Meri Rooh Ka Wo Libaas Hai.....!!!

by Talat on September 06, 2009, 12:48:30 PM
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Talat
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«Reply #15 on: September 09, 2009, 08:27:48 PM »
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Wah wah bahut khoob Celmira ji and Cara ji beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation.excellent. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks so much Madhu Ji for always appreciating.
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thegrimreaper
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«Reply #16 on: September 09, 2009, 08:30:23 PM »
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lajwaab
jitni taarif karein kum hai Celmira ji
gr8 work again

sahi mein alfaaz e bayaan to koi aap se seekhe
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Talat
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«Reply #17 on: September 10, 2009, 05:52:42 PM »
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Wah Wah !!! Bahut hi Umda aur Khoob Celmira Dear...!!! Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley

Shally.


Thanks so much Shally dear
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«Reply #18 on: September 10, 2009, 06:33:23 PM »
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Talatji bahut khoob Sunder shabdo aur bhavo se aapne ye geet sajaya hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Pehle Premi Kehte they do jism ek jaan hai hum
Aapne "rooh ka libaas" keh do rooh ek jism keh dia

"Paas ho kar bhi hai tujhse door
Teri kismat ka yahi banvaaws hai"...bahu achhi upma di hai aapne.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #19 on: September 11, 2009, 07:37:21 AM »
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hey di love u a lot for this ghazal
bahut bahut achchi hai
shuruaat se lekar aakhir tak har ek jagah par har ek lafz sateek beithta hai
bahut bahut achche.......
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«Reply #20 on: September 11, 2009, 07:51:41 AM »
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Wah Wah Kya Baat hai Talat Ji.. Lajawab ehasaason se Saji Gazal Yahan Pesh Ki hai aapne.. Bahut Hi Umda soch ke sath Likhi Hui Gazal Hai... Har ek Lafz Apna Dard Bayan Kar raha hai...!! Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.... Applause Applause


 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**

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Talat
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«Reply #21 on: September 13, 2009, 02:16:35 PM »
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Waah Waah Waah ab aapki is shaandaar ghazal ke liyn alfaaz kahan se laaye.n jaaye.n subhaanallah kya baat hai, mashallah se bhut hi khoob har sher bulandyo.n ki ek nayi parwaaz par jiski sochain zamee.n ki suchchaii se is khoobsurti se jodi hain ki kya kahiye, kaash ke hame bhi Allah aisi hi sifat se nawaazta, great piece of work likhti rahiye aur aise bhut kuch seekhne ka moqa deti rahiye, hamesha khush rahiye aabaad rahiye

Kyun sharminda kar rhe hain Aslam Ji, aapke fan ke aage to humara ghazal ka ek ek sher sharminda hai.....hum khud aap se seekhte hain. Aapne itni tawajjo se padha padha, apna waqt nikaala aur khoobsurat alfaaz se humari ghazal ko nawaaza, aapka tah-e-dil se shukriya Aslam Ji....Yunhi hausla afzaai karte rahiyega, himmat badhate rahiyega  notworthy notworthy notworthy
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«Reply #22 on: September 17, 2009, 11:54:50 AM »
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Waah Talat Ji ...Bahoot Khoob ... Kucch Arz Hai ... Mulaizaa Farmaiyega...



Shiiqwe Be_vaffi Ke Karta Hai KyuN, KyuN Gham Ke AaNsu Rota Hai
Yeh Muhoobat Hai Pyaare Muhobat, Ismein To Yahii Kucch Hota Hai

Mazzii Par Ilzaam Na Rakho, Ae Sahiil WalooN Tum Kyaa Janoo
Uthataa Haii Yeh TuffaaN Kaun, Kaun KhastiyooN Ko Duubotaa Hai

Mein Duniya Ke Har Bhashar Ko, Dekh Chuka Hon Parakh Chuka Hon
KauN Haastaa Hai Mere Haal Par, Kaun Dekh Kar Mujhko Rotaa Hai

KyuN Kahuu Mein Ke Woh Be_Vaffa Hai, KyuN Kissi Ko Mein Dosh Duu
Aksaar Wohii Hota Hai Pyaare, Jo Taqdeer Mein Likhaa Hota Haii !!


HumTum

Bohot shukriya Hum Tum Ji...aur bohot khoob..kya baat hai  icon_thumleft...Aap ka jawab jaldi hi likhne ki koshish hogi!
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Talat
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«Reply #23 on: September 17, 2009, 11:57:10 AM »
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...really very nice one Talat ji...each and every line is so expressive and emotional...

...waqt bewaqt main kahaniyo mein ulajhta raha hoon,
apni hi banayi hui pareshaniyo mein sulagta raha hoon,
kisiko aandhi ka darr raha kisiko raha darr toofan ka,
main to aaj bhi hawa ke darr se bhagta raha hoon...

Waah....Bohot Khoob JHL.....bohot bohot shukriya aapka, aapko ye ghazal pasand aayi Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: September 24, 2009, 02:19:04 PM »
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Aur Ab Kya Kahen Talat Aapko,Ab To Aap Ko Aadat Si Ho gayi Aapko Yeh Sunne Ki  tongue3.
Bahut Bahut Khoooob Talat!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Har lafz,Har Ashaar Behtereen!!! Bahut Khooooob Dost!!!

"Iss Tadap mein Bhi Ek Alag Maza Hai,
 Yeh Dard Dil ka Kuch Khaas Hai"

"Ab Bhi Pichli Kahaniyon Ki Tarah,
Wahi Majnu,Wahi Devdas Hai"...

Bahut Ache Dost!! Applause Applause Applause Thumbs UP


Thanks so much Khwaish Dost, aapne humesha hausla badhaya hai.....Aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega......Thanks You Dost.
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Talat
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«Reply #25 on: February 26, 2010, 09:56:16 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai...

pass ho kar bhi hai mujhse door
shayad yahi jeevan ka banwaas hai..

bahoot bahoot khoob Celmira...
ek eke shabd se buni ek ek line.. kamaal hai.... Good Creation!!!

HumTum ji and Cara Good work!!

Thank You so much Pooja di aap ko ye ghazal achchi lagi...Thanks a lot..
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