Meri saansoN ko rawani de do.........................................Aqsh..

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«Reply #30 on: August 26, 2013, 10:18:42 PM »
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Quote from: kittoo on August 26, 2013, 05:41:02 PM
very romantic.... rom rom romanch de gaya
thnx kittoo ji..
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«Reply #31 on: August 26, 2013, 10:19:16 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on August 26, 2013, 05:52:50 PM
bahut khoob , Aqsh ji . badi rawani waali ghazal hai , bahut mubarakbaad.
thnxxxxxx a lottttttt hasan ji...
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«Reply #32 on: August 26, 2013, 10:25:44 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on August 26, 2013, 05:52:59 PM

Justttttttttt Speechless.........

Mere Paas Koi Lafz Nahi Iss Aapke Iss Ghazal Ki Tareef mein...It Is Justttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Beautifullllll


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Yeh Kuch Mere Bhi lafz.....


Do Jism Ek Jaan Mujhe Ab Aisi Koi Kahaani De Do
Umar Bhar Sambhaal Sakun Koi Aisi Nishaani De Do

Iss Raah ko koi Naya Mod Dena hai To Zaroor Do
Par pehle Woh Kuch Haseen YaadeN Purani De Do

Yuh Gale se Lag Jaao Mere Ke Koi Faasla Naa Rahe
Sukhe Hue Iss Darakht Ko Aaj Jee Bhar Ke Pani De Do

Ranj-o-Gham Ki Baatein Phir Kabhi kar lena Dilbar
Soye hue Mausam Ko Aaj Ek Raat Si Koi Tufaani De Do

"Khwahish" Saans Aa Rahi Hai To Main Jee Raha Hoon
Par Kyun Naa Inn SaansoN Ko Tum Ek Nayi Rawaani De Do


              ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~
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Hmmmmmm kya baat hai khwaish ji bahut bahut bahut khoob likhe ho aap... ek dam dil ko choooooo liya aapne toh.. ek koshish meri taraf se bhi..


Tere saanson ko apne saanson ki rawani de doon
Tu paas aa tere labon ko mai apni kahani de doon

Teri zindagi mein bhar doon mai apne saare rang
Tujhpar fida ho jaaon tujhe apni jawaani de doon

Kuch aisa ho ke faaslon mein bhi faasla na rahe
Tujhe baanhon mein lekar shaam suhaani de doon

bekaabu se yeh jazbaat bhi phir kaboo na paa sake
Raat aisi hi tujhko mai behki aur deewani de doon

Do jism se phir ek jaan ho jaaye hum dono aur
Subah ko apne pyaar se saji hui nishaani de doon
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«Reply #33 on: August 26, 2013, 10:27:47 PM »
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Quote from: nishi gahlaut on August 26, 2013, 07:35:44 PM
superb...Aqsh ji.,.. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_flower
thnx a lot nishi ji...
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«Reply #34 on: August 26, 2013, 10:28:26 PM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 26, 2013, 08:53:50 PM
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uuuufffff kyaa kehne hain ji aapke is rachnaa ke, bahut bahut khoobsoorti se aapne ehsaason ko shabdon ki maalaa mein piroyaa hai... kuch likhe binaa rahaa nahi gayaa... magar yahaan post nahi kiyaa... main page pe fresh post kiyaa hai isi kaa jawaab...!!!

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shayri-for-khumar-e-ishq/ishq-beshumaar-ho-hriday-t108092.0.html


Thnxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt hriday ji...jawab bhi awesomeeeeeeeeeeee hai...
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«Reply #35 on: August 26, 2013, 10:29:27 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on August 26, 2013, 09:23:21 PM
woooooooooooooooooooooooow, bhaisaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaab, kya baat hai, itna romantic andaaz pehli baar dekh raha huN. Bahut bahut khoob, maza aa gaya padh kar.
thnxxxxxx a lotttttt iftakhar ji...
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«Reply #36 on: August 26, 2013, 10:30:54 PM »
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ek dum masssttt hai ji, aapke is jawaab kaa jawaab nahi, bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Aqsh ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!! Main post super thaa to yeh waalaa super duper hai...!!!

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Hmmmmmm kya baat hai khwaish ji bahut bahut bahut khoob likhe ho aap... ek dam dil ko choooooo liya aapne toh.. ek koshish meri taraf se bhi..


Tere saanson ko apne saanson ki rawani de doon
Tu paas aa tere labon ko mai apni kahani de doon

Teri zindagi mein bhar doon mai apne saare rang
Tujhpar fida ho jaaon tujhe apni jawaani de doon

Kuch aisa ho ke faaslon mein bhi faasla na rahe
Tujhe baanhon mein lekar shaam suhaani de doon

bekaabu se yeh jazbaat bhi phir kaboo na paa sake
Raat aisi hi tujhko mai behki aur deewani de doon

Do jism se phir ek jaan ho jaaye hum dono aur
Subah ko apne pyaar se saji hui nishaani de doon
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«Reply #37 on: August 26, 2013, 10:31:30 PM »
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thank you sooo much ji....!!!

