Mera mizaaz chodiye/ ......................PWFs

by pankajwfs on June 08, 2012, 01:59:21 PM
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Mera mizaaz chodiye aap apni bataeeye,
Hum to hain sukooN me apni sunaaeeye.

Muflishee ke mare dam ghute agar,
Dariyadili ki baateiN kar dil bahlaaeeye.

Koft na kariye gair ki kamyaabi ka,
Khud ko uncha uthane ki jugat lagaeeye.

Khusee me gar bitaaey hain char din kabhi,
GamoN ke char din bhi hans kar bitaaeeye.

Mana ki lambi bahut hai gamoN ki ye raat,
Kyun na ilm ki roshni ki shamma jalaeeye.

Hain penchide bahut hi paintare Zamaane ke,
Khud ki penchidagi ko awaal suljhaeeye.

Kab talak nigaah pheroge uljhanoN se yun.
Do chaar ho ke inse har dar mitaaeeye.

Behaktey kadmoN se na koi raah pa sake.
Behaktee raah par bahosh chal kar dikhaaeeye.

GardishoN me phansi ho gar 'pankaj' kisti teri,
MounzoN ke mukaddar pe chal manzil ko paaeeye.

(PWFS - 08/06/2012)
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«Reply #1 on: June 08, 2012, 02:57:53 PM »
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Pankaj ji vaise to har sher nageenaa hai par teesraa sher badaa maaneekhez hai main dil se daad deta hoon aapkee is badee kaamyaab peshkash par aur ek rau bhee
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«Reply #4 on: June 08, 2012, 04:16:18 PM »
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Waah Pankaj ji waah...!!! mazaa aa gayaa aapki ye peshkash padh ke.. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne... !!! Ek dum zabardasttttt....!!!

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«Reply #5 on: June 08, 2012, 04:35:28 PM »
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Bahut khoob Pankaj jee
Aap kisi parichay ke mohtaaj nahee. aapki ghajlon ki gahraaiyan dekhne laayak hai.
bas yun hi likhte rahiye...
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«Reply #6 on: June 08, 2012, 05:57:06 PM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on June 08, 2012, 01:59:21 PM
Mera mizaaz chodiye aap apni bataeeye,
Hum to hain sukooN me apni sunaaeeye.

Muflishee ke mare dam ghute agar,
Dariyadili ki baateiN kar dil bahlaaeeye.

Koft na kariye gair ki kamyaabi ka,
Khud ko uncha uthane ki jugat lagaeeye.

Khusee me gar bitaaey hain char din kabhi,
GamoN ke char din bhi hans kar bitaaeeye.

Mana ki lambi bahut hai gamoN ki ye raat,
Kyun na ilm ki roshni ki shamma jalaeeye.

Hain penchide bahut hi paintare Zamaane ke,
Khud ki penchidagi ko awaal suljhaeeye.

Kab talak nigaah pheroge uljhanoN se yun.
Do chaar ho ke inse har dar mitaaeeye.

Behaktey kadmoN se na koi raah pa sake.
Behaktee raah par bahosh chal kar dikhaaeeye.

GardishoN me phansi ho gar 'pankaj' kisti teri,
MounzoN ke mukaddar pe chal manzil ko paaeeye.

(PWFS - 08/06/2012)

verii naaice one rau
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«Reply #7 on: June 08, 2012, 05:58:16 PM »
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koft na karen gair ki kamiyabi ka
khud ko uncha uthane ki jugat ladayie.....

mana k lambi boht hai gamoon ki ye raat
kun na ilm ki roshni ki smama jalayen


kya baat hai pankaj g..... boht umdaa  
hazaroon daad pankaj ji
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2012, 03:41:26 AM »
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bahut bahut khub pankajji

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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2012, 05:29:43 AM »
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Quote from: pankajwfs on June 08, 2012, 01:59:21 PM
Mera mizaaz chodiye aap apni bataeeye,
Hum to hain sukooN me apni sunaaeeye.

Muflishee ke mare dam ghute agar,
Dariyadili ki baateiN kar dil bahlaaeeye.

Koft na kariye gair ki kamyaabi ka,
Khud ko uncha uthane ki jugat lagaeeye.

Khusee me gar bitaaey hain char din kabhi,
GamoN ke char din bhi hans kar bitaaeeye.

Mana ki lambi bahut hai gamoN ki ye raat,
Kyun na ilm ki roshni ki shamma jalaeeye.

Hain penchide bahut hi paintare Zamaane ke,
Khud ki penchidagi ko awaal suljhaeeye.

Kab talak nigaah pheroge uljhanoN se yun.
Do chaar ho ke inse har dar mitaaeeye.

Behaktey kadmoN se na koi raah pa sake.
Behaktee raah par bahosh chal kar dikhaaeeye.

GardishoN me phansi ho gar 'pankaj' kisti teri,
MounzoN ke mukaddar pe chal manzil ko paaeeye.

(PWFS - 08/06/2012)
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         KYA BATAAON MERA MIZAAJ ACHA NAHIN JA RIYAA HAI BHAI
         GHATAA HUA BUSINESS MEIN PAISA NAHIN AA RIYA HAI BHAI
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«Reply #10 on: June 09, 2012, 05:47:22 AM »
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baht khoob Pankaj sahab
daad kubul karen
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ume lagta hai last ke 5 aur 4 no ke asharon ka 2nd line aur behtar ho skta tha--
'kyun' ke badle koi usra word aur
'awaal suljhaie' ke bdle bhi kuch dusre tareeke se likh skte the--

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2012, 07:03:36 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 08, 2012, 02:57:53 PM
Pankaj ji vaise to har sher nageenaa hai par teesraa sher badaa maaneekhez hai main dil se daad deta hoon aapkee is badee kaamyaab peshkash par aur ek rau bhee
Bahut bahut sukriya Saini sir Is qalaam ko pasand karne ke liye.
Aur haounslaafzai aur rau ke liye bhi....
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«Reply #12 on: June 09, 2012, 07:10:05 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB PANKAJ JEE.
UMDA GHAZAL KE LIYE DAAD AUR RAU KUBOOL KIJIYE
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Quote from: BhupinderDHILLON on June 08, 2012, 03:00:06 PM
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Sukriya bhupindar ji ......
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«Reply #14 on: June 09, 2012, 11:26:10 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khooob!!!

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