Meri Rooh Ka Wo Libaas Hai.....!!!

by Talat on September 06, 2009, 12:48:30 PM
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«Reply #1 on: September 06, 2009, 12:50:14 PM »
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Waahhh.. I read this poetry twice. Really no words to express the appreciation. Its really wondreful. So sweet and so innocent... :Clapping:
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«Reply #2 on: September 06, 2009, 12:52:55 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 06, 2009, 12:48:30 PM


Wah  Applause Applause Applause
Dear Talat ... kya baat hai lajawab .... shuruwat se aakhri tak bahut hi accha likha hai aapne dear.....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: September 07, 2009, 10:48:04 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 06, 2009, 12:48:30 PM
KYA BAAT HAI  CELMIRA JI......

KYUN DIL AAJ USKE BIN NARAAZ HAI,
DIL KI DHARKAN JO SUNAYI DETI HAI, USIKI TOH AAWAAZ HAI.

JO GUNGUNATI HUN GEET MAIN,HAR GEET MAIN USKA HI SAAZ HAI.
WOH HARDAM MERE AAS PAAS HAI,MERI ROOH KA WO LIBAAS HAI.

YUN TOH HAR JANAM MAIN TADPAYA HAI,
FIR KYUN IS JANAM MAIN ALAG LAGE, AAJ HAI.

AAJ KA NAHIN TERA MERA JANMON-JANMANTAR KA SAATH HAI,
YAAD HAI EK JANAM MAIN, MEH TERI LAILAA THI,TU MERA MAJNU THA,
WO BHI KYA DUAR THA,PYAAR KA KYA JANOON THA.
JEETE JI TOH SAATH NAHIN JEENE DIYA ZAMAANE NE HAMEN,
PAR MAUT MEH TOH TERA MERA, EK DOOSRE KA SAATH THA.

KITNE JANAM LIYE HAMNE,KABHI HEER-RANJHA,KABHI ROMEO-JULLET BANE HAI,
HAR JANAM MAIN,ZAMAANE KA SITAM SAHE KAR BHI,SAATH NIBHAYE HAI,
FIR AAJ KYUN GABRAYE HAI,HAMNE TOH SAATH MAIN HAR JANAM PYAAR KA ITEHAAS BANAYE HAI.

DOOR HO KAR BHI TOH PAAS HAI "TALAT"
FIR IS JANAM MAIN KAISE RAHEGEN TUMSE ALAG.
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«Reply #4 on: September 07, 2009, 10:56:40 AM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Celmira ji and Cara ji beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation.excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: September 07, 2009, 11:09:53 AM »
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Wah Wah !!! Bahut hi Umda aur Khoob Celmira Dear...!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: September 07, 2009, 02:21:11 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah ab aapki is shaandaar ghazal ke liyn alfaaz kahan se laaye.n jaaye.n subhaanallah kya baat hai, mashallah se bhut hi khoob har sher bulandyo.n ki ek nayi parwaaz par jiski sochain zamee.n ki suchchaii se is khoobsurti se jodi hain ki kya kahiye, kaash ke hame bhi Allah aisi hi sifat se nawaazta, great piece of work likhti rahiye aur aise bhut kuch seekhne ka moqa deti rahiye, hamesha khush rahiye aabaad rahiye
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«Reply #7 on: September 08, 2009, 08:42:13 AM »
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Waah Talat Ji ...Bahoot Khoob ... Kucch Arz Hai ... Mulaizaa Farmaiyega...



Shiiqwe Be_vaffi Ke Karta Hai KyuN, KyuN Gham Ke AaNsu Rota Hai
Yeh Muhoobat Hai Pyaare Muhobat, Ismein To Yahii Kucch Hota Hai

Mazzii Par Ilzaam Na Rakho, Ae Sahiil WalooN Tum Kyaa Janoo
Uthataa Haii Yeh TuffaaN Kaun, Kaun KhastiyooN Ko Duubotaa Hai

Mein Duniya Ke Har Bhashar Ko, Dekh Chuka Hon Parakh Chuka Hon
KauN Haastaa Hai Mere Haal Par, Kaun Dekh Kar Mujhko Rotaa Hai

KyuN Kahuu Mein Ke Woh Be_Vaffa Hai, KyuN Kissi Ko Mein Dosh Duu
Aksaar Wohii Hota Hai Pyaare, Jo Taqdeer Mein Likhaa Hota Haii !!


