" Mere Aage ":Ghazals

Roja

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Sarvesh Rastogi ji ka likha ek gazal "Teri Muskaan Ke Aage" pada maine. Bahut accha laga... Maine kuch aisa hi 2/3 gazal likha hai. Shayad Yo pe kahi post bi ki hu. Again I am posting here for yr valuable comment.

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दुःख-दर्द जो दीनों का है ढोता मेरे आगे
दीनों का मसीहा वोही होता मेरे आगे !

साहस से ही हेर काम हो साहस नहीं छोडो,
क्या काम हो रोने से जो रोता मेरे आगे !

तू अमरों की संतान है हैवान नहीं है,
फिर दीन बना ज़ुल्म क्यों ढोता मेरे आगे !

फल मिलता वही और न मिलता कोई,
जीवन में जो इंसान है बोता मेरे आगे !

कभी पूरी नहीं आस हो उसकी, "रोजा",
इनसान लगा आस जो सोता मेरे आगे


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deepika_divya

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2009, 06:14:58 AM »

Wow Roja bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dear.. bahoot khoob Likha hai


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Pooja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2009, 06:18:25 AM »

bahoot khoob Roja!!!


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Talat

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2009, 08:09:03 AM »

Bohot Khoob Roja dear Applause


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aaina

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2009, 10:31:15 AM »

nice ghazal roja keep it up


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madhuwesh

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2009, 10:38:39 AM »

Very beatiful gazal Roja ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft


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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2009, 03:50:35 PM »

Quote from: Sophi on July 09, 2009, 06:14:58 AM

Wow Roja bahoot Bahoot Khoob Dear.. bahoot khoob Likha hai

Thanks Divya... You never forget to appreciate


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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2009, 03:52:36 PM »

Quote from: Pooja on July 09, 2009, 06:18:25 AM

bahoot khoob Roja!!!

Thank you sweet pooja di


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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2009, 03:53:25 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on July 09, 2009, 08:09:03 AM

Bohot Khoob Roja dear Applause

Shukriya my dear Talat...


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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2009, 03:55:03 PM »

Quote from: aaina on July 09, 2009, 10:31:15 AM

nice ghazal roja keep it up

Thanks Aslam ji

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 09, 2009, 10:38:39 AM

Very beatiful gazal Roja ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft

Thank you very much dear Madhu

Quote from: @kaash on July 09, 2009, 02:02:49 PM

bahot achi ghazal likhi hai aapne Roja ji
hamesha ki tarah behad ache ehsaas
awesome poem

Shukriya @kaash ji


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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2009, 04:14:40 PM »

Insaan ko insaan hai khata mere aage
Insaan ko insaan mitata mere aage

Insaan bhale pyar nibhaye na nibhaye
Insaan magar vair nibhata mere aage

Rang saat hi girgit ko badalte dekha,
Insaan kayii rang badalta mere aage

Shaitan kiya karta kahan zulm hai utna,
Insaan kiya karta hai jitna mere aage


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shayara

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2009, 04:17:31 PM »

Roja Ji,

Bohot khoob


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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #12 on: July 10, 2009, 04:11:22 AM »

Quote from: Shayara on July 09, 2009, 04:17:31 PM

Roja Ji,

Bohot khoob

Thanks for reading me Shayara ji


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SARVESH RASTOGI

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2009, 09:55:21 AM »

Bahut khoob Roja Ji bahut khoob
Bhasha aur shally per aapka zabardast control hai aur jazwaaton ka to kya kahiye. Excelleng command over poetry. Contragulations.

Sabse uper mera naam likh kar aapne mujhe jo izzat bakshi hai main uska shukraguzar hun. Tah-e-dil se shukriya Roja Ji.
Aapki is "Mere Aage" ghazal per do sher aapke liye aapki hi tarj per --

KYA SHER KAHE AAPNE ROJA "MERE AAGE"
KUCHH AUR BHI PUKHTA HUE EHSAAS KE DHAGE
LIKHTI RAHI ITNA HI BULANDI SE AGAR TUM
SHAYAR NA KAHEGA KOI KHUD KO TERE AAGE

All the Best

SARVESH RASTOGI


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madhuwesh

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #14 on: July 10, 2009, 10:41:43 AM »

Wah bahut khoob Sarvesh ji,excellent. Applause


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