mera dushman mere apne ghar mein tha.--mazHur

by mazHur on October 29, 2014, 07:38:31 PM
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Rozan e diwaar mein na der mein tha
mera dushman mere apne ghar mein tha.

Mar ke bhi hum to nibhayen ge wafa
Bus yehi sauda samaya sur mein tha.

Ye sila mehmaanoan ne mujh ko diya
woh the qaabiz ghar pe aur baher mein tha

Apne hee baazu na jab apne rehay
Apne apne  khauf  mein tha der mein tha

woh hunar jo kar gaya unko amar
meer o ghalib me bhi tha Mazhur mein tha.
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«Reply #1 on: October 29, 2014, 08:02:27 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 29, 2014, 08:34:30 PM »
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Rozan e diwaar mein na der mein tha
mera dushman mere apne ghar mein tha.

Mar ke bhi hum to nibhayen ge wafa
Bus yehi sauda samaya sur mein tha.

Ye sila mehmaanoan ne mujh ko diya
woh the qaabiz ghar pe aur baher mein tha

Apne hee baazu na jab apne rehay
Apne apne  khauf  mein tha der mein tha

woh hunar jo kar gaya unko amar
meer o ghalib me bhi tha Mazhur mein tha.


So nice.
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«Reply #3 on: October 30, 2014, 12:39:17 AM »
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 Applause Applause  waah wah bahut khoob
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«Reply #4 on: October 30, 2014, 11:52:56 AM »
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bohut khub waaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh
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«Reply #5 on: November 01, 2014, 07:27:28 PM »
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kaafi gehrai mein likhte hai aap......bahut khoob....daad kabul krein
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«Reply #6 on: November 03, 2014, 06:49:48 PM »
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woh hunar jo kar gaya unko amar
meer o ghalib me bhi tha Mazhur mein tha.

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob kya kehne Mazhur saheb, bahut khoob, Iss sher pe Rau jo ki abhi due rahega.
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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2014, 10:02:36 PM »
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Rau given.
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