Mohabbat jurm hoti tu (by vb)

by vb on February 04, 2013, 12:17:02 PM
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Tumhari yaad say chhup kar guzaara kar bhe letay hum
Mohabbat jurm hoti tu, dobaraa kar bhe letay hum

Abhi kuchh aur jeenay ka, jo hota hausla hum men
Nayay dhokon ko phir kuchh din, sahaara kar bhe letay hum

Hamaray saath vabista, agar kuchh loug na hotay
Tu is bekaar jeevan say, kinaaraa kar bhe letay hum

Hamaari saans chalti hay, tumhaari yaad say varna
Tumhen dil say bhula dena, gawara kar bhe letay hum

Tumhari yaad say chhup kar guzaara kar bhe letay hum
Mohabbat jurm hoti tu, dobaraa kar bhe letay hum



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«Reply #1 on: February 04, 2013, 01:07:36 PM »
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VB Jee Aadaab!



WaaH jee waaH kia kahne aapke andaaz e bayaaN ke ... behad khoob ashaar 'kahe hai janab... Puri kalaam hi behad khoob rahe.. Usual Smile


Is umdaa kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Aur in quoted ashaaroN ke kia kahne janab bus dil ko lag gaye.. Usual Smile


HazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile
Bazm meiN aate rahiye...
Shad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile


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Hamaray saath vabista, agar kuchh loug na hotay
Tu is bekaar jeevan say, kinaaraa kar bhe letay hum

Hamaari saans chalti hay, tumhaari yaad say varna
Tumhen dil say bhula dena, gawara kar kar bhe letay hum




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«Reply #2 on: February 04, 2013, 01:22:44 PM »
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waah khubsurat kalaam,........bohat c daad,........
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«Reply #4 on: February 04, 2013, 01:29:48 PM »
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Quote from: vb on February 04, 2013, 12:17:02 PM


Tumhari yaad say chhup kar guzaara kar bhe letay hum
Mohabbat jurm hoti tu, dobaraa kar bhe letay hum

Abhi kuchh aur jeenay ka, jo hota hausla hum men
Nayay dhokon ko phir kuchh din, sahaara kar bhe letay hum

Hamaray saath vabista, agar kuchh loug na hotay
Tu is bekaar jeevan say, kinaaraa kar bhe letay hum

Hamaari saans chalti hay, tumhaari yaad say varna
Tumhen dil say bhula dena, gawara kar bhe letay hum

Tumhari yaad say chhup kar guzaara kar bhe letay hum
Mohabbat jurm hoti tu, dobaraa kar bhe letay hum



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excellant.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: February 04, 2013, 01:43:11 PM »
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beautiful. bahut pyare 3 & 4 sher. mubarakbad.
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«Reply #6 on: February 04, 2013, 01:58:59 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: February 04, 2013, 03:02:06 PM »
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beautiful. dil ko choone wale ehsaas. hamari dili mubarakbad qubool kare
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«Reply #8 on: February 04, 2013, 03:26:56 PM »
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Quote from: vb on February 04, 2013, 12:17:02 PM


Tumhari yaad say chhup kar guzaara kar bhe letay hum
Mohabbat jurm hoti tu, dobaraa kar bhe letay hum

Abhi kuchh aur jeenay ka, jo hota hausla hum men
Nayay dhokon ko phir kuchh din, sahaara kar bhe letay hum

Hamaray saath vabista, agar kuchh loug na hotay
Tu is bekaar jeevan say, kinaaraa kar bhe letay hum

Hamaari saans chalti hay, tumhaari yaad say varna
Tumhen dil say bhula dena, gawara kar bhe letay hum

Tumhari yaad say chhup kar guzaara kar bhe letay hum
Mohabbat jurm hoti tu, dobaraa kar bhe letay hum



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«Reply #9 on: February 04, 2013, 04:09:18 PM »
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Ahhaaa..
Attaulah khaan sahab yaad aa gaye..

Aisa bahut kam lagta hai.. Kisi ko padh k lage .. Ye to meri hi baat hai..

Bahut khoob sahab
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«Reply #10 on: February 04, 2013, 04:21:36 PM »
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lajawaab VB Sirji

aapsse shikayat hai ki  aap bht kam likhte hain

khus rahie
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shukriya aap sub ka....

sarfira jee! achha hay, ye shikayat tu nahi k hum likhtay he ku hen...
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«Reply #12 on: February 05, 2013, 03:39:32 PM »
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waah waah waah waah Vb ji.. kyaa kehne .. bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne......!!!
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wah wah wah
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Shukriya ~Hriday~ jee and nandbahu jee!
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