MEREE AANKHON MEN ASHK HOTE HAIN ..........................................SAINI

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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2013, 07:53:43 PM »
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हमेशा की तरह बहुत ही खूब कहा आपने और खास तौर से इस शेर पर तो ढेरों दाद

ज़िन्दगी बोझ  है नहीं  यारों ।
हम गुनाहों का बोझ  ढ़ोते हैं ॥

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«Reply #18 on: April 19, 2013, 12:33:50 AM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 17, 2013, 02:50:15 PM
Saaree  dunyaa  ke  log sote haiN.
Meree  aankhoN meN ashk hote haiN.

Mujhko  tab  teree yaad aatee hai.
Naakhudaa kashtee jab dubote haiN.

Jo  hansaate  tamaam   dunyaa  ko.
Vo  akele  meN   khoob  rote haiN.

Ye   bhulaawaa  hai  aam logoN ko.
Peene   se  gham n door hote haiN.

Zindagee bojh  hai  naheeN yaaroN.
Ham gunaahoN  kaa bojh dhote haiN.

Bolte h aiN   vahee  jo  bulwaaye.
Waqt  ke   ham  tamaam  tote haiN.

Aaj ‘saini’  khadaa  akelaa kyooN.
Saath  uske  to  log   hote  haiN.

Dr.Surendra Saini


सारी  दुन्या के लोग सोते हैं ।
मेरी  आँखों में अश्क होते हैं ॥

मुझको तब तेरी याद आती है ।
नाख़ुदा  कश्ती  जब डुबोते हैं ॥

जो  हंसाते तमाम दुन्या को ।
वो   अकेले में खूब रोते हैं ॥

ये भुलावा है आम लोगों का ।
पीने से ग़म न  दूर होते हैं ॥

ज़िन्दगी बोझ  है नहीं  यारों ।
हम गुनाहों का बोझ  ढ़ोते हैं ॥

बोलते  हैं  वही जो बुलवाये ।
वक़्त के हम तमाम तोते हैं ॥

आज'सैनी'खडा अकेला क्यूँ ।
साथ उसके तो लोग होते हैं ॥


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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 17, 2013, 02:50:15 PM
Saaree  dunyaa  ke  log sote haiN.
Meree  aankhoN meN ashk hote haiN.

Mujhko  tab  teree yaad aatee hai.
Naakhudaa kashtee jab dubote haiN.

Jo  hansaate  tamaam   dunyaa  ko.
Vo  akele  meN   khoob  rote haiN.

Ye   bhulaawaa  hai  aam logoN ko.
Peene   se  gham n door hote haiN.

Zindagee bojh  hai  naheeN yaaroN.
Ham gunaahoN  kaa bojh dhote haiN.

Bolte h aiN   vahee  jo  bulwaaye.
Waqt  ke   ham  tamaam  tote haiN.

Aaj ‘saini’  khadaa  akelaa kyooN.
Saath  uske  to  log   hote  haiN.

Dr.Surendra Saini


सारी  दुन्या के लोग सोते हैं ।
मेरी  आँखों में अश्क होते हैं ॥

मुझको तब तेरी याद आती है ।
नाख़ुदा  कश्ती  जब डुबोते हैं ॥

जो  हंसाते तमाम दुन्या को ।
वो   अकेले में खूब रोते हैं ॥

ये भुलावा है आम लोगों का ।
पीने से ग़म न  दूर होते हैं ॥

ज़िन्दगी बोझ  है नहीं  यारों ।
हम गुनाहों का बोझ  ढ़ोते हैं ॥

बोलते  हैं  वही जो बुलवाये ।
वक़्त के हम तमाम तोते हैं ॥

आज'सैनी'खडा अकेला क्यूँ ।
साथ उसके तो लोग होते हैं ॥


डाo सुरेन्द्र सैनी 


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Bolte haiN   vahee  jo  bulwaaye.
Waqt  ke   ham  tamaam  tote haiN.

बोलते  हैं  वही जो बुलवाये ।
वक़्त के हम तमाम तोते हैं ॥

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