Mili khaakh mein mohabatt, hasaa khoob hai zamana

by livingbytheday on January 10, 2013, 05:51:04 PM
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Mili khaakh mein mohabatt, hasaa khoob hai zamana
Mere dil magar wafa ke, zakhmo ko na deekhana
Mere dil se khelkar shayad, tera dil nahi bhara ho
Kisi aur ke chaman mein, par aag na lagaanaa

Tere naam ka deewaana, hur baat chahtaa tha
Kahi tod dala mujhko, tera fayaada uthana

Aadhe safar mein raahi rastaa bhatak ke soche
Sahi aur aagey badhnaa, ya palat ke lout jaanaa

Mujhko sanam, khuda woh kya kya na bolta tha
Usney hi aaj rastey, mujhko nahi pehchaanaa

Hai yeh mohabatton ka kaisa asar na jaane
Dil doob doobkar bhi, chaahe paar paar jaana

Dhoke shehar mein aakar, mouke taalashtey hai
Maa ne kaha tha mujhse, bahut duur  tak na jaanaa

“Deepak”  yeh jaana humne lehro mein doobkar
Saahil ke raet par, kabhi sapne nahi banaanaa
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«Reply #1 on: January 10, 2013, 09:39:22 PM »
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Bahut bahut khoob janaab, 1st, 2nd, 4th aur 6th she'r bahut hi khoob lage. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2013, 01:30:22 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: January 11, 2013, 03:13:15 AM »
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wah wah kya baat hai umda peshkash
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waaah janab bohut umda likha hai
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«Reply #5 on: January 11, 2013, 04:22:59 AM »
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bahut sunder deepak ji
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«Reply #6 on: January 11, 2013, 05:06:07 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob
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«Reply #7 on: January 11, 2013, 01:27:08 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  wah wah wah wah Deepak ji kyaa baat hai.. bahut khobb likha hai aapne... bahut achcha laga padh ke....!!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2013, 06:54:05 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on January 10, 2013, 09:39:22 PM
Bahut bahut khoob janaab, 1st, 2nd, 4th aur 6th she'r bahut hi khoob lage. Bahut bahut mubarakbaad aur ek Rau meri taraf se.

thank you so much sir, aapko yeh ghazal pasand ayee, itna bahut hai. god bless
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«Reply #9 on: January 12, 2013, 04:05:20 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on January 10, 2013, 05:51:04 PM
Mili khaakh mein mohabatt, hasaa khoob hai zamana
Mere dil magar wafa ke, zakhmo ko na deekhana

Waahh bahut sundar misre kahe hai'n aapne. Daad qubool keejiye.
Mere dil se khelkar shayad, tera dil nahi bhara ho
Kisi aur ke chaman mein, par aag na lagaanaa

Behad naazuk khyaal. Waaahhh

Tere naam ka deewaana, hur baat chahtaa tha
Kahi tod dala mujhko, tera fayaada uthana

Aadhe safar mein raahi rastaa bhatak ke soche
Sahi aur aagey badhnaa, ya palat ke lout jaanaa

Ye to shero'n ka sher hai bhai. behad ma'ani-khez. Eeshwar se yahi duaa hai ki aap bina bhatke aage ki taraf hi badhte chale'n.

Mujhko sanam, khuda woh kya kya na bolta tha
Usney hi aaj rastey, mujhko nahi pehchaanaa

Sher kaafi ulajh gaya hai bhai. Lekin khyaal ek baar fir bahut hi umda. Bahut khoob

Hai yeh mohabatton ka kaisa asar na jaane
Dil doob doobkar bhi, chaahe paar paar jaana

Achcha khyaal. sundar

Dhoke shehar mein aakar, mouke taalashtey hai
Maa ne kaha tha mujhse, bahut duur  tak na jaanaa

Hats off yaar
Aisa khyaal kisi ustaad shayar ko mile to uska sher sabki zubaan par chhaa jaaye. Awesome thought.

“Deepak”  yeh jaana humne lehro mein doobkar
Saahil ke raet par, kabhi sapne nahi banaanaa

Ek maasoom sa khyaal. Waaahhhhh

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Deepak sahab aapko padh kar laga ke aapke paas khyaal to bahut hai'n aur aap express bhi karte ho apne tareeke se. Kuch jagah par behr se door rahe aap yaani aapko behr ki jaankaari nahi'n hai, lekin fir bhi aapke kuch sher poori tarah behr me'n hai'n aur jo bache wo minor changes se behr me'n aa sakte hai'n. You are brilliant.

It was really nice to read you. Aage bhi aapke kalaam ka intezaar rahega icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: January 12, 2013, 01:36:11 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on January 11, 2013, 01:30:22 AM
bahut khoob

thank you sir
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«Reply #11 on: January 12, 2013, 01:38:08 PM »
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Quote from: Aarish on January 11, 2013, 03:13:15 AM
wah wah kya baat hai umda peshkash

bahut bahut shukriyaa
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Quote from: saahill on January 11, 2013, 03:23:50 AM
waaah janab bohut umda likha hai

thank you saahil bhai
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Quote from: sksaini4 on January 11, 2013, 04:22:59 AM
bahut sunder deepak ji

shukriyaa sir
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«Reply #14 on: January 12, 2013, 01:45:39 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on January 11, 2013, 05:06:07 AM
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bahut bahut khoob

thank you
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