Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua................................Aqsh

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Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahela sa is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua
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«Reply #1 on: November 25, 2013, 12:49:07 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob aqsh ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2013, 01:06:59 PM »
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Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua


waah waah kyaa baat kyaa baat dheron daad
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«Reply #3 on: November 25, 2013, 01:18:28 PM »
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kuch bhi kahna matlab aftaab ko roshnii dikhane jaise hoga , aap romantic ghazal likho or YO par halchal na ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai kya,,,,
Bahut bhaut khoob likha hai aapne,  aisa lag rha hai kisi ke jazbat alfaaz me dhal gaye or ghazal ban gayi..
Dheron daad...
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«Reply #4 on: November 25, 2013, 01:25:09 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 25, 2013, 12:38:15 PM

Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahela sa is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua

waah waah waah waaah Aqsh ji  rom rom romantic
ye ghazal sarapa ishq hai , bohut hi umda jazbaat zahir kiye hain apne,, zabardast ,,, mubarakbaad.

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«Reply #5 on: November 25, 2013, 02:12:15 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 25, 2013, 12:38:15 PM

Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahela sa is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua


wooooooooooow hangama - ziyada kuch nahi kahonga bas itna ke...
tum husn ho aur tumhari ghazlen ishq hain // tum in may ho aur ye tum may hain...
ek Rau ke saath dheron dheron dheron daaaaad khubool kijiye Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: November 25, 2013, 02:19:49 PM »
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Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

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Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #7 on: November 25, 2013, 02:27:33 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 25, 2013, 12:38:15 PM

Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahela sa is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua


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«Reply #9 on: November 25, 2013, 04:25:15 PM »
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Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqshji,
Bahut hi khoobsurat khyaalon se labrej romaani ghazal kahi hai aapne.Aapkee ye ghazal such me kahun to mere dil ko ghayal kar gayee.Is khoobsurat ghazal ki rachna ke liye aapko dili mubarakbaad dena chahta hun.
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«Reply #10 on: November 25, 2013, 04:30:39 PM »
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waaah kya kehne
ise kehte hain gazabbbbbbbb
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«Reply #11 on: November 25, 2013, 05:12:17 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 25, 2013, 12:38:15 PM

Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahela sa is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

waah waah waah waah kyaa baat hai.........

Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

bahuuut khoooob

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

oye hoye.... Nice jee nice

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Mast hai jee

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua

Bajee bahuut khoob likhaa hai aapne
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«Reply #12 on: November 25, 2013, 08:22:14 PM »
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Uffffff!!!!! How Romantic Aqsh Jii... Mera DIL aagya Iss Kalaam Pe.. Bss Kaatilaana Hai.. love4 love4 love9 love9
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«Reply #13 on: November 25, 2013, 10:11:21 PM »
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Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahele se is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

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Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

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Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

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Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

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Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

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Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua

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Waah waah waah aqsh jee ab aise hi thodi apka naam Romance Queen rakh diya..tongue3

Bahut hi khoob..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2013, 11:01:55 PM »
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Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

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