Quote from: aqsh on August 26, 2013, 10:28:26 PM
Thnxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt hriday ji...jawab bhi awesomeeeeeeeeeeee hai...
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«Reply #38 on: August 26, 2013, 10:32:48 PM »
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Rau de raha hun daad k saath bebaak aur bakhoob kalambazi k lie,lajawaab!
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«Reply #39 on: August 26, 2013, 10:40:41 PM »
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Hmmmmmm kya baat hai khwaish ji bahut bahut bahut khoob likhe ho aap... ek dam dil ko choooooo liya aapne toh.. ek koshish meri taraf se bhi..


Tere saanson ko apne saanson ki rawani de doon
Tu paas aa tere labon ko mai apni kahani de doon

Teri zindagi mein bhar doon mai apne saare rang
Tujhpar fida ho jaaon tujhe apni jawaani de doon

Kuch aisa ho ke faaslon mein bhi faasla na rahe
Tujhe baanhon mein lekar shaam suhaani de doon

bekaabu se yeh jazbaat bhi phir kaboo na paa sake
Raat aisi hi tujhko mai behki aur deewani de doon

Do jism se phir ek jaan ho jaaye hum dono aur
Subah ko apne pyaar se saji hui nishaani de doon




woooooow yahan to ek se badh kar ek hain 'YO' tujhe salaam kaese kaese heere chupa rakha hai apne andar...
dheron daad bas waah waah aur waah...
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«Reply #40 on: August 27, 2013, 12:54:31 AM »
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waah waah waah waah aqsh jee khumaar bhari, badi hi romantic mood me likhi hui apki ye ghazal to bazm me kehar dhaa gayi..hame bhi sikho na aisa achha likhna..

dekho maine ek koshish ki apke jaisa likhne ki to wo kaisi ban gayi..sad5

Behti havao.N se udhaar, rawani laya hun,,
Umar aapki dhal chuki, lo jawani laya hun..

Chand sitare to nahi la paya main tere liye,,
Safed balo ke liye hair dye purani laya hun..

Chehre ki jhurriya aur madhoshi ka ye alam,,
Jama nahi, to lo lagao mitti multani laya hun..

Aaj to khush hi ho jayega raja iss naukar se,,
Roz ki dal khichdi, bana ke biryani laya hun..

Rani bhi karegi shukriya adaa iss nacheez ka,,
Faasle mitati raja se uski wo jawani laya hun..

Abb yun hi masti, wafa, junoon bana rahe gar,,
To chalta hun main warna bahut maar padegi,
Kyunki kahani thodi albelee anjaani laya hun..!!!


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«Reply #41 on: August 27, 2013, 11:59:07 AM »
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Quote from: ~Hriday~ on August 26, 2013, 10:30:54 PM
ek dum masssttt hai ji, aapke is jawaab kaa jawaab nahi, bahut sundar, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai aapne Aqsh ji, mazaa aa gayaa padh ke....!!! Main post super thaa to yeh waalaa super duper hai...!!!

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Thnxxxxxx hriday ji a lot.. phir aap is par bhi ek aur jawab likh dete..mai aapko reply zaroor karti..
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«Reply #42 on: August 27, 2013, 11:59:54 AM »
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Quote from: @Kaash on August 26, 2013, 10:32:48 PM
Rau de raha hun daad k saath bebaak aur bakhoob kalambazi k lie,lajawaab!
thnx a lot kaash ji pasand karne ke liye aur rau ke liye bhi...
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«Reply #43 on: August 27, 2013, 12:01:13 PM »
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Quote from: Iqtedar on August 26, 2013, 10:40:41 PM
woooooow yahan to ek se badh kar ek hain 'YO' tujhe salaam kaese kaese heere chupa rakha hai apne andar...
dheron daad bas waah waah aur waah...
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Thnxxxxxx a lotttttt iqtedar ji..
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Quote from: nashwani on August 27, 2013, 12:54:31 AM
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waah waah waah waah aqsh jee khumaar bhari, badi hi romantic mood me likhi hui apki ye ghazal to bazm me kehar dhaa gayi..hame bhi sikho na aisa achha likhna..

dekho maine ek koshish ki apke jaisa likhne ki to wo kaisi ban gayi..sad5

Behti havao.N se udhaar, rawani laya hun,,
Umar aapki dhal chuki, lo jawani laya hun..

Chand sitare to nahi la paya main tere liye,,
Safed balo ke liye hair dye purani laya hun..

Chehre ki jhurriya aur madhoshi ka ye alam,,
Jama nahi, to lo lagao mitti multani laya hun..

Aaj to khush hi ho jayega raja iss naukar se,,
Roz ki dal khichdi, bana ke biryani laya hun..

Rani bhi karegi shukriya adaa iss nacheez ka,,
Faasle mitati raja se uski wo jawani laya hun..

Abb yun hi masti, wafa, junoon bana rahe gar,,
To chalta hun main warna bahut maar padegi,
Kyunki kahani thodi albelee anjaani laya hun..!!!


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Ek dam masttttttt hai bole toh zabardast kalaam Ashwani. Mai toh kaafi impress ho gayi tumse.. Laughing hard Laughing hard. dil jeet liya tumne mera.. Giggle Giggle
Ab ek kaam karo ise save karke rakh lo aur pari ko sunanana dekhna woh bhi zaroooooooor impress hogi.. Winking Winking..
 thnx a lottttttttt....
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