Meri saansoN ko rawani de do.........................................Aqsh..

by aqsh on August 26, 2013, 01:00:46 PM
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«Reply #45 on: August 27, 2013, 02:07:52 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on August 26, 2013, 01:00:46 PM
Paas aakar meri saansoN ko, rawaani de do
Chhookar mere jism ko, nayi jawani de do
Bana kar gawah tum, chand sitaaron ko apna
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mujhe izhaare muhabbat ki, koi nishaani de do
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Madhosh rahoon maiN, use peekar har lamha
Tum apne laboN se lagakar, mujhe paani de do
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Wafa ho, junooN ho, thodi masti ho, aur suroor ho
Pyaar meiN saji hui mujhe, ek shaam suhaani de do
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Faasle sharm o haya ke, mit jaaye darmiyaan se
Bah jaaoN main, aisi hi ek lehar deewani de do
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Zamane ko bhi rashk ho, inhe gungunate hue
“Aqsh” ki ghazaloN ko, tum apni kahani de do
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bohut hi romantic hai Aqsh ji ye ghazal ko ,
bohut umda bohut aala.
bohut bohut mubarakbaad .aur Rau ke HAqdaar,.

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«Reply #46 on: August 27, 2013, 02:36:32 PM »
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Quote from: sahal on August 27, 2013, 02:07:52 PM
bohut hi romantic hai Aqsh ji ye ghazal ko ,
bohut umda bohut aala.
bohut bohut mubarakbaad .aur Rau ke HAqdaar,.

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thnx a lottttt sahal...
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«Reply #47 on: August 27, 2013, 02:43:12 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on August 27, 2013, 12:54:31 AM
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waah waah waah waah aqsh jee khumaar bhari, badi hi romantic mood me likhi hui apki ye ghazal to bazm me kehar dhaa gayi..hame bhi sikho na aisa achha likhna..

dekho maine ek koshish ki apke jaisa likhne ki to wo kaisi ban gayi..sad5

Behti havao.N se udhaar, rawani laya hun,,
Umar aapki dhal chuki, lo jawani laya hun..

Chand sitare to nahi la paya main tere liye,,
Safed balo ke liye hair dye purani laya hun..

Chehre ki jhurriya aur madhoshi ka ye alam,,
Jama nahi, to lo lagao mitti multani laya hun..

Aaj to khush hi ho jayega raja iss naukar se,,
Roz ki dal khichdi, bana ke biryani laya hun..

Rani bhi karegi shukriya adaa iss nacheez ka,,
Faasle mitati raja se uski wo jawani laya hun..

Abb yun hi masti, wafa, junoon bana rahe gar,,
To chalta hun main warna bahut maar padegi,
Kyunki kahani thodi albelee anjaani laya hun..!!!


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ha ha ha ha ha ha ha waah waah ashwani bhai kamaal kar diya.. sabkuchh phaad kar rumaal kar diya.. tongue3

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«Reply #48 on: August 27, 2013, 02:44:39 PM »
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Quote from: khwahish on August 26, 2013, 05:52:59 PM

Justttttttttt Speechless.........

Mere Paas Koi Lafz Nahi Iss Aapke Iss Ghazal Ki Tareef mein...It Is Justttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt Beautifullllll


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Yeh Kuch Mere Bhi lafz.....


Do Jism Ek Jaan Mujhe Ab Aisi Koi Kahaani De Do
Umar Bhar Sambhaal Sakun Koi Aisi Nishaani De Do

Iss Raah ko koi Naya Mod Dena hai To Zaroor Do
Par pehle Woh Kuch Haseen YaadeN Purani De Do

Yuh Gale se Lag Jaao Mere Ke Koi Faasla Naa Rahe
Sukhe Hue Iss Darakht Ko Aaj Jee Bhar Ke Pani De Do

Ranj-o-Gham Ki Baatein Phir Kabhi kar lena Dilbar
Soye hue Mausam Ko Aaj Ek Raat Si Koi Tufaani De Do

"Khwahish" Saans Aa Rahi Hai To Main Jee Raha Hoon
Par Kyun Naa Inn SaansoN Ko Tum Ek Nayi Rawaani De Do


              ~~~~~Khwahish~~~~~

waah waah... kya khoob jawaab khwahish ji.. behad khoobsurat.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #49 on: August 27, 2013, 02:48:44 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on August 26, 2013, 10:25:44 PM
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Hmmmmmm kya baat hai khwaish ji bahut bahut bahut khoob likhe ho aap... ek dam dil ko choooooo liya aapne toh.. ek koshish meri taraf se bhi..


