Mohabbat ke aadaab kahta raha.......................................Aqsh...

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Woh mere chehre ko chamakta hua, aaftaab kehta raha
Aur kabhi toh khilta hua, ek taaza gulaab kehta raha

SamjhooN toh kya samjhooN, kahooN toh kya kahooN
Sawal apne laboN par rakhkar, wohi jawab kehta raha

Meri aankhoN ko dekhkar, doobne ki tamanna kee
Kabhi jheel kaha aur kabhi, khuli kitaab kehta raha

Jab kabhi bekhudi meiN, nasha sa chhaane lag jaata hai
LaboN ko paimaane se chalakta hua, sharaab kehta raha

Rukhsaar se meri woh, bikhri hui zulfon ko hatate hue
Badli meiN kyuN chhup gaya, mera mehtaab kehta raha

Hawa se udhta mera aanchal, jo zara sa sarakh gaya
Dekhkar mere husn ko bas, woh lajawaab kehta raha

Jab bhi nazreiN mili, sirf nihaarta hi raha “Aqsh” ko
Poochne par ise woh, muhabbat ke aadaab kehta raha
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«Reply #1 on: December 03, 2013, 01:28:42 PM »
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waah waah laajawaab peshkash dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2013, 01:30:45 PM »
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wwwaaaahhhhhhhhhhh, din ki suruaat ho to aisi Ghazal se ho...
Maza aa gaya Aqsh ji Ghazal padhkar, aisa lag raha hai jaise aapne apnii tasviir ko tahriir me dhaal diya ho...
Beautiful Ghazal ...
bahut bahut khoob...
Dheron daad kabool karein...
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«Reply #3 on: December 03, 2013, 01:31:53 PM »
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Meri aankhoN ko dekhkar, doobne ki tamanna kee
Kabhi jheel kaha aur kabhi, khuli kitaab kehta raha
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Jab kabhi bekhudi meiN, nasha sa chhaane lag jaata hai
LaboN ko paimaane se chalakta hua, sharaab kehta raha
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Rukhsaar se meri woh, bikhri hui zulfon ko hatate hue
Badli meiN kyuN chhup gaya, mera mehtaab kehta raha

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Bahut Khoobsurat Likha hai Aqsh Ji. Dheron Daad.
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«Reply #4 on: December 03, 2013, 01:38:20 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 03, 2013, 01:25:32 PM
Woh mere chehre ko chamakta hua, aaftaab kehta raha
Aur kabhi toh khilta hua, ek taaza gulaab kehta raha

SamjhooN toh kya samjhooN, kahooN toh kya kahooN
Sawal apne laboN par rakhkar, wohi jawab kehta raha

Meri aankhoN ko dekhkar, doobne ki tamanna kee
Kabhi jheel kaha aur kabhi, khuli kitaab kehta raha

Jab kabhi bekhudi meiN, nasha sa chhaane lag jaata hai
LaboN ko paimaane se chalakta hua, sharaab kehta raha

Rukhsaar se meri woh, bikhri hui zulfon ko hatate hue
Badli meiN kyuN chhup gaya, mera mehtaab kehta raha

Hawa se udhta mera aanchal, jo zara sa sarakh gaya
Dekhkar mere husn ko bas, woh lajawaab kehta raha

Jab bhi nazreiN mili, sirf nihaarta hi raha “Aqsh” ko
Poochne par ise woh, muhabbat ke aadaab kehta raha



