" Mere Aage " -Panna 2:Ghazals

SARVESH RASTOGI

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«Reply #15 on: July 10, 2009, 11:17:45 AM »

Quote from: madhuwesh on July 10, 2009, 10:41:43 AM

Wah bahut khoob Sarvesh ji,excellent. Applause

Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
SARVESH RASTOGI


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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #16 on: July 12, 2009, 10:38:02 AM »

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Bahut khoob Roja Ji bahut khoob
Bhasha aur shally per aapka zabardast control hai aur jazwaaton ka to kya kahiye. Excelleng command over poetry. Contragulations.

Sabse uper mera naam likh kar aapne mujhe jo izzat bakshi hai main uska shukraguzar hun. Tah-e-dil se shukriya Roja Ji. icon_salut icon_salut
Aapki is "Mere Aage" ghazal per do sher aapke liye aapki hi tarj per --

KYA SHER KAHE AAPNE ROJA "MERE AAGE"
KUCHH AUR BHI PUKHTA HUE EHSAAS KE DHAGE
LIKHTI RAHI ITNA HI BULANDI SE AGAR TUM
SHAYAR NA KAHEGA KOI KHUD KO TERE AAGE

All the Best

SARVESH RASTOGI

Sarvesh Rastogi ji, bahut bahut shukriya aapne hamara likha shayari pada aur tarif ki. mujhe laga aapne bahut jyada hi tarif kardiya Giggle

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Roja

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #17 on: July 12, 2009, 10:41:26 AM »

Paani bhara, baadal hi barasta mere aage
Khali ho jo khali hai garajta mere aage

Dharti hai kayi roop badalti mere aage
Aakash kayi rang badalta mere aage

Patjhar mein ujad karke jo viraan hai hota
Madhumaas mein voh bhaag mehekta mere aage

Sawan se hi dharti ko sada aas hai hoti
Sawan hi dhara-pyas bhujata mere aage

Andhere mein ujale ki ho keemat, "Roja"
Her taara andhere mein chamakta mere aage..


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_Vicky_

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Re: " Mere Aage "

«Reply #18 on: July 12, 2009, 10:43:34 AM »

Bahut Acche Roja Sis.. Lajawab Alfaaz Likhe Hain aapne.. aapki Yeh Gazal Waqai Dil ko Chooo gai..Bahut Khooooooob..

Yahan aapki Likhi Teeno Rachnaaye Padhi.. Aur har ek Gazal ek se Badh kar ek Lagi.. Good Work..!

**~** Mann **~**


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