Mere Ehsaas Par Bhee Chhaa Gayee Wahdaaniyat Dekho....Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

by Satish Shukla on June 05, 2011, 09:15:01 AM
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mere ehsaas par bhee chhaa gayee wahdaaniyat dekho
mujhe bhee aa rahee hai ab to khushboo-e-haram kuchh kuchh

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«Reply #1 on: June 05, 2011, 02:41:24 PM »
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bht khoob ji…

saanso ko gar thaam loon to dhadkane badh jaati hain
……umangon ko tharaw du fir mehfil-e-tanhai saz jaati hain
mizaaz me mere bhi badlaw aa raha hai kuch kuch !!!!!!??
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mere ehsaas par bhee chhaa gayee wahdaaniyat dekho
mujhe bhee aa rahee hai ab to khushboo-e-haram kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2011, 05:15:32 PM »
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Nirala Ji,

Bahut achchhe khayal pesh kiye hain aapne..

Jawab dene aur pasand karne ki liye bahut..bahut
shukriya...

Sath nibhate rahen...

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excellent
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Janab Tauseef,

Thanks a lot for your comment.

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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2011, 05:21:21 AM »
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Bahut achha sheir hai.Doosra bhi khoobsurat.Magar itni kanjoosi se ashaar kyuu.n release kar rahe hai.n .Tishnagi barhti jaa rahi ahi.  Hasan
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2011, 09:26:58 AM »
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Janab Satish Shukla Saheb!

Aapka ye sher bhi lajawab hai. Aap se ye darkhwast hai k apni ghazal ke saare ashaar aiksaath post kijiye to paRhne meiN ziyaadah luft aaye. Waise apni is khoobsurat kaawish par dher saare daad qubul kijiye.

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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 05, 2011, 09:15:01 AM


mere ehsaas par bhee chhaa gayee wahdaaniyat dekho
mujhe bhee aa rahee hai ab to khushboo-e-haram kuchh kuchh

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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2011, 03:30:49 PM »
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Hasan Sahab,

She'r pasand karne aur jawab dene ka
bahut bahut shukriya.

Kisee ne kaha hai apne saamaan ki khud
hifaazat karo, so wahi kar raha hooN. Isee
site par ek sahab ne doosari site se meri ghazal
copy karke, is site par pooree ghazal post kar dee
aur mera takhallus nikal kar apna naam bhi likh diya.
isliye majbooran aaisa karna pada hai.

Waise main un sahab ka bahut shukragujaar hoon jinhone
itne saate logon se milaaya.

Is ghazal ke sabhee she'r post kar chukla hoon is site
par kewal Maqta chhodkar, tishnagi bade to thoda mashq
karenge to mil jayenge.

Ek She' isee pashmazar men aapki nazr hai..

"kal aNdheroN meN log lutate the
 aaj lutane lage ujaaloN meN"

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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2011, 03:43:18 PM »
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Ansari Sahab,

Sabse pahle to jawab dene aur she'r pasand
karne ka bahut bahut shukriya.

Aapka huqm sar aankhon par, kuchh kaarano se aaisa
naheen kar saka. Is se pahel wali post(reply) men
(F. H. Siddiqui) Hasan Sahab ko khulaasa bhi kiya
hai ummeed hai muaaf karenge.

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Quote from: Satish Shukla on June 05, 2011, 09:15:01 AM


mere ehsaas par bhee chhaa gayee wahdaaniyat dekho
mujhe bhee aa rahee hai ab to khushboo-e-haram kuchh kuchh

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

main bhi yahi darkhawast karta hoon jo waquif sahab ne kaha hai

aap janaab ek chupe rustam nazar aa rahe hain. zara apne kalaam se poori tarh chilman to hataiye huzoor.
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Bechain Sahab,

Jaldi hi poori ghazal ek saath padhane ko mil
jayegi. Jawab dene ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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