Mohabbat Ho Agar Paida / मोहब्बत हो अगर पैदा...Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

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दिलों में फिर वो पहले सी, मोहब्बत हो अगर पैदा
यक़ीनन हो नहीं सकता, जहाँ में कोई शर (फ़साद) पैदा

फ़जाओं में जो तल्ख़ी (कड़वाहट) है जला कर ख़ाक कर डालो
बुझाओ फिर उसे ऐसे न हो कोई शरर (चिनगारी) पैदा

कहो वो बात जो कानो से, सीने में उतर जाए
असर दिल पे जो कर जाए, करो ऐसी नज़र पैदा

सिवाए ख़ार के हासिल न होगा कुछ मुग़ीलाँ (बबूल का पेड़) से
शजर (वृक्ष) ऐसे लगाओ जिनपे हों मीठे समर (फल) पैदा

इलाजे रंजो-ग़म वो ही, करेगा अब मुसीबत में
दिया है दर्दे दिल जिसने, किया दर्दे जिगर पैदा

तेरे भटके हुए बन्दों को, जो रस्ता दिखा जायें
कुछ ऐसे लोग दुनिया में, ख़ुदाया फिर से कर पैदा

अगर तन्हाई में कह दे कोई, 'मैं मौत हूँ तेरी'
'रक़ीब' उस शख्स के दिल में, सरासर होगा डर पैदा
 
                         ---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

diloN meN fir wo pahle see, mohabbat ho agar paida
yaqeenan ho naheeN sakta jahaaN meN koyee shar (fasad) paida

fazaaoN meN jo talkhee (kadwaahat) hai jala kar khaak kar daalo
bujhaao fir use aise na ho koyee sharar (chingaari) paida

kaho wo baat jo kaanoN se seene meN utar jaaye
asar dil pe jo kar jaaye karo aisee nazar paida

siwaaye khaar ke haasil na hoga kuchh mugeelaN se
shazar (ped) aise lagaao jinpe hoN meethe samar (fal) paida

ilaaje rajo-gam wo hee karega ab museebat meN
diya hai darde-dil jisne, kiya darde-jigar paida

tere bhatke huye bandoN ko jo rasta dikha jaayeN
kuchh aise log duniyaa meN, khudaaya fir se kar paida

agar tanhaaee meN kah de koyee, 'maiN maut hooN teree'
'Raqeeb' us shakhs ke dil meN saraasar hoga dar paida

                          --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #1 on: April 25, 2012, 01:10:16 PM »
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Waah waah Shukla saheb, kafi dino.n k ba'ad tashreef le aaye aur dhamake ke saath. Bahut khoob likha aapne. Bahut bahut daad.
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2012, 01:48:22 PM »
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Bhut umda.
Nhi umda kahna to kam h jabardast kahna chahiye.
Har baar ki tarah aapki ye bhi la zawab h.
Daad kabool kare hamari.
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2012, 02:30:24 PM »
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Shuklaa saahab
bahut Khoob
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umdaa shaayaree ke liye mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2012, 02:38:54 PM »
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boht khub shukla ji
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«Reply #5 on: April 25, 2012, 02:53:39 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on April 25, 2012, 12:26:33 PM

दिलों में फिर वो पहले सी, मोहब्बत हो अगर पैदा
यक़ीनन हो नहीं सकता, जहाँ में कोई शर (फ़साद) पैदा

फ़जाओं में जो तल्ख़ी (कड़वाहट) है जला कर ख़ाक कर डालो
बुझाओ फिर उसे ऐसे न हो कोई शरर (चिनगारी) पैदा

कहो वो बात जो कानो से, सीने में उतर जाए
असर दिल पे जो कर जाए, करो ऐसी नज़र पैदा

सिवाए ख़ार के हासिल न होगा कुछ मुग़ीलाँ (बबूल का पेड़) से
शजर (वृक्ष) ऐसे लगाओ जिनपे हों मीठे समर (फल) पैदा

इलाजे रंजो-ग़म वो ही, करेगा अब मुसीबत में
दिया है दर्दे दिल जिसने, किया दर्दे जिगर पैदा

तेरे भटके हुए बन्दों को, जो रस्ता दिखा जायें
कुछ ऐसे लोग दुनिया में, ख़ुदाया फिर से कर पैदा

अगर तन्हाई में कह दे कोई, 'मैं मौत हूँ तेरी'
'रक़ीब' उस शख्स के दिल में, सरासर होगा डर पैदा
 
                         ---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

diloN meN fir wo pahle see, mohabbat ho agar paida
yaqeenan ho naheeN sakta jahaaN meN koyee shar (fasad) paida

fazaaoN meN jo talkhee (kadwaahat) hai jala kar khaak kar daalo
bujhaao fir use aise na ho koyee sharar (chingaari) paida

kaho wo baat jo kaanoN se seene meN utar jaaye
asar dil pe jo kar jaaye karo aisee nazar paida

siwaaye khaar ke haasil na hoga kuchh mugeelaN se
shazar (ped) aise lagaao jinpe hoN meethe samar (fal) paida

ilaaje rajo-gam wo hee karega ab museebat meN
diya hai darde-dil jisne, kiya darde-jigar paida

tere bhatke huye bandoN ko jo rasta dikha jaayeN
kuchh aise log duniyaa meN, khudaaya fir se kar paida

agar tanhaaee meN kah de koyee, 'maiN maut hooN teree'
'Raqeeb' us shakhs ke dil meN saraasar hoga dar paida

                          --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Waaah Waaah waaah!!!

