"meri zindagi mein aaye"

by aaina on August 08, 2009, 07:40:58 PM
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Meri Zindagi Main Aaye, Inayat Karam Meherbaani,
Kar Doon Nisaar Tujh Par Main Apni Zindagani

Har Manzar Khil Utha Hai Teri Aamad Ke Aage,
Wo Hawaaon Ka Behekna, Wo Baadalon Ka Paani

Tere Mehekte Gesuon Ke, Subho Shaam Ke Fasane.
Huawy Hain Mujhpe Zaahir, Hawaaon Ki Zubaani

Chuaa Tha Jis Ghadi Tujhe Khwaab Ke Sahare,
Jala Tanbadan Bhi Mera, Hui Tishnagi Deewani

Unhi Raaston Pe Chal Ke Jahan Zakhmi Main Hua Tha,
Thaama Hai Tune Mujh Ko, Di Pyaar Ki Nishaani

Hua Hai Tujhme Mujhme Jaane Kaisa Ye Lagaao,
Kabhi Muskuraya Hai Tu, Kabhi Baat Maine Maani
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«Reply #1 on: August 08, 2009, 07:44:44 PM »
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wah wah wah..... aaina ji... bahut hi khoob, wah wah

jasbir singh
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«Reply #2 on: August 08, 2009, 10:34:09 PM »
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Wah ji its very nice bohat acha likha hai aap ne really nice Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 09, 2009, 03:55:11 AM »
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Meri Zindagi Main Aaye, Inayat Karam Meherbaani,
Kar Doon Nisaar Tujh Par Main Apni Zindagani

Har Manzar Khil Utha Hai Teri Aamad Ke Aage,
Wo Hawaaon Ka Behekna, Wo Baadalon Ka Paani

Bahut umda likha hai.... wah wah... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
(Kispe itni meherbani?  tongue3 )
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«Reply #4 on: August 09, 2009, 07:04:33 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 08, 2009, 07:40:58 PM
Meri Zindagi Main Aaye, Inayat Karam Meherbaani,
Kar Doon Nisaar Tujh Par Main Apni Zindagani

Har Manzar Khil Utha Hai Teri Aamad Ke Aage,
Wo Hawaaon Ka Behekna, Wo Baadalon Ka Paani

Tere Mehekte Gesuon Ke, Subho Shaam Ke Fasane.
Huawy Hain Mujhpe Zaahir, Hawaaon Ki Zubaani

Chuaa Tha Jis Ghadi Tujhe Khwaab Ke Sahare,
Jala Tanbadan Bhi Mera, Hui Tishnagi Deewani

Unhi Raaston Pe Chal Ke Jahan Zakhmi Main Hua Tha,
Thaama Hai Tune Mujh Ko, Di Pyaar Ki Nishaani

Hua Hai Tujhme Mujhme Jaane Kaisa Ye Lagaao,
Kabhi Muskuraya Hai Tu, Kabhi Baat Maine Maani


Bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne Aslam Ji.. Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 09, 2009, 07:09:18 AM »
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Beautiful gazal Aslam ji,bahut khoob mindblowing creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.
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«Reply #6 on: August 09, 2009, 04:23:08 PM »
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Waah Aslam ji.. Kya kahiye.. kya kamaal ka likha hai .. bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: August 09, 2009, 05:32:33 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 08, 2009, 07:40:58 PM
Meri Zindagi Main Aaye, Inayat Karam Meherbaani,
Kar Doon Nisaar Tujh Par Main Apni Zindagani

Har Manzar Khil Utha Hai Teri Aamad Ke Aage,
Wo Hawaaon Ka Behekna, Wo Baadalon Ka Paani

Tere Mehekte Gesuon Ke, Subho Shaam Ke Fasane.
Huawy Hain Mujhpe Zaahir, Hawaaon Ki Zubaani

Chuaa Tha Jis Ghadi Tujhe Khwaab Ke Sahare,
Jala Tanbadan Bhi Mera, Hui Tishnagi Deewani

Unhi Raaston Pe Chal Ke Jahan Zakhmi Main Hua Tha,
Thaama Hai Tune Mujh Ko, Di Pyaar Ki Nishaani

Hua Hai Tujhme Mujhme Jaane Kaisa Ye Lagaao,
Kabhi Muskuraya Hai Tu, Kabhi Baat Maine Maani


Behad khoobsurat alfaaz aur ehsasat se bhari ghazal.

Bohot Khoob Aaina Ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 10, 2009, 11:30:36 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on August 08, 2009, 07:40:58 PM
Meri Zindagi Main Aaye, Inayat Karam Meherbaani,
Kar Doon Nisaar Tujh Par Main Apni Zindagani

Har Manzar Khil Utha Hai Teri Aamad Ke Aage,
Wo Hawaaon Ka Behekna, Wo Baadalon Ka Paani

Tere Mehekte Gesuon Ke, Subho Shaam Ke Fasane.
Huawy Hain Mujhpe Zaahir, Hawaaon Ki Zubaani

Chuaa Tha Jis Ghadi Tujhe Khwaab Ke Sahare,
Jala Tanbadan Bhi Mera, Hui Tishnagi Deewani

Unhi Raaston Pe Chal Ke Jahan Zakhmi Main Hua Tha,
Thaama Hai Tune Mujh Ko, Di Pyaar Ki Nishaani

Hua Hai Tujhme Mujhme Jaane Kaisa Ye Lagaao,
Kabhi Muskuraya Hai Tu, Kabhi Baat Maine Maani


Bohot Khoobsurat ghazal Aslam Ji  Applause Applause Applause

Hum to yahi kahenge aap ki zindagi main aane waala sada hi aap ki zindagi main rahe. Allah humesha aap ko khush rakhe, ameen  Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2009, 04:25:22 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 08, 2009, 07:44:44 PM
wah wah wah..... aaina ji... bahut hi khoob, wah wah

jasbir singh

shukriya sir ji aapne pasnd ki ji khush hua
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2009, 04:26:04 PM »
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Quote from: khushi4pari on August 08, 2009, 10:34:09 PM
Wah ji its very nice bohat acha likha hai aap ne really nice Applause Applause Applause Applause

thnxxxxx so much pari thnxxx for ur appriciation
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«Reply #11 on: August 11, 2009, 04:28:09 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on August 09, 2009, 03:55:11 AM
Bahut umda likha hai.... wah wah... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
(Kispe itni meherbani?  tongue3 )


shukriya dear bhut bhut shukriya, aree dear kisi par nhi apne aap par hi bas.......
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«Reply #12 on: August 11, 2009, 04:28:43 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on August 09, 2009, 07:04:33 AM
Bahut khoobsurti se likha hai aapne Aslam Ji.. Applause


thnxxxxxx angel
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«Reply #13 on: August 11, 2009, 04:29:25 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on August 09, 2009, 07:09:18 AM
Beautiful gazal Aslam ji,bahut khoob mindblowing creation icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent.



thnxxxxx so much madhu ji
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«Reply #14 on: August 11, 2009, 04:30:31 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on August 09, 2009, 04:23:08 PM
Waah Aslam ji.. Kya kahiye.. kya kamaal ka likha hai .. bahoot Khoob!


shukria sophi ji bhut bhut skhukriya aapko pasnd aayi mehnat wasool
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