*Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*:Ghazals

malli

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मुझे भी उस कहानी का कोई किरदार रहने दो
महज़ उन चार पन्नो में मेरा संसार रहने दो

तराशो गैरों को इतना के कोह-इ-नूर बन जाएँ
हूँ पत्थर मामूली सा मैं, मुझे बेकार रहने दो

मुझे तुम टूट के चाहो तुम्हे मैं टूट के चाहूँ
मगर जिस्मों का जानेमन ये कार-ओ-बार रहने दो

हजारों चाहने वाले तुम्हे नज़रों में भर लेंगे
मेरी गागर ये खाली ही ज़रा सरकार रहने दो

मैं अजम-ऐ-आस बन कर तेरी खातिर टूटता जाऊँ
गिरा कर फिर निगाहों से वोही सौ बार रहने दो

बढाओ हाथ के हम डूब कर भी पार लग जाएँ
भले झूठे ही लेकिन वस्ल के आसार रहने दो


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riyaz106

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #1 on: January 31, 2010, 03:25:58 AM »

Behad behad khobsurat ghazal likhi hai Mallika ji. Padhkar dil mehzuz ho gaya. Aapke likhne ka ek alag hi andaaz hai. I Congrat you.


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malli

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #2 on: January 31, 2010, 03:27:59 AM »

Quote from: riyaz106 on January 31, 2010, 03:25:58 AM

Behad behad khobsurat ghazal likhi hai Mallika ji. Padhkar dil mehzuz ho gaya. Aapke likhne ka ek alag hi andaaz hai. I Congrat you.

What a kind appreciation .... Thank you very very much riyaz ji.


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thinkhattk

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #3 on: January 31, 2010, 09:31:06 AM »

bahot hi umda likha he malli ji........

keep posting.....


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madhuwesh

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2010, 09:39:30 AM »

Too good Malli ji ,very touching and mindblowing creation.


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daljeet_faqeer

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2010, 01:06:27 PM »

Bahut hi umda ghazal likhi hai. Clapping Smiley


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Rishi Agarwal

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2010, 03:11:49 PM »

Kya Bat hai malli Ji Nice Creation Applause


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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #7 on: February 01, 2010, 04:06:49 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!


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deepika_divya

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #8 on: February 01, 2010, 04:16:22 PM »

Wonderful Creation... Bahoot Bahoot Khooob Roja !


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malli

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2010, 01:43:34 PM »

Thank you very very much ttk, madhuwesh ji, Faqeer ji,
@Kaash ji, Rishi ji, Khwaish bhaiya and dear divya..


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Talat

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #10 on: February 17, 2010, 04:07:27 PM »

Very beautiful Ghazal dear....


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malli

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2010, 02:29:13 PM »

Quote from: Shihab on February 17, 2010, 01:58:11 PM

Wah Wah Pyari Behna Kya Kehne
Bahut Achhey Se Lafzon Ko Jorha Hai.
Kuch Baaten To Dil Ko Chhu Gayi...
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ghazal Hai

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Thank you bhai Majid..


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malli

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #12 on: February 21, 2010, 02:29:49 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on February 17, 2010, 04:07:27 PM

Very beautiful Ghazal dear....

Thank you dear.. Yu hi saat dete rehna


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malli

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #13 on: February 21, 2010, 02:39:22 PM »

Aagman apna likha deta hai
Prem sab niyam sikha deta hai..

Bhed sab apne paraye ka hai
Swarth dunia ko dikha deta hai

Kya bhalayi hai kya burayi hai
Gyaan hi iska pata deta hai

Aasuwon se hi dil ne paya tha
Aasuwon se hi vida deta hai..

Kaisi teri patang-baaji hai
Kaat kar dor gira deta hai

Kyu sharan di usse, bitaya kyu?
Aur kyu aaj uta deta hai ?

Inko acchi tarah sambal ke rakh, yaara
Apne moti, kyu luta deta hai ?

Hum tujhe bataye kya,
Wo toh her Mehfil mein ruswa kar deta hai

Bhed = differences


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kameeney

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Re: *Mera Sansaar Rehne Do*

«Reply #14 on: February 22, 2010, 08:43:18 PM »

kya kahna malli ji bahut badia ...pathar mamuli sa main,...mujhe bekar rahne do.... Applause


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