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«Reply #5 on: December 03, 2013, 01:49:12 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 03, 2013, 01:28:42 PM
waah waah laajawaab peshkash dheron daad aur mubarakbaad
thnxxxxxxxxxxx saini sir a lotttttttt...
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2013, 01:50:32 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on December 03, 2013, 01:30:45 PM
wwwaaaahhhhhhhhhhh, din ki suruaat ho to aisi Ghazal se ho...
Maza aa gaya Aqsh ji Ghazal padhkar, aisa lag raha hai jaise aapne apnii tasviir ko tahriir me dhaal diya ho...
Beautiful Ghazal ...
bahut bahut khoob...
Dheron daad kabool karein...
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thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much bishwajeet ji....
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«Reply #7 on: December 03, 2013, 01:51:18 PM »
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on December 03, 2013, 01:31:53 PM
Meri aankhoN ko dekhkar, doobne ki tamanna kee
Kabhi jheel kaha aur kabhi, khuli kitaab kehta raha
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Jab kabhi bekhudi meiN, nasha sa chhaane lag jaata hai
LaboN ko paimaane se chalakta hua, sharaab kehta raha
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
Rukhsaar se meri woh, bikhri hui zulfon ko hatate hue
Badli meiN kyuN chhup gaya, mera mehtaab kehta raha

 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Bahut Khoobsurat Likha hai Aqsh Ji. Dheron Daad.
thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttttttt saxena ji...
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«Reply #8 on: December 03, 2013, 01:54:10 PM »
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Quote from: qalb on December 03, 2013, 01:38:20 PM

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thank you soooooooooo much qalb ji..
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«Reply #9 on: December 03, 2013, 03:20:59 PM »
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behtareen ghazal
daad daad daad

kuch cmnt krna iss ghazal par: suraj ko dia dikhana hoga:

be happy lwys

jai babaji
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«Reply #10 on: December 03, 2013, 04:10:51 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 03, 2013, 01:25:32 PM
Woh mere chehre ko chamakta hua, aaftaab kehta raha
Aur kabhi toh khilta hua, ek taaza gulaab kehta raha

SamjhooN toh kya samjhooN, kahooN toh kya kahooN
Sawal apne laboN par rakhkar, wohi jawab kehta raha

Meri aankhoN ko dekhkar, doobne ki tamanna kee
Kabhi jheel kaha aur kabhi, khuli kitaab kehta raha

Jab kabhi bekhudi meiN, nasha sa chhaane lag jaata hai
LaboN ko paimaane se chalakta hua, sharaab kehta raha

Rukhsaar se meri woh, bikhri hui zulfon ko hatate hue
Badli meiN kyuN chhup gaya, mera mehtaab kehta raha

Hawa se udhta mera aanchal, jo zara sa sarakh gaya
Dekhkar mere husn ko bas, woh lajawaab kehta raha

Jab bhi nazreiN mili, sirf nihaarta hi raha “Aqsh” ko
Poochne par ise woh, muhabbat ke aadaab kehta raha

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«Reply #11 on: December 03, 2013, 04:22:37 PM »
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Meri aankhoN ko dekhkar, doobne ki tamanna kee
Kabhi jheel kaha aur kabhi, khuli kitaab kehta raha

waah waah waaaah Aqsh ji bohut hi khoobsurti se apne
kisi ke tareef ke jumlon ko apni zubani pesh kiya hai .

lajawaab ghazal RAU dena chahunga ,,, zaroori lag raha hai .

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«Reply #12 on: December 03, 2013, 04:40:10 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 03, 2013, 01:25:32 PM


Rukhsaar se meri woh, bikhri hui zulfon ko hatate hue
Badli meiN kyuN chhup gaya, mera mehtaab kehta raha

Jab bhi nazreiN mili, sirf nihaarta hi raha “Aqsh” ko
Poochne par ise woh, muhabbat ke aadaab kehta raha

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beautiful , kya kahne . Bahut khubsurat ashaar hain ,
khubsurat ghazal . Aqsh ji bahut bahut mubarakbaad.
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«Reply #13 on: December 03, 2013, 08:22:05 PM »
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Rukhsaar se meri woh, bikhri hui zulfon ko hatate hue
Badli meiN kyuN chhup gaya, mera mehtaab kehta raha

Hawa se udhta mera aanchal, jo zara sa sarakh gaya
Dekhkar mere husn ko bas, woh lajawaab kehta raha

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wah waah waah bahut pasand aaya ye kalaam aqsh ji
 
ek rau pesh hai kubool farmaayen.
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