MERI ULFAT KE CHIRAGHON KO JALAAYE RAKHNA ............. HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on January 29, 2013, 08:59:13 AM
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«Reply #15 on: January 29, 2013, 11:31:09 AM »
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GhairoN  se  Halat - e - Mayekhana  chhupaaye  rakhna  ,
Farz   rindoN   ka   hai   Mahaul   banaaye   rakhna


Tez  toofan   hai  ,  manjdhaar  hai  , gahra   paani  ,
Apni   Naiya   ko   thhapedoN   se   bachaaye  rakhna


Hum  ne  Daulat  se  banaya  hai  jo  Chaandi  ka mahal  ,
Log   kahte  hain   ki   naam  is  ka  'Sarai'  rakhna


Laut  ke  aa'ooN  to  RaahoN  meiN  Andhera  na  mile  ,
Meri   Ulfat   ke   ChiraghoN   ko   jalaaye   rakhna
  

Tees   uthh'ti  hai  to  phir  Ashk  nikal  jaate  haiN  ,
Itna   aasaaN   nahiN   ZakhmoN  ko  chhupaaye  rakhna


DooriyaaN   Saaya-e-Dushman  se   zaroori  haiN   magar ,
Fasla    Ahl - e - karam   se   bhi   banaaye   rakhna


Hum ne  seekha  hai  Muqaddar  ke  FaqeeroN  se,  'Hasan' ,
Apne   jazbaat   ko   seene   meiN   dabaaye    rakhna

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«Reply #16 on: January 29, 2013, 01:17:37 PM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaah Hasab saheb, matla, meri ulfat ke chiraghoN ko waale she'r bahut khoob rahe hai, aur maqta zabardast. Bahut bahut khoob. Ek Rau qubool kijiye meri taraf se.
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«Reply #17 on: January 29, 2013, 01:22:08 PM »
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HASAN SAHAB ,,,,KYA BAAT HAI ,,,IS KALAM KO NAWAZNE KE LIYE HAMARE PAAAS ..SHABD NAHI HAIN ,,,JITNI TARIF KI JAYE KAM HAI,,,IS NAYAB KALAM SE TO ...MAHFIL RANGEEN HO UTHI ,,,HAI YUN HI LIKHTE RAHIYE ,,KHUDA HAFIZ
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«Reply #18 on: January 29, 2013, 02:54:16 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut bahut khoob Sirji.....!!!
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«Reply #19 on: January 29, 2013, 03:41:15 PM »
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GhairoN  se  Halat - e - Mayekhana  chhupaaye  rakhna  ,
Farz   rindoN   ka   hai   Mahaul   banaaye   rakhna


Tez  toofan   hai  ,  manjdhaar  hai  , gahra   paani  ,
Apni   Naiya   ko   thhapedoN   se   bachaaye  rakhna


Hum  ne  Daulat  se  banaya  hai  jo  Chaandi  ka mahal  ,
Log   kahte  hain   ki   naam  is  ka  'Sarai'  rakhna


Laut  ke  aa'ooN  to  RaahoN  meiN  Andhera  na  mile  ,
Meri   Ulfat   ke   ChiraghoN   ko   jalaaye   rakhna
  

Tees   uthh'ti  hai  to  phir  Ashk  nikal  jaate  haiN  ,
Itna   aasaaN   nahiN   ZakhmoN  ko  chhupaaye  rakhna


DooriyaaN   Saaya-e-Dushman  se   zaroori  haiN   magar ,
Fasla    Ahl - e - karam   se   bhi   banaaye   rakhna


Hum ne  seekha  hai  Muqaddar  ke  FaqeeroN  se,  'Hasan' ,
Apne   jazbaat   ko   seene   meiN   dabaaye    rakhna


3rd aur 6th ash'ar khususi rahe Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #20 on: January 29, 2013, 04:05:07 PM »
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F.H.Siddiqui Saheb,
         
             Meri Mubarakbaad Qubool Farmayein, Behatreen aur Lajawab Ghazal Tahreer Farmayi hai...............
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«Reply #21 on: January 30, 2013, 05:22:42 AM »
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wah wah wah wah
NANDBAHU JI, BAHUT SHUKRIYA.KHUSH RAHYE.
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«Reply #22 on: January 30, 2013, 07:40:36 AM »
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thanks, sarfira ji.duaaein.
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«Reply #23 on: January 30, 2013, 07:47:41 AM »
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bahut hi shandar peshkash. bahut si daad
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«Reply #24 on: January 30, 2013, 09:23:44 AM »
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BAHUT SHUKRIYA AUR ADAAB.PARWAAZ SAHEB , SARAAI = INN / MUSAFIR KHANA, A PLACE WHERE YOU COME FOR A SHORT STAY.
Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!



Mashaa Allaah janab kia kahne waaH jee badi hi dilshaad kalaam kahi
hai aapne... behad umdaa aur dilkash ashaaroN se khoob sajaayi hai
yeH gazal.... Usual Smile


Humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Aise hi umda gazaloN se bazm ko roshan karte rahiye... Shaad O aabaad
rahiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile






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«Reply #25 on: January 30, 2013, 11:18:35 AM »
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 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut bahut khoob hasan jee. Behad hi pyaari kalam rahi aapki. Hamari dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #26 on: January 30, 2013, 12:48:54 PM »
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bahut khoobsoorat peshkash bhaai jaan dheron daad
SAINI BHAI, SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #27 on: January 30, 2013, 01:20:14 PM »
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wah wah wah wah wah wah wah wah, kya baaaat hai sir abto alfaaz bhi saath nahi dete sabhi alfaz chote nazar aate hain aapke kalaaam ke aage. sabhi ashaar khoob rahe  khas taur se ye shair to kamaal hai wah  wah wah wah


DooriyaaN Saaya-e-Dushman se zaroori haiN magar ,

Fasla Ahl - e - karam se bhi banaaye rakhna,



is shair ke liye k rau qubool kareN

AARISH,DUAAEIN. BAHUT SHUKRIYA KI AAP NE GHAZAL PASAND KI.YEH MERI KAFI PURANI GHAZAL HAI JO ZAIQA BADALNE KE LIYE POST KARNE KI HIMMAT KI. SHUKR HAI KI ISKI PAZEERAI HUI.AAP NE BHI MERA PASANDIDA SHER SARAHA, BAHUT SHUKRIYA.
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«Reply #28 on: January 30, 2013, 04:19:01 PM »
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sarfira ji , shukriya.
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«Reply #29 on: January 30, 2013, 05:40:45 PM »
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Bahuttttttttttttttt Bahutttttttttttttttt Khooooooooooooob Saheb...

Har Ek Ashaar Par hazaaro Daad....Lajawaab


 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!




KHWAISH JI, BAHUT SHUKRIYA AUR BAHUT DUAAEIN.HASAN
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