mokhalif..............(K_A)

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                       MERI TANHAI KO AUR VEERANAA BANAA GAYA.!
                        BAAT CHOTI THI USEY AFSAANAA BANAA GAYA.!!

                      
                        phoolon per chamakti shabnum chandni raat main,
                        moti dikha kar gulshan ko diwaanaa banaa gaya,
      
                      
                        rahaa saath merey aashiyaney mein muddaton,
                        khud ki pehchan dekar mujhey begaanaa banaa gaya,

                      
                       thee mohabbat bahut shaher key loagon mein kabhi,
                       dekar  firqa unhein  ek naya zamaanaa banaa gaya,

                      
                        muskuraye chiraag jo meri tarikion mein khamosh...,
                        ulfat itna kiya unsey, unhain apnaa banaa gaya.....!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2010, 07:13:38 PM »
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nice gazel

likh kar sher tu apne dil se khamosh
jagah apni,dil me logo ke banaa gaya
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2010, 07:40:12 PM »
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bahut khoob K_A ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2010, 08:00:16 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 24, 2010, 06:59:57 PM
                       MERI TANHAI KO AUR VEERANAA BANAA GAYA.!
                        BAAT CHOTI THI USEY AFSAANAA BANAA GAYA.!!

                        hain chamaktey shabnum chandni raat main,
                        moti dikha kar gulshan ko diwaanaa banaa gaya,
      
                        rahaa saath merey aashiyaney mein muddaton,
                        khud ki pehchan dekar mujhey begaanaa banaa gaya,

                        mohabbat bahut thi shaher key loagon mein kabhi,
                        firqa dekar kar ek naya zamaanaa banaa gaya,

                        muskuraye they chiraag jo meri tarikion mein khamosh...,
                        ulfat itna kiya unsey ki unhain apnaa banaa gaya.....!!!!!

Bahut khoob K_A Ji..

Mohabbat vo taqaza hai jo har raahon mein rahti hai,
Kabhi dil mein machalti hai kabhi baahon mein rahti hai.

Mohabbat ye 'Adab' ki hai jo bas pahloo badalti hai,
Kabhi baahon