on: April 21, 2010, 05:17:05 AM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on April 18, 2010, 05:01:47 PM
Wah wah kya baat hai bahot khoob likha Sheba ji. Aajkal ke halaat par bahot bebaki aur khoobsurati se likha hai aapne. Ye do sher mujhe sab se achhe lage:

'anaa'to itni basi hai insaan main aaj,
ho jaata hai qatl khyaaloan key farq main,
izzat ki abb kisey parwaah hai yahan sheba,
ladtaa hai khaandaan yahan khuli sadak main.

Daad qubool farmayen.

shukria riyaz ji
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«Reply #19 on: April 23, 2010, 02:15:25 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Sheba Ji
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«Reply #20 on: April 24, 2010, 03:51:39 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on April 16, 2010, 02:30:55 AM
                   

                    na janey kya dekhta hai phooloan ki mehak main,
                    aataa nahin usey maza daulat ki chamak main,

                    munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
                    hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main,

                    bann sakaa na woh wafadar kabhi watan ka,
                    na maloom kya kami thee yahan key namak main,

                    'anaa'to itni basi hai insaan main aaj,
                    ho jaata hai qatl khyaaloan key farq main,

                    izzat ki abb kisey parwaah hai yahan sheba,
                    ladtaa hai khaandaan yahan khuli sadak main......!!!

Subhan llah Subhan Allah,.
Dusra Ashaar To Mashallah,.

Kya Kahein Hum, Jawaab Nahi,.

Allah Aur Taaqat Bakhshe Aapke Kalam Mein,.
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«Reply #21 on: April 27, 2010, 09:21:12 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 23, 2010, 02:15:25 PM
Bohot Khoob Sheba Ji

thank you celmira ji
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«Reply #22 on: May 05, 2010, 06:26:03 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #23 on: May 10, 2010, 06:55:10 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 24, 2010, 03:51:39 PM
Subhan llah Subhan Allah,.
Dusra Ashaar To Mashallah,.

Kya Kahein Hum, Jawaab Nahi,.

Allah Aur Taaqat Bakhshe Aapke Kalam Mein,.

shukria azeem ji
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«Reply #24 on: May 11, 2010, 09:03:35 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 05, 2010, 06:26:03 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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«Reply #25 on: May 11, 2010, 10:02:30 PM »
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bhut khooob.............


aslam
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«Reply #26 on: May 20, 2010, 09:56:17 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 11, 2010, 10:02:30 PM
bhut khooob.............


aslam

SHUKRIA AAINA JI
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Quote from: Rover on April 16, 2010, 05:19:36 AM
WAH WAH SABSE BADHIYA, EK DAM SAHI.

thank you
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«Reply #28 on: October 27, 2013, 11:06:52 AM »
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Bahut umda.. Khaskar ye sher -

bann sakaa na woh wafadar kabhi watan
ka,
na maloom kya kami thee yahan key
namak main.

izzat ki abb kisey parwaah hai yahan
sheba,
ladtaa hai khaandaan yahan khuli sadak
main......!!!

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«Reply #29 on: October 27, 2013, 11:29:34 AM »
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wah kya hoob ashaar hain . khayaalon ka khubsurat aur asarandaaz alfaz mein izhaar kiya ha. In ashaar ka jawab nahin . Bahut bahut mubarakbad.

munsif to hazaroan hain maujood meri gali,
hua nahin magar ek bhi faisla merey haq main,

bann sakaa na woh wafadar kabhi watan ka,
na maloom kya kami thee yahan key namak main,

anaa'to itni basi hai insaan main aaj,
ho jaata hai qatl khyaaloan key farq main,
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