Bahut Bahut Khooob Satish ji..

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Behtariin...Kis sher ki tariif karun aur kise chhodun...ek se badh kar ek sher kahen hain aapne...subhan allah..dili daad kabool karen satish bhai...zindabaad... icon_salut icon_salut hello2 Applause Applause Applause
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Waah  bhai  Satish ji . Maza  aa  gaya .
Kya   khubsurat   ghazal   kahi   hai .
Her   she'r   qaabil  e  daad   hai .
bahut   bahut   mubarakbaad  .  Hasan
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waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh satishjii....wonderful thoughts....bahut khoob...Usual SmileClapping SmileyClapping Smiley
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«Reply #10 on: April 26, 2012, 03:30:42 AM »
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bahut bahut khub satishji

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bahut khoob kalaam pesh kiyaa hai satish ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #12 on: April 26, 2012, 05:34:27 AM »
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Muhatram Satish Shukla - Raqeeb Saheb aadab ,aapki Ye shehr angez ghazal  aapki purwaqar shakhsiyet pe dalalat kar rahi hai ,, ,, Kabhi kabhi aisa waqt bhi aata hai ke ghazal ki pazirai me qaari ko apna har lafz kamtar lagne lagta hai yahi surate haal hai idhar ,,  Ap is nachiz ki jaanib se dad o mubarak baad khubool kare.N, Apki ghazal ne khoob lutf diya ,, Allah apko khoob nawaze …

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«Reply #13 on: April 26, 2012, 09:57:45 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on April 25, 2012, 12:26:33 PM

दिलों में फिर वो पहले सी, मोहब्बत हो अगर पैदा
यक़ीनन हो नहीं सकता, जहाँ में कोई शर (फ़साद) पैदा

फ़जाओं में जो तल्ख़ी (कड़वाहट) है जला कर ख़ाक कर डालो
बुझाओ फिर उसे ऐसे न हो कोई शरर (चिनगारी) पैदा

कहो वो बात जो कानो से, सीने में उतर जाए
असर दिल पे जो कर जाए, करो ऐसी नज़र पैदा

सिवाए ख़ार के हासिल न होगा कुछ मुग़ीलाँ (बबूल का पेड़) से
शजर (वृक्ष) ऐसे लगाओ जिनपे हों मीठे समर (फल) पैदा

इलाजे रंजो-ग़म वो ही, करेगा अब मुसीबत में
दिया है दर्दे दिल जिसने, किया दर्दे जिगर पैदा

तेरे भटके हुए बन्दों को, जो रस्ता दिखा जायें
कुछ ऐसे लोग दुनिया में, ख़ुदाया फिर से कर पैदा

अगर तन्हाई में कह दे कोई, 'मैं मौत हूँ तेरी'
'रक़ीब' उस शख्स के दिल में, सरासर होगा डर पैदा
 
                         ---- सतीश शुक्ला 'रक़ीब'

diloN meN fir wo pahle see, mohabbat ho agar paida
yaqeenan ho naheeN sakta jahaaN meN koyee shar (fasad) paida

fazaaoN meN jo talkhee (kadwaahat) hai jala kar khaak kar daalo
bujhaao fir use aise na ho koyee sharar (chingaari) paida

kaho wo baat jo kaanoN se seene meN utar jaaye
asar dil pe jo kar jaaye karo aisee nazar paida

siwaaye khaar ke haasil na hoga kuchh mugeelaN se
shazar (ped) aise lagaao jinpe hoN meethe samar (fal) paida

ilaaje rajo-gam wo hee karega ab museebat meN
diya hai darde-dil jisne, kiya darde-jigar paida

tere bhatke huye bandoN ko jo rasta dikha jaayeN
kuchh aise log duniyaa meN, khudaaya fir se kar paida

agar tanhaaee meN kah de koyee, 'maiN maut hooN teree'
'Raqeeb' us shakhs ke dil meN saraasar hoga dar paida

                          --- Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2012, 11:28:19 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 25, 2012, 01:10:16 PM
Waah waah Shukla saheb, kafi dino.n k ba'ad tashreef le aaye aur dhamake ke saath. Bahut khoob likha aapne. Bahut bahut daad.



Hausala afzai ka bahut bahut shukriya......Raqeeb
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