meri aankh mein

by suman59 on September 15, 2012, 11:19:45 PM
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jaise sapnon ka maine sajaya tha ghar
vo hii chota sa ghar hai meri aankh mein

kauf ki ret aankhon mein aisii giri
ek fasadon ka darr hai meri aankh mein

nek lagte hai sab milne wale mere
yeb hai ya hunar hai meri aankh mein

nachta, bhagta daudta, ghumta
ek tithlii ka per hai meri aankh mein

dhup peekar bi jo chav deta raha,
vo hii bhuda shajhar hai meri aankh mein

meri nazron mein ab bi hai bachpan mera
kacchi mitti ka ghar hai meri aankh mein


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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2012, 03:38:01 AM »
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jaise sapnon ka maine sajaya tha ghar
vo hii chota sa ghar hai meri aankh mein

kauf ki ret aankhon mein aisii giri
ek fasadon ka darr hai meri aankh mein

nek lagte hai sab milne wale mere
yeb hai ya hunar hai meri aankh mein

nachta, bhagta daudta, ghumta
ek tithlii ka per hai meri aankh mein

dhup peekar bi jo chav deta raha,
vo hii bhuda shajhar hai meri aankh mein

meri nazron mein ab bi hai bachpan mera
kacchi mitti ka ghar hai meri aankh mein



khub
banaya hai jo ghar tumne hamare liye aankh mei.n
gujarete kytu nahi usme do pal hamare saath mei.n
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2012, 06:10:16 AM »
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good one
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2012, 05:03:03 PM »
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jaise sapnon ka maine sajaya tha ghar
vo hii chota sa ghar hai meri aankh mein

kauf ki ret aankhon mein aisii giri
ek fasadon ka darr hai meri aankh mein

nek lagte hai sab milne wale mere
yeb hai ya hunar hai meri aankh mein

nachta, bhagta daudta, ghumta
ek tithlii ka per hai meri aankh mein

dhup peekar bi jo chav deta raha,
vo hii bhuda shajhar hai meri aankh mein

meri nazron mein ab bi hai bachpan mera
kacchi mitti ka ghar hai meri aankh mein




Sabhee sher achchhey hain, par aakhiree sher to laajawaab hai!
"meri nazron mein ab bi hai bachpan mera
kacchi mitti ka ghar hai meri aankh mein" Waah, kyaa baat hai!
Lagtaa hai aapney pooree gazal post nahin kee hai; Matley aur Maqtey key sher aapney chhupaa liye hain!
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2012, 05:46:49 PM »
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jaise sapnon ka maine sajaya tha ghar
vo hii chota sa ghar hai meri aankh mein

kauf ki ret aankhon mein aisii giri
ek fasadon ka darr hai meri aankh mein

nek lagte hai sab milne wale mere
yeb hai ya hunar hai meri aankh mein

nachta, bhagta daudta, ghumta
ek tithlii ka per hai meri aankh mein

dhup peekar bi jo chav deta raha,
vo hii bhuda shajhar hai meri aankh mein

meri nazron mein ab bi hai bachpan mera
kacchi mitti ka ghar hai meri aankh mein





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«Reply #5 on: September 17, 2012, 10:30:05 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: September 19, 2012, 04:57:55 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: September 21, 2012, 02:02:28 PM »
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khub
banaya hai jo ghar tumne hamare liye aankh mei.n
gujarete kytu nahi usme do pal hamare saath mei.n

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«Reply #8 on: September 21, 2012, 02:02:54 PM »
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good one

thanks mkv jee
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«Reply #9 on: September 21, 2012, 02:06:53 PM »
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Sabhee sher achchhey hain, par aakhiree sher to laajawaab hai!
"meri nazron mein ab bi hai bachpan mera
kacchi mitti ka ghar hai meri aankh mein" Waah, kyaa baat hai!
Lagtaa hai aapney pooree gazal post nahin kee hai; Matley aur Maqtey key sher aapney chhupaa liye hain!


shukriya abdbundeli jee. hmm

Her kadam per naya hadhisa bhich gaya
Hadhison ka safar hai meri aankhon mein...!!
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«Reply #10 on: September 21, 2012, 02:07:38 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: September 21, 2012, 02:10:04 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: September 21, 2012, 02:10:40 PM »
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