Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua................................Aqsh

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«Reply #15 on: November 26, 2013, 01:32:20 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 25, 2013, 12:38:15 PM

Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahela sa is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua



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«Reply #16 on: November 26, 2013, 02:03:50 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on November 25, 2013, 12:38:15 PM

Dil meiN unke hum apna muqaam karte hain
Pahela sa is pyaar ko pahela salaam karte hain

Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua


Waah !!! Khoobsurat qalaam !!! Sabhi aashaar sundar !!! Dheron daad Aqsh ji !!!
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«Reply #17 on: November 26, 2013, 01:52:09 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on November 25, 2013, 12:49:07 PM
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bahut bahut khoob aqsh ji... Usual Smile Usual Smile
Thank you sooooooooooo much Touhid ji...
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«Reply #18 on: November 26, 2013, 01:53:21 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on November 25, 2013, 01:06:59 PM
Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua


waah waah kyaa baat kyaa baat dheron daad
Thank you soooooooooooo much Saini sir...
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«Reply #19 on: November 26, 2013, 01:53:57 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on November 25, 2013, 01:18:28 PM
kuch bhi kahna matlab aftaab ko roshnii dikhane jaise hoga , aap romantic ghazal likho or YO par halchal na ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai kya,,,,
Bahut bhaut khoob likha hai aapne,  aisa lag rha hai kisi ke jazbat alfaaz me dhal gaye or ghazal ban gayi..
Dheron daad...
Applause Applause Applause
Thnxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt Bishwajeet ji...
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«Reply #20 on: November 26, 2013, 01:54:35 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on November 25, 2013, 01:25:09 PM
waah waah waah waaah Aqsh ji  rom rom romantic
ye ghazal sarapa ishq hai , bohut hi umda jazbaat zahir kiye hain apne,, zabardast ,,, mubarakbaad.

ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause
Thnxxxxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttttt Sahal...
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«Reply #21 on: November 26, 2013, 01:55:23 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on November 25, 2013, 02:12:15 PM
wooooooooooow hangama - ziyada kuch nahi kahonga bas itna ke...
tum husn ho aur tumhari ghazlen ishq hain // tum in may ho aur ye tum may hain...
ek Rau ke saath dheron dheron dheron daaaaad khubool kijiye Usual Smile
Thank you sooooooooooo much Iqtedar ji... aur Rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #22 on: November 26, 2013, 01:56:08 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on November 25, 2013, 02:19:49 PM
Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Bahut Khub Behna Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

Shihab
Thnxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt Shihab ji....
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«Reply #23 on: November 26, 2013, 01:56:40 PM »
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Quote from: qalb on November 25, 2013, 02:27:33 PM
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Bahut bahut shukriya Qalb ji...
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«Reply #24 on: November 26, 2013, 01:59:02 PM »
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Quote from: Risk on November 25, 2013, 04:13:49 PM
BOHAT BADIYA
Thnxxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttt Risk ji...
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«Reply #25 on: November 26, 2013, 01:59:42 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on November 25, 2013, 04:25:15 PM
Zara sa jo mere, aanchal ka dhalna hua
Chhupe hue armanoN ka, machalna hua

Nihaarte rahe woh phir, kuch aise andaaz se
Jazbaat ka hamare phir na, sambhalna hua

Dheere dheere jitna, woh qareeb aate gaye
Dhadkane tez hui, rooh ka jaise nikalna hua

Besaakhta laboN par, muskurahat si fail gayi
Barsaat meiN bhi, jismoN ka pighalna hua

Rawaan saanseiN bhi ab, meri thamne lagi
Haya se chehre ki, rangat ka badalna hua

Us ek pal ka aalam, na poocho “Aqsh” se
Mere hi dil ka, mere haathoN se fisalna hua
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqshji,
Bahut hi khoobsurat khyaalon se labrej romaani ghazal kahi hai aapne.Aapkee ye ghazal such me kahun to mere dil ko ghayal kar gayee.Is khoobsurat ghazal ki rachna ke liye aapko dili mubarakbaad dena chahta hun.

Sudhir ji meri ghazal ko itna pasand karne ka bahut bahut bahut shukriya...
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Quote from: sarfira on November 25, 2013, 04:30:39 PM
waaah kya kehne
ise kehte hain gazabbbbbbbb
wowwwwwwww
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jhakashhhhhhhh
lajawaaabbbb
Bahut bahut bahut shukriya Sarfira ji....
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on November 25, 2013, 05:12:17 PM

Thank you sooooooooooooo much Masooom...
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«Reply #28 on: November 26, 2013, 02:01:42 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on November 25, 2013, 08:22:14 PM
Uffffff!!!!! How Romantic Aqsh Jii... Mera DIL aagya Iss Kalaam Pe.. Bss Kaatilaana Hai.. love4 love4 love9 love9
thank you soooooooooooo much Firdaus...
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Quote from: nashwani on November 25, 2013, 10:11:21 PM

Waah waah waah aqsh jee ab aise hi thodi apka naam Romance Queen rakh diya..tongue3

Bahut hi khoob..happy9
thnxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttttttttt Ashwani... bahut khoobsurat naam hai thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx..
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