HumTum
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«Reply #8 on: September 08, 2009, 10:56:58 AM »
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...really very nice one Talat ji...each and every line is so expressive and emotional...

...waqt bewaqt main kahaniyo mein ulajhta raha hoon,
apni hi banayi hui pareshaniyo mein sulagta raha hoon,
kisiko aandhi ka darr raha kisiko raha darr toofan ka,
main to aaj bhi hawa ke darr se bhagta raha hoon...
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«Reply #9 on: September 08, 2009, 01:49:02 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on September 06, 2009, 12:50:14 PM
Waahhh.. I read this poetry twice. Really no words to express the appreciation. Its really wondreful. So sweet and so innocent... :Clapping:

Thanks so much Sweetie for always appreciating my work.....Thanks a lot dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: September 09, 2009, 05:57:25 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 06, 2009, 12:48:30 PM

Aur Ab Kya Kahen Talat Aapko,Ab To Aap Ko Aadat Si Ho gayi Aapko Yeh Sunne Ki  tongue3.
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Talat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har lafz,Har Ashaar Behtereen!!! Bahut Khooooob Dost!!!

"Iss Tadap mein Bhi Ek Alag Maza Hai,
 Yeh Dard Dil ka Kuch Khaas Hai"

"Ab Bhi Pichli Kahaniyon Ki Tarah,
Wahi Majnu,Wahi Devdas Hai"...

Bahut Ache Dost!! Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: September 09, 2009, 04:09:07 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on September 06, 2009, 12:52:55 PM

Wah  Applause Applause Applause
Dear Talat ... kya baat hai lajawab .... shuruwat se aakhri tak bahut hi accha likha hai aapne dear.....  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much dear for the appreciation Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: September 09, 2009, 04:24:48 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai...

pass ho kar bhi hai mujhse door
shayad yahi jeevan ka banwaas hai..

bahoot bahoot khoob Celmira...
ek eke shabd se buni ek ek line.. kamaal hai.... Good Creation!!!

HumTum ji and Cara Good work!!
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«Reply #13 on: September 09, 2009, 04:32:09 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 06, 2009, 12:48:30 PM

Awesome poetry Talat di.. Bahoot hi Lajawaab Ghazal hai.. Is Ghazal ki har line behad kaas hai.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #14 on: September 09, 2009, 08:26:26 PM »
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Quote from: cara on September 07, 2009, 10:48:04 AM
KYA BAAT HAI  CELMIRA JI......

KYUN DIL AAJ USKE BIN NARAAZ HAI,
DIL KI DHARKAN JO SUNAYI DETI HAI, USIKI TOH AAWAAZ HAI.

JO GUNGUNATI HUN GEET MAIN,HAR GEET MAIN USKA HI SAAZ HAI.
WOH HARDAM MERE AAS PAAS HAI,MERI ROOH KA WO LIBAAS HAI.

YUN TOH HAR JANAM MAIN TADPAYA HAI,
FIR KYUN IS JANAM MAIN ALAG LAGE, AAJ HAI.

AAJ KA NAHIN TERA MERA JANMON-JANMANTAR KA SAATH HAI,
YAAD HAI EK JANAM MAIN, MEH TERI LAILAA THI,TU MERA MAJNU THA,
WO BHI KYA DUAR THA,PYAAR KA KYA JANOON THA.
JEETE JI TOH SAATH NAHIN JEENE DIYA ZAMAANE NE HAMEN,
PAR MAUT MEH TOH TERA MERA, EK DOOSRE KA SAATH THA.

KITNE JANAM LIYE HAMNE,KABHI HEER-RANJHA,KABHI ROMEO-JULLET BANE HAI,
HAR JANAM MAIN,ZAMAANE KA SITAM SAHE KAR BHI,SAATH NIBHAYE HAI,
FIR AAJ KYUN GABRAYE HAI,HAMNE TOH SAATH MAIN HAR JANAM PYAAR KA ITEHAAS BANAYE HAI.

DOOR HO KAR BHI TOH PAAS HAI "TALAT"
FIR IS JANAM MAIN KAISE RAHEGEN TUMSE ALAG.




Thanks Cara Ji....nice one from you too...
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