mera masaafat[safar],,,,ghazal,,,jeetjainam saini

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mera masaafat hee meri azaab raha,
sawaalo,n main gheeri kitaab raha,

dhoond te  rahe  naqsh e paa uske,
par sabaa se nishaa,n mittaa raha,

hasrat e parwaaz dil main hi rahi,
ek ek kar har  sapna toot ta raha,

baadaa ke rind  main eyse dube ke,
apna dil e aashiaana loot ta raha,

uske lout  aane kee  tawakko main,
din ba din har lamha gujarta raha,

kis kee yaad hai jo dil tadap karke,
qafas e tanhai main bikharta raha,

jo akser intezaar main jeet ke rahe,
woh bazm e ahal e hunar ujadta raha,
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«Reply #1 on: February 22, 2015, 09:55:51 AM »
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mera masaafat hee meri azaab raha,
sawaalo,n main gheeri kitaab raha,

dhoond te  rahe  naqsh e paa uske,
par sabaa se nishaa,n mittaa raha,

hasrat e parwaaz dil main hi rahi,
ek ek kar har  sapna toot ta raha,

baadaa ke rind  main eyse dube ke,
apna dil e aashiaana loot ta raha,

uske lout  aane kee  tawakko main,
din ba din har lamha gujarta raha,

kis kee yaad hai jo dil tadap karke,
qafas e tanhai main bikharta raha,

jo akser intezaar main jeet ke rahe,
woh bazm e ahal e hunar ujadta raha,





Bahut hee umdaa kalaam. Daad kubool farmaayeN
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mera masaafat hee meri azaab raha,
sawaalo,n main gheeri kitaab raha,

dhoond te  rahe  naqsh e paa uske,
par sabaa se nishaa,n mittaa raha,

hasrat e parwaaz dil main hi rahi,
ek ek kar har  sapna toot ta raha,

baadaa ke rind  main eyse dube ke,
apna dil e aashiaana loot ta raha,

uske lout  aane kee  tawakko main,
din ba din har lamha gujarta raha,

kis kee yaad hai jo dil tadap karke,
qafas e tanhai main bikharta raha,

jo akser intezaar main jeet ke rahe,
woh bazm e ahal e hunar ujadta raha,



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mera masaafat hee meri azaab raha,
sawaalo,n main gheeri kitaab raha,

dhoond te  rahe  naqsh e paa uske,
par sabaa se nishaa,n mittaa raha,

hasrat e parwaaz dil main hi rahi,
ek ek kar har  sapna toot ta raha,

baadaa ke rind  main eyse dube ke,
apna dil e aashiaana loot ta raha,

uske lout  aane kee  tawakko main,
din ba din har lamha gujarta raha,

kis kee yaad hai jo dil tadap karke,
qafas e tanhai main bikharta raha,

jo akser intezaar main jeet ke rahe,
woh bazm e ahal e hunar ujadta raha,



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