Meri Haq me Maut hi Maang Le ( Qadeertoopchi )

by qadeer_junaid on January 18, 2012, 12:57:28 PM
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Yaarane e Bazm Meri adna si Ghazal Ap hazraat ke hawale Umid hai Apni Ara se nawazenge  ,,,


Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de

yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de

Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de

Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de

Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de

Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de

Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de

Qadeertoopchi
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«Reply #1 on: January 18, 2012, 01:52:00 PM »
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Yaarane e Bazm Meri adna si Ghazal Ap hazraat ke hawale Umid hai Apni Ara se nawazenge  ,,,


Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de

yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de

Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de

Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de

Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de

Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de

Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de

Qadeertoopchi

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Qadeer Bhai...Har lafz behtereen, Sachai Ka Aaena Hai..

Kya kahoon..Lafzon Mein Jaan Phoonkna Isse Kehte Hai..

Bahut Ache Mere Bhai
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«Reply #2 on: January 18, 2012, 02:39:50 PM »
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Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Umda Ghazal Pesh Ki hai .. Bahoot Lajawaab peshkash !!


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«Reply #3 on: January 18, 2012, 04:09:45 PM »
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Waah bhai Qadeer saheb.Behad khubsurat,haseen ghazal
ata ki hai.Bahut khubsurat aur rythmic albatta mere
khayal se mushkil bahr hai.Lekin iss bahr mein zyada
tar bahut khubsurat ghazlein milti hain.Aap ko iss
kaamyaab ghazal ke liye bahut bahut mubarakbaad. Hasan
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«Reply #4 on: January 18, 2012, 06:27:49 PM »
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Yaarane e Bazm Meri adna si Ghazal Ap hazraat ke hawale Umid hai Apni Ara se nawazenge  ,,,


Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de

yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de

Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de

Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de

Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de

Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de

Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de

Qadeertoopchi

Bahut ache Qadeer Sahab,
Behtareen peshkash, waqay har sher qabil-e daad raha
har sher apni wazn ka tabedaar raha.

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«Reply #5 on: January 18, 2012, 07:05:35 PM »
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lajawaab ghazal Qadeer sahab--
har sher apne aap me ek poori ghazal ka wajan rakhti hai--
superbb ghazal

thanz for dis Ghazal Qadeer sahab

khus rahie
muskurate rahie
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«Reply #6 on: January 18, 2012, 07:22:45 PM »
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Qadeer bhai bila shak bahot khubsurat aur murassa ghazal kahi hai aapne. Meri janib se daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #7 on: January 18, 2012, 07:34:04 PM »
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Qadeer saheb Mashaallah bahut achchi ghazal kahi hai har sher meiN mukammal pukhtagi hai dili mubarakbaad qubool farmayeN
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«Reply #8 on: January 19, 2012, 05:02:57 AM »
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qadeer bhai is behtreen klaam ke liye hazaaron daad. mubarak ho
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«Reply #9 on: January 19, 2012, 09:57:04 AM »
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Yaarane e Bazm Meri adna si Ghazal Ap hazraat ke hawale Umid hai Apni Ara se nawazenge  ,,,


Teri yaad me Jo hai jal raha , ussi deep ko tu hawa Na de
Mere haq me maut hi mang le, mujhe zindagi ki dua Na de

yun hi kaat di hai yeh zindagi, teri justuju me aye jaane jaan
Kabhi ho bhi ja tu ayaan sanam, mujhe berukhi ki saza na de

Tujhe kya Bataoo.N ke kiss tarah, liya hijraton ka ye faisla
Mujhe Rok mat tu watan mere, mera zabt aansu baha na de

Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de

Tera chahera chand se kam nahi, tujhe phir bhi koi khabar nahi
Yun nikal na ghar se tu bekhabar, tera husn bijli gira na de

Mile zakhm jo tere ishq me , unhe ab talak hun kure.dta
Yeh Hain Tere Gham ki nashaniyan, mujhe zakhm-e-dil ki dawa na de

Wohi log hai.N wohi shahr hai , wohi raaste hai.N wohi safar
Zara bach ke chalna qadeer jee , koi yaad Phir se rula na de

Qadeertoopchi


bahut khoob.behtreen ghazal hai janab qadeer sb

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«Reply #10 on: January 19, 2012, 04:12:17 PM »
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Qadeer Bhai...Har lafz behtereen, Sachai Ka Aaena Hai..

Kya kahoon..Lafzon Mein Jaan Phoonkna Isse Kehte Hai..

Bahut Ache Mere Bhai


Khawish bhai ,,aadab

Badi nawazish apki ..APko ghazal pasand aai mahenat rang laai
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«Reply #11 on: January 19, 2012, 04:13:25 PM »
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Waah Kya baat hai Bahoot Bahoot Umda Ghazal Pesh Ki hai .. Bahoot Lajawaab peshkash !!


Nysha

Nysha Sahibah ,,

Ghazal apko pasand aai jaan kar khushi howi ..Allah apko khush rakhe ..Shukriyah..

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«Reply #12 on: January 19, 2012, 04:14:51 PM »
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Waah bhai Qadeer saheb.Behad khubsurat,haseen ghazal
ata ki hai.Bahut khubsurat aur rythmic albatta mere
khayal se mushkil bahr hai.Lekin iss bahr mein zyada
tar bahut khubsurat ghazlein milti hain.Aap ko iss
kaamyaab ghazal ke liye bahut bahut mubarakbaad. Hasan

Hasan Sahab ,, Apki dad tabaruk hai ,, Baaic e sanad bhi ,, Allah apko do jahan ki barkaton se nawaze ....Apke husn-e-zaan ko salam ..
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«Reply #13 on: January 19, 2012, 04:16:39 PM »
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Bahut ache Qadeer Sahab,
Behtareen peshkash, waqay har sher qabil-e daad raha
har sher apni wazn ka tabedaar raha.

Abul Asad

Mahutram Apse sukhan Fahm Ki dad Hausla ata karti hai ...Umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan apni mahubbaton se nawazete rahenge ..Allah apko khush rakhe ..
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«Reply #14 on: January 19, 2012, 04:18:48 PM »
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lajawaab ghazal Qadeer sahab--
har sher apne aap me ek poori ghazal ka wajan rakhti hai--
superbb ghazal

thanz for dis Ghazal Qadeer sahab

khus rahie
muskurate rahie

Janab Apki dad Hausla ata karti hai ..Ap faraq dil insaan maloom parhte hain ..Badi nawazish bhai ..Shukriyah ..Allah apko khush rakhe ..
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