meri aadat badal lo tum

by poonam singh on October 25, 2010, 06:49:38 AM
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jaha tak ho sake mumkin meri aadat badal lo tum,
nahi hum sath chal sakte waqt rehte sambhal lo tum.

buhat mushkil hai safar me mein tumhara sath de pau,
yahi behtar hai mujhko chhod ke aage nikal lo tum.

kisi ke chhod jane se jindgi to nahi rukti,
yehi iski hiqiqat hai isi ko bus samajh lo tum.

sukun mil jayega tumko dil ki khushi bhi pa lo ge,
kabhi auro ki khathir apne hatho khud bikhar lo tum.
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«Reply #1 on: October 25, 2010, 07:43:11 AM »
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nice poem poonam ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2010, 10:16:38 AM »
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Quote from: poonam singh on October 25, 2010, 06:49:38 AM
jaha tak ho sake mumkin meri aadat badal lo tum,
nahi hum sath chal sakte waqt rehte sambhal lo tum.

buhat mushkil hai safar me mein tumhara sath de pau,
yahi behtar hai mujhko chhod ke aage nikal lo tum.

kisi ke chhod jane se jindgi to nahi rukti,
yehi iski hiqiqat hai isi ko bus samajh lo tum.

sukun mil jayega tumko dil ki khushi bhi pa lo ge,
kabhi auro ki khathir apne hatho khud bikhar lo tum.

Bahut Bahut Khoob Poonam ji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2010, 08:28:45 PM »
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Quote from: poonam singh on October 25, 2010, 06:49:38 AM
jaha tak ho sake mumkin meri aadat badal lo tum,
nahi hum sath chal sakte waqt rehte sambhal lo tum.

buhat mushkil hai safar me mein tumhara sath de pau,
yahi behtar hai mujhko chhod ke aage nikal lo tum.

kisi ke chhod jane se jindgi to nahi rukti,
yehi iski hiqiqat hai isi ko bus samajh lo tum.

sukun mil jayega tumko dil ki khushi bhi pa lo ge,
kabhi auro ki khathir apne hatho khud bikhar lo tum.
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«Reply #5 on: October 29, 2010, 04:04:17 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai poonam ji.....Daad kabul kijiye.......
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«Reply #6 on: November 01, 2010, 06:48:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aapka.
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«Reply #7 on: November 01, 2010, 07:10:49 AM »
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bahut khoob likha he poonam jii...isi tarah likhte rahiyee...dher sari daad~
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«Reply #8 on: November 03, 2010, 03:56:51 PM »
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VERY GOOD . Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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ji bhaut sunder.................. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: November 04, 2010, 11:00:06 AM »
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Bahut achhe Poonam-di..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Saath hai aaj jo, wo kal bhi rahega
Aysa koi niyam hai kaun hume kahega

Jeeye jis k sang,marenge ussi k sang
Jamaane mai aysa tou koi udhaaran nahi


Quote from: poonam singh on October 25, 2010, 06:49:38 AM
jaha tak ho sake mumkin meri aadat badal lo tum,
nahi hum sath chal sakte waqt rehte sambhal lo tum.

buhat mushkil hai safar me mein tumhara sath de pau,
yahi behtar hai mujhko chhod ke aage nikal lo tum.

kisi ke chhod jane se jindgi to nahi rukti,
yehi iski hiqiqat hai isi ko bus samajh lo tum.

sukun mil jayega tumko dil ki khushi bhi pa lo ge,
kabhi auro ki khathir apne hatho khud bikhar lo tum.
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