mitana chaha, mita na payay (by vb)

by vb on December 06, 2013, 10:13:00 PM
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Bataana chaaha, bataa na payay
Chhupaana chaaha, chhupaa na payay

Bujhaana chaaha diya sukhan ka
Magar diya hum bujhaa na payay

Sukhan-gari kya tu shayari kya?
Jo zakhm dil kay dikha na payay

Sadaayay gulshan, qafas men bulbul
Kay aana chaaha par aa na payay

Sitam tu ye hay kay apna likha
Mitaanaa chaaha, mitaa na payay

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«Reply #1 on: December 06, 2013, 10:29:08 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 06, 2013, 10:52:51 PM »
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waaaaah !!
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«Reply #3 on: December 06, 2013, 11:54:55 PM »
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behtareen.. kya khub rahi apki yeh peshkash.. dheron badhayi iss kriti ke liye..
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«Reply #4 on: December 06, 2013, 11:57:18 PM »
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shukriya aap sub ka..
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2013, 01:38:18 AM »
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bht hi khaas ghazal Sirji
thanx for dis ghazal
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2013, 02:33:42 AM »
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wha wha
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«Reply #7 on: December 07, 2013, 02:56:15 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob VB jee.
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«Reply #8 on: December 07, 2013, 08:52:38 AM »
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wonderful
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«Reply #9 on: December 07, 2013, 04:26:03 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on December 07, 2013, 01:38:18 AM
bht hi khaas ghazal Sirji
thanx for dis ghazal

Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on December 07, 2013, 02:33:42 AM
wha wha

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on December 07, 2013, 02:56:15 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut hi khoob VB jee.

Quote from: sksaini4 on December 07, 2013, 08:52:38 AM
wonderful

Shukriya aap sub ka....
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2013, 10:36:11 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #11 on: December 09, 2013, 12:29:26 AM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on December 08, 2013, 10:36:11 AM
very nice

thanx...
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