mera muqaddar thahra...ghazal...jeet jainam

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sabhi koshish e naqaam hui par woh na thahra.
bandhan ka tootna hi mera muqaddar thahra.

main woh jheel tha jo ruka raha ek jageh.
woh hawaa ke jhonke ki tareh aaya pal bhar thahra.

takdeer mari aksar imtehaan lati rahi har bar.
jo kabhi mera humraaz tha aaj apna na thahra.

bohut seech kar dekha apni banjar hui zamee,n ko.
woh barasta hua badal aaya to jaroor pal bhar na thahra.

uski rangeen waffa main itne mashroof huye.
or kuch uski jaffao,n ka main aksar tawaatar thahra.

apni mohhobat main usko nahi khud ko badnaam kiya.
log thokar marne lage jabse main pather banke thahra.
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«Reply #1 on: October 02, 2014, 08:33:37 PM »
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bahut umdah Jeet Saib.
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«Reply #2 on: October 02, 2014, 08:43:05 PM »
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sabhi koshish e naqaam hui par woh na thahra.
bandhan ka tootna hi mera muqaddar thahra.

main woh jheel tha jo ruka raha ek jageh.
woh hawaa ke jhonke ki tareh aaya pal bhar thahra.

takdeer mari aksar imtehaan lati rahi har bar.
jo kabhi mera humraaz tha aaj apna na thahra.

bohut seech kar dekha apni banjar hui zamee,n ko.
woh barasta hua badal aaya to jaroor pal bhar na thahra.

uski rangeen waffa main itne mashroof huye.
or kuch uski jaffao,n ka main aksar tawaatar thahra.

apni mohhobat main usko nahi khud ko badnaam kiya.
log thokar marne lage jabse main pather banke thahra.
Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: October 03, 2014, 02:10:20 AM »
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 Applause Applause  waah waah
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«Reply #4 on: October 03, 2014, 03:03:49 AM »
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बहुत सुंदर गजल लिखी है आपने, साथ ही विजयादशमी की मुबारकबाद
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2014, 05:52:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob jeet bhai...
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«Reply #6 on: October 03, 2014, 07:24:26 AM »
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shukriya surinder sir ji
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Wah Wah.
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bohat shukriya raji ji
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