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Ye khubsurat ghazal basically mere father
Late Shri Vidya Bhushan Rastogi Ji ki likhi hui hai Jise
thoda modification/addition ke sath pesh kar Raha hun.
Pathakon ke comments ka intazar rahega:
MERI ZINDAGI AUR PURSOZ AAHEN
KI HAR ZAKHM DIL KA PIGHLANE LAGA HAI
WO UMMEED-E-REHMAT-VAR AAYE NA AAYE
TAMANNAON KA DAM NIKALANE LAGA HAI
YE DUNIYA-E-GULSHAN KE RANGEEN NAGHME
NA YE RAAS AAYEE NA WO RAAS AAYE
KI CHOTON KO DIL PER KAHAN TAK SAMBHALEN
LAHU ASHQ BAN KAR NIKALANE LAGA HAI
WO AAYANGE YE MERE DIL KO YAKIN THA
BICHHI RAH GAIN JINKI RAHON ME AANKHEN
GHAM-E-DIL KI MAYOOS TARIKION ME
WO RANG AASMA BHI BADALANE LAGA HAI
SUNENGE NA KAB TAK NA AAYENGE KAB TAK
KAHAN TAK RAHEGI YE NAAKAM CHAHAT
YE MALOOM HOTA HAI JOSH-E-JUNUN BHI
SAMBHALTE SAMBHALTE SAMBHALANE LAGA HAI
SARVESH RASTOGI
PHONE 9810391523
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2009, 03:47:20 AM » |
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Swargiye Vidya Bhushan Jee ke is kalam ko mera kalam, bohat khoobsurti se likha hain unhone....Lahu ashq bankar nikalne laga hain..Bohat khoob.
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2009, 07:45:22 AM » |
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GUD SHARING SARVESH BHAI..
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«Reply #3 on: May 15, 2009, 09:02:01 AM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya Sajid Bhai
Ek aur sher aapki nazar hai
JEEVAN MERA ULJHI HUI ZULPHON SE KAM NAHIN
JITNA SAMVARATA RAHA UTANE HI BAL PADE
HANS-HANS KE PEE RAHA HUN GAME ZINDAGI KE GHUNT
MERI TARAH JIYE TO KALEJA NIKAL PADE
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«Reply #5 on: May 15, 2009, 01:17:50 PM » |
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«Reply #6 on: May 15, 2009, 03:28:45 PM » |
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SHUKRIYA PANDIT JI
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«Reply #7 on: May 15, 2009, 03:43:13 PM » |
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«Reply #8 on: May 15, 2009, 03:51:33 PM » |
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA KAASH JI
KADRADANON KA HAMESHA SWAGAT HAI
EK KHAS SHER KHAS TAUR SE AAPKI NAZAR
FAQAT EK HASRAT-E-DEEDAR LEKAR DIL ME AAYA THA
HAZARON DARD LEKAR JA RAHA HUN BAZME JANA SE
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«Reply #9 on: May 15, 2009, 03:53:38 PM » |
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA CELMIRA JI
BAS YUN HI HIMMAT BADHATE RAHIYE
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«Reply #10 on: May 15, 2009, 05:22:36 PM » |
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA KAASH JI
KADRADANON KA HAMESHA SWAGAT HAI
EK KHAS SHER KHAS TAUR SE AAPKI NAZAR
FAQAT EK HASRAT-E-DEEDAR LEKAR DIL ME AAYA THA
HAZARON DARD LEKAR JA RAHA HUN BAZME JANA SE
SARVESH RASTOGI
Sarvesh thodi si shararat kar raha hu....Aisa kya tha unke deedar me, jo tum huye dard se rubaroo
Kahi tumne bhi dekha to nahi, unki aakho me mera chehra...
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2009, 12:50:05 AM » |
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Bahut khoob Ghayal Ji
Khubsurat sher kaha hai aapne DARD per
Ek sher aapke liye
ACHCHHA HUA KE DARD NE CHAUKA DIYA MUJHE
KUCHH NEEND AA CHALI THI SHAB-E-INTAZAR ME
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2009, 01:04:42 AM » |
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beautiful gazal,very nice sharing sarvesh ji.
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2009, 03:09:25 AM » |
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Ye khubsurat ghazal basically mere father
Late Shri Vidya Bhushan Rastogi Ji ki likhi hui hai Jise
thoda modification/addition ke sath pesh kar Raha hun.
Pathakon ke comments ka intazar rahega:
MERI ZINDAGI AUR PURSOZ AAHEN
KI HAR ZAKHM DIL KA PIGHLANE LAGA HAI
WO UMMEED-E-REHMAT-VAR AAYE NA AAYE
TAMANNAON KA DAM NIKALANE LAGA HAI
YE DUNIYA-E-GULSHAN KE RANGEEN NAGHME
NA YE RAAS AAYEE NA WO RAAS AAYE
KI CHOTON KO DIL PER KAHAN TAK SAMBHALEN
LAHU ASHQ BAN KAR NIKALANE LAGA HAI
WO AAYANGE YE MERE DIL KO YAKIN THA
BICHHI RAH GAIN JINKI RAHON ME AANKHEN
GHAM-E-DIL KI MAYOOS TARIKION ME
WO RANG AASMA BHI BADALANE LAGA HAI
SUNENGE NA KAB TAK NA AAYENGE KAB TAK
KAHAN TAK RAHEGI YE NAAKAM CHAHAT
YE MALOOM HOTA HAI JOSH-E-JUNUN BHI
SAMBHALTE SAMBHALTE SAMBHALANE LAGA HAI
SARVESH RASTOGI
PHONE 9810391523
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«Reply #14 on: May 16, 2009, 05:23:49 AM » |
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Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
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on eTI community..