Tere saanson ko apne saanson ki rawani de doon
Tu paas aa tere labon ko mai apni kahani de doon

Teri zindagi mein bhar doon mai apne saare rang
Tujhpar fida ho jaaon tujhe apni jawaani de doon

Kuch aisa ho ke faaslon mein bhi faasla na rahe
Tujhe baanhon mein lekar shaam suhaani de doon

bekaabu se yeh jazbaat bhi phir kaboo na paa sake
Raat aisi hi tujhko mai behki aur deewani de doon

Do jism se phir ek jaan ho jaaye hum dono aur
Subah ko apne pyaar se saji hui nishaani de doon





ek aur romantic jabardast si peshkash aqsh ji.. waah waah.. behad khoobsurat aur umda.. Usual Smile

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«Reply #50 on: August 27, 2013, 07:26:50 PM »
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 Zamane ko bhi rashk ho, inhe gungunate hue
“Aqsh” ki ghazaloN ko, tum apni kahani de do

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«Reply #51 on: August 27, 2013, 07:32:48 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on August 26, 2013, 01:00:46 PM
Paas aakar meri saansoN ko, rawaani de do
Chhookar mere jism ko, nayi jawani de do

Bana kar gawah tum, chand sitaaron ko apna
Mujhe izhaare muhabbat ki, koi nishaani de do

Madhosh rahoon maiN, use peekar har lamha
Tum apne laboN se lagakar, mujhe paani de do

Wafa ho, junooN ho, thodi masti ho, aur suroor ho
Pyaar meiN saji hui mujhe, ek shaam suhaani de do

Faasle sharm o haya ke, mit jaaye darmiyaan se
Bah jaaoN main, aisi hi ek lehar deewani de do

Zamane ko bhi rashk ho, inhe gungunate hue
“Aqsh” ki ghazaloN ko, tum apni kahani de do

kia kehne aqsh ji,...panee main aag laganaa jantee ho, Usual Smile
 sare bache tadap gaye laughing4 waah waah atee sunder,.....
daad daad or daad aqsh ji,.........
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«Reply #52 on: August 27, 2013, 08:12:16 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 27, 2013, 02:48:44 PM
ek aur romantic jabardast si peshkash aqsh ji.. waah waah.. behad khoobsurat aur umda.. Usual Smile

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pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #53 on: August 27, 2013, 08:13:44 PM »
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Quote from: premdeep on August 27, 2013, 07:26:50 PM
Zamane ko bhi rashk ho, inhe gungunate hue
“Aqsh” ki ghazaloN ko, tum apni kahani de do

icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley wah waah waaah aqsh ji maza aay gya padh kar shandaar rachna har ek sher par laakhon daad pls accept one rau
thnxxxxxxxxxxxx so much somuuuuuuuu... rau ke liye bhi bahut bahut thnxxxxx..
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«Reply #54 on: August 27, 2013, 08:14:58 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on August 27, 2013, 07:32:48 PM
kia kehne aqsh ji,...panee main aag laganaa jantee ho, Usual Smile
 sare bache tadap gaye laughing4 waah waah atee sunder,.....
daad daad or daad aqsh ji,.........
thnxxxxxxxxx a lotttttt laaiba ji kya karoon bachchon ki hi farmaish par likha hai ab toh...
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«Reply #55 on: August 27, 2013, 10:38:40 PM »
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Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on August 27, 2013, 02:43:12 PM
=) Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha waah waah ashwani bhai kamaal kar diya.. sabkuchh phaad kar rumaal kar diya.. tongue3

has has ke lotpot ho gaya.. Usual Smile

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Bahut bahut shukriya aqsh jee ki dastan pasand karne ke liye touhid bhai..Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Winking
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«Reply #56 on: August 28, 2013, 01:39:48 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya aqsh jee ki dastan pasand karne ke liye touhid bhai..Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Winking

Nahin ye ho nahi sakta yeh meri daastan nahi hai touhid ji yeh toh gadhe ne apni pari ki daastan sunayi hai  NaNaNa NaNaNa
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«Reply #57 on: August 28, 2013, 09:26:38 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on August 26, 2013, 01:00:46 PM
Paas aakar meri saansoN ko, rawaani de do
Chhookar mere jism ko, nayi jawani de do

bahut khoobsurat


Bana kar gawah tum, chand sitaaron ko apna
Mujhe izhaare muhabbat ki, koi nishaani de do

bahuuuut khooob


Madhosh rahoon maiN, use peekar har lamha
Tum apne laboN se lagakar, mujhe paani de do
very nicccce

Wafa ho, junooN ho, thodi masti ho, aur suroor ho
Pyaar meiN saji hui mujhe, ek shaam suhaani de do

ye sher achchaa lagaa

Faasle sharm o haya ke, mit jaaye darmiyaan se
Bah jaaoN main, aisi hi ek lehar deewani de do

ye bhi theek thaak hai

Zamane ko bhi rashk ho, inhe gungunate hue
“Aqsh” ki ghazaloN ko, tum apni kahani de do

achchi gazal pesh ki hai baajee mubarak ho..  1++
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«Reply #58 on: August 28, 2013, 09:39:59 PM »
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Quote from: Masoom Shahzada on August 28, 2013, 09:26:38 PM

thnxxxxxx a lottttt masoom...
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«Reply #59 on: September 05, 2013, 09:27:53 PM »
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Wah,Wah,Wah Aqshji,
Aapki ye ghazal to such me madhosh kar deti hai.
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