Meri zindagi tere naam hain, tujhe aur haq kya ataa karu

by livingbytheday on June 15, 2012, 05:41:40 PM
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Meri zindagi tere naam hain, tujhe aur haq kya ataa karu
Mujhpar khuda ka jo haq bacha, tere naam karne ki khataa karu

Tu talaash hain meri raah ka, meri manzilein tujh tak hi hain
Tu naseeb hain mera tujhe, yaqeen na aaye toh kya karu

tu bulayega toh yeh na ho, teri awaaz mujh tak na aa sake
meri zindagi tere dar se aage, na badhna chahe toh kya karu

mera jism bus libaas hain, tere bin ek zinda laash hu
tera ishq hain to hain zindagi, tu lout aaye dua karu

nayi manzilon ko jeetne ka maza to tere saath hain
tu raah raah banaya kar, main paon paon chala karu

kuch aur ke layak nahi “deepak” mujhe maloom hain   
mujhe rakh le apne paas tu, tere anjuman mein jala karu
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2012, 05:57:12 PM »
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Deepak jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne janab waaH jee waaH bahut khoob... bade hi khoobsurat
khayaal aur umdaa andaaz e bayaaN ... kia kahne janab waaH...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye....

likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2012, 06:03:30 PM »
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Bahut hi khoobsurat maqta farmaaya hai aapne Deepak jee

vaah bhi, kya kahne aapke ehsaason ke..

likhte rahiye yun hi
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2012, 06:20:54 PM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on June 15, 2012, 05:41:40 PM
Meri zindagi tere naam hain, tujhe aur haq kya ataa karu
Mujhpar khuda ka jo haq bacha, tere naam karne ki khataa karu

Tu talaash hain meri raah ka, meri manzilein tujh tak hi hain
Tu naseeb hain mera tujhe, yaqeen na aaye toh kya karu

tu bulayega toh yeh na ho, teri awaaz mujh tak na aa sake
meri zindagi tere dar se aage, na badhna chahe toh kya karu

mera jism bus libaas hain, tere bin ek zinda laash hu
tera ishq hain to hain zindagi, tu lout aaye dua karu

nayi manzilon ko jeetne ka maza to tere saath hain
tu raah raah banaya kar, main paon paon chala karu

kuch aur ke layak nahi “deepak” mujhe maloom hain   
mujhe rakh le apne paas tu, tere anjuman mein jala karu
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2012, 06:31:02 PM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on June 15, 2012, 05:41:40 PM
Meri zindagi tere naam hain, tujhe aur haq kya ataa karu
Mujhpar khuda ka jo haq bacha, tere naam karne ki khataa karu

Tu talaash hain meri raah ka, meri manzilein tujh tak hi hain
Tu naseeb hain mera tujhe, yaqeen na aaye toh kya karu

tu bulayega toh yeh na ho, teri awaaz mujh tak na aa sake
meri zindagi tere dar se aage, na badhna chahe toh kya karu

mera jism bus libaas hain, tere bin ek zinda laash hu
tera ishq hain to hain zindagi, tu lout aaye dua karu

nayi manzilon ko jeetne ka maza to tere saath hain
tu raah raah banaya kar, main paon paon chala karu

kuch aur ke layak nahi “deepak” mujhe maloom hain    
mujhe rakh le apne paas tu, tere anjuman mein jala karu




naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaice . hain ki jagah hai likhein ----one rau
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2012, 06:46:40 PM »
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wah wha... bohot khoob
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2012, 01:19:44 AM »
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bahut khoob ghazal pesh kee hai deepak jidheron daad aur ek rau
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2012, 02:11:00 AM »
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Deepak ji kya baat hai, bohut khoob ghazal kahi hai, waqai har shair aapki qabliyat bayan kar raha hai, khaskar ye do ashar ashar bohut khoob hai ,
mera jism bus libaas hain, tere bin ek zinda laash hu
tera ishq hain to hain zindagi, tu lout aaye dua karu,

nayi manzilon ko jeetne ka maza to tere saath hain
tu raah raah banaya kar, main paon paon chala karu

In dono ashar k liye zindabad ,,,,,,,,,
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«Reply #8 on: June 16, 2012, 02:29:14 AM »
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Beautifull
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 16, 2012, 07:57:08 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI DEEPAK JEE.
DHERON DAAD, MUBARAKBAAD AUR RAU KUBOOL KIJIYE
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«Reply #11 on: June 16, 2012, 08:01:21 AM »
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bohut khub janab kamaal ka likha hai
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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2012, 09:03:59 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on June 15, 2012, 05:57:12 PM
Deepak jee Aadaab!

Kia kahne janab waaH jee waaH bahut khoob... bade hi khoobsurat
khayaal aur umdaa andaaz e bayaaN ... kia kahne janab waaH...

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye....

likhate rahiye.... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile                 


parwaaz ji, app logo ke housle se encouragement milti hain, thank you
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2012, 09:05:17 AM »
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Quote from: mkv on June 15, 2012, 06:03:30 PM
Bahut hi khoobsurat maqta farmaaya hai aapne Deepak jee

vaah bhi, kya kahne aapke ehsaason ke..

likhte rahiye yun hi

shukriyaa housla dene ke liyeh
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 15, 2012, 06:20:54 PM
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