Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....:Ghazals

mazHur

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Tujh ko kahoon kia mere yaar
Dushman mere tere yaar!

Teri gali ke lagaye hazaar
Saat lage na phere yaar

Mushkil mein kaam na aaye dost
Kia mere yaar kia tere yaar!

Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....
yoonhi Moonh na phere Yaar

Kia baat hui ke peetay ho
Itni subha saveray yaar??

Rang he mere naseeb ka jaise
Baal hoan tere ghaneray yaar!

Chup ke se aa ja bahoan mein
Bheench loon tujh ko mere yaar!


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Anshumali

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Re: Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....

«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2011, 03:11:46 AM »

Quote from: mazHur on January 26, 2011, 06:20:33 PM

Good One ... Very Romantic touch ... !

dil se daad .. !


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ParwaaZ

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Re: Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....

«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2011, 10:08:50 AM »

MazHur Sahaab Aadaab O tasleemaat!

Janab kia kahne hai aapke...
Aap aate to hai khamosh badal ki tarha par jab baraste hai
to jhoom kar barsate hai....

Aapki haaliye kalaam Behad achchi lagi thi hume aur ..
Masha Allah yeH kalaam bhi khoob kahi hai aapne ..

Quote from: mazHur on January 26, 2011, 06:20:33 PM

Tujh ko kahoon kia mere yaar
Dushman mere tere yaar!

Kia baat hai behad khoob..

Dil masos kar rahne ke siva chaara na tha
Woh apnaa toH tha shayad humaaraa na tha

Teri gali ke lagaye hazaar
Saat lage na phere yaar

Ha ha hah Bahut khoob...
Janab gar aisa hota to sochiye kaisa hota..
har dil ki muraad puri hoti.. Har sar pe sehraa hota

Mushkil mein kaam na aaye dost
Kia mere yaar kia tere yaar!

Kia tanz hai janab... Khuda hi jaane kia maslihat aa jati hai.. Achcha sher kaha hai aapne daad..

Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....
yoonhi Moonh na phere Yaar

Janaab Kia kahne hai aapke sher bada pyaara kaha hai aapne...

Unhe aanaa hi hoga mayyat pe meri
Ranjish unki dosti ke baad ki hai

Kia baat hui ke peetay ho
Itni subha saveray yaar??

Hmmm Achcha sher hai janab.. Kuch dil ko lag sa gaya... aisa Hadsaa bhi hua.

Rang he mere naseeb ka jaise
Baal hoan tere ghaneray yaar!

KyuN utaar rahe ho sab ke cheHre yaar
Siyaa bhi jagmagaate hai har savere yaar

Chup ke se aa ja bahoan mein
Bheench loon tujh ko mere yaar!

Achcha Sher hai janab Daad.. !

Janab MazHur Sahaab aapki is kafi rawaaN dawaaN kalaam par Dil se daad kabool kijiye...

Likhate rahiye..
Aate rahiye...
Khush O Aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez ...


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Re: Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....

«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2011, 10:38:01 AM »

bht bht khub mazhur ji..maza aagaya ji...


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Re: Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....

«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2011, 10:40:22 AM »

nice lines


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mazHur

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Re: Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....

«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2011, 04:46:30 PM »

I appreciate and thank you all for your appreciation
and valuable critique.

Best wishes
mazHur


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Re: Meri shakl na Qismet achhi....

«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2011, 06:14:41 PM »

wah Mazhur sahab.
lajawaab nagma dear.
bahut hi alg sa sur aur ehsaas hai isme.
umda
dili daad
khus rahiye
sukriya


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