Meri muhabbat ko woh is tarah aazmaate hain...........................................Aqsh....

by aqsh on October 29, 2013, 01:39:12 PM
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«Reply #45 on: October 30, 2013, 09:07:08 PM »
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Waaaah .... behad khoobsurat jazbaat ka reshmi bayaan ... dheron daad Aqsh ji
thnxxxxxx a lotttttttt zarra ji...
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«Reply #46 on: October 30, 2013, 09:11:21 PM »
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kyaa kahen aapke is rachnaa ki taarif mein, sach mein dil hi loot liyaa aapne, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke, taarif ke liye shabd nahi mil rahe hain mujhe, kyaa kahun iski taarif mein, just superb....!!!

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hum chhip chhip ke aapkaa aksar humse sharmaanaa dekhte hain
zulfon ki aad  mein  chhipaake chehraa muskuraanaa dekhte hain

jaante hain hum bhi  aapko  jalan  hoti  hai  kisi aur  ko  dekh len
har baar aap  kaa  mohabbat ki aag mein  jal  jaanaa  dekhte hain



naa  ji  naa  sanam  hum  aap se nazar churaate nahi
yakeen   hai  aap  par  is  liye  aap  ko aazmaate nahi

jab  bhi  aap  hamaare   kareeb  aane kaa sochte  ho
kyaa  karen  hum,  bas  hum yahi samajh paate nahi

haalat  hi   apni  deewaano  si   ho jaati  hai  jaanaa
hum  jaan  bujh kar kabhi bhi aap ko  tadpaate nahi

aap kaa naam jahaan aayaa, woh  ghazal  kehlaayaa
ban  khud  jaati  hai, hum  koi ghazal  banaate nahi

daulat  yaa  rutbaa  kyaa  zindagi  hain aap hamaari
magar hothon se aapko yeh baat hum bataate nahi

hai mohabbat humein bepanaah aapse yeh sach hai
magar  dilki  baat aap se hum  kabhi keh paate nahi

kyaa  bataayen  hum aapko, kyaa hain hamaare liye
naa hote aap hamaare, hum kabhi muskuraate nahi

sirf  ek  naam  'Hriday'  hi  rehte  is  zamaane  mein
is  tarhaa  aap  ke  geeton ki wajah ban paate nahi

ek aap ki  mohabbat  hi  hai jeene ki wajah hamaari
naa hoti mohabbat to shaayad hum jee paate nahi


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Hriday ji sabse pahele bahut bahut bahut dil ki gehraaiyon se thnxxxxxxx ki aapne apna itna waqt mujhe diya... wallah aapka yeh jawab yeh comments mujhe itna pasand aaya ki ise mai aise hi copy paste karke rakh lee hoon...Kai baar padhi phir bhi dil nahi bhara...aapke comments ne mujhe bahut hansaaya hai... ek dam masttttttttttt hai... sach mein dil se bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxx... aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega...thnxxx once again.. happy3 happy3 happy3
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«Reply #47 on: October 30, 2013, 09:12:21 PM »
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Uff bada hi khoob andaaz hai, unke lutf uthaane ka
Mere dil meiN rehkar, mere hi dil ko tadpaate hain
Bahut Khoob Aqshji  Applause Applause
thnxxxxx ram ji...
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«Reply #48 on: October 30, 2013, 09:14:26 PM »
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Simply Marvellous Ashqji n Heart Touching wid 1rau
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thnxxxxxx a lotttttt bhupinder ji.. aur rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnxxxxxx...
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«Reply #49 on: October 30, 2013, 09:16:01 PM »
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Itna Zulm Karte Hain Kya Woh
Bade Patthar Dil Phir To Aapke Wo

Mazak Dilpe Na Len Behna


Banakar meri yaadoN ko kaagaz, aur aansoo ko siyahi
Meri aankhoN ki masti ko, apni ghazal bataate hain

Ye Wala Achcha Laga Mujhey Applause


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab
thnxxxxx a lottttttttt shihab... haan aap mazak kijiye.. mai dil par nahin leti choti choti baaton ko...thnxx for reading... duaon ke liye khaas thnxxxxxxxx Jazak Allah..
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«Reply #50 on: October 30, 2013, 09:17:18 PM »
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bahut khoob icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

Sheba ji aapke comments ke kya kehne arre hamari ghazalon par chaar chaand laga deti ho aap.. thnxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttttt sheba ji... aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega..
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«Reply #51 on: October 30, 2013, 09:17:44 PM »
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Hriday ji sabse pahele bahut bahut bahut dil ki gehraaiyon se thnxxxxxxx ki aapne apna itna waqt mujhe diya... wallah aapka yeh jawab yeh comments mujhe itna pasand aaya ki ise mai aise hi copy paste karke rakh lee hoon...Kai baar padhi phir bhi dil nahi bhara...aapke comments ne mujhe bahut hansaaya hai... ek dam masttttttttttt hai... sach mein dil se bahut bahut thnxxxxxxxx... aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega...thnxxx once again.. happy3 happy3 happy3
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«Reply #52 on: October 31, 2013, 03:27:20 PM »
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Hai muhabbat unhe bhi bas iqraar karna baaki hai
Meri yaadoN se apne dil ko beqaraar karna baaki hai


Meri muhabbat ko woh, is tarah aazmaate hain
Khwaabon meiN bhi mujhse, nazreiN churaate hain

Hum jab kabhi unke, qareeb jaane ka sochte hain
Woh apni qaatil adaaoN se, auroN ko lubhate hain

Uff bada hi khoob andaaz hai, unke lutf uthaane ka
Mere dil meiN rehkar, mere hi dil ko tadpaate hain

Banakar meri yaadoN ko kaagaz, aur aansoo ko siyahi
Meri aankhoN ki masti ko, apni ghazal bataate hain

Yeh rutbah yeh shohrat, sab hamari hi badaulat hai
Meri tareef meiN likhi hui, kalaam ko gungunaate hain

Hai unhe bhi muhabbat “Aqsh” se, beintehaan magar
Phir bhi use raaz ki tarah, apne dil meiN chupaate hain






Intehaaii taur par jajbaatee. Daad hee daad.
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«Reply #53 on: November 01, 2013, 01:41:26 AM »
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its ...lovely... Usual Smile
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«Reply #54 on: November 01, 2013, 03:14:24 PM »
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Intehaaii taur par jajbaatee. Daad hee daad.
Thnxxxxxxx a lottttttt Shrishtiraj ji...
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«Reply #55 on: November 01, 2013, 03:15:04 PM »
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its ...lovely... Usual Smile
thnx a lotttttt mauj ji...
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«Reply #56 on: November 01, 2013, 03:27:35 PM »
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Hai muhabbat unhe bhi bas iqraar karna baaki hai
Meri yaadoN se apne dil ko beqaraar karna baaki hai


Meri muhabbat ko woh, is tarah aazmaate hain
Khwaabon meiN bhi mujhse, nazreiN churaate hain

Hum jab kabhi unke, qareeb jaane ka sochte hain
Woh apni qaatil adaaoN se, auroN ko lubhate hain

Uff bada hi khoob andaaz hai, unke lutf uthaane ka
Mere dil meiN rehkar, mere hi dil ko tadpaate hain

Banakar meri yaadoN ko kaagaz, aur aansoo ko siyahi
Meri aankhoN ki masti ko, apni ghazal bataate hain

Yeh rutbah yeh shohrat, sab hamari hi badaulat hai
Meri tareef meiN likhi hui, kalaam ko gungunaate hain

Hai unhe bhi muhabbat “Aqsh” se, beintehaan magar
Phir bhi use raaz ki tarah, apne dil meiN chupaate hain




wah bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne beta  Thumbs UP Thumbs UP
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«Reply #57 on: November 01, 2013, 03:48:56 PM »
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thank you soooooooooooooo much suman ji....
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«Reply #58 on: November 02, 2013, 10:29:30 PM »
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Teri zaat ke shajar se yun mera chaman raha,
Wo be-samar shajar magar Saaya Ifgan raha,
Tera mizaaj waqti taqazo’n pe munhasir,
Mere mizaaj par wahi pehla zaman raha,
Ye medaan jahan aaj kal hy hashr ka smaa’n,
Ik dor mein kbhi tha kitna pur-aman raha,
An ginat silwaten ab tak hain par chuke’n,
Rishta hmara phir bhi hy ke be-shikan raha,
Atraaf-o-jawaanib toh mere pur-sukoon thy,
Dil tha ke jis me jalta shola-e-agan raha,
Thaama gulaab ko jo, phir toh chhor na sakay,
Umr bhr kaanto’n se yun rbt-e-chubhan raha,
Alfaaz bhi na kar sakay akaasi-e-mizaaj,
Ksh-ma-ksh me hr ghari mera hm-sukhan raha,
Mujrim qaraar de ke baa-izzat bari kiya,
Teri adaalato’n me bhi ajab ziman raha,
Be-misl khataao’n mein hun agarchy mein ‘Saadi’,
Zamana misaal de magar esa chalan raha..


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«Reply #59 on: November 06, 2013, 01:19:32 PM »
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Teri zaat ke shajar se yun mera chaman raha,
Wo be-samar shajar magar Saaya Ifgan raha,
Tera mizaaj waqti taqazo’n pe munhasir,
Mere mizaaj par wahi pehla zaman raha,
Ye medaan jahan aaj kal hy hashr ka smaa’n,
Ik dor mein kbhi tha kitna pur-aman raha,
An ginat silwaten ab tak hain par chuke’n,
Rishta hmara phir bhi hy ke be-shikan raha,
Atraaf-o-jawaanib toh mere pur-sukoon thy,
Dil tha ke jis me jalta shola-e-agan raha,
Thaama gulaab ko jo, phir toh chhor na sakay,
Umr bhr kaanto’n se yun rbt-e-chubhan raha,
Alfaaz bhi na kar sakay akaasi-e-mizaaj,
Ksh-ma-ksh me hr ghari mera hm-sukhan raha,
Mujrim qaraar de ke baa-izzat bari kiya,
Teri adaalato’n me bhi ajab ziman raha,
Be-misl khataao’n mein hun agarchy mein ‘Saadi’,
Zamana misaal de magar esa chalan raha..


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Thnxxxxxx a lottttt for sharing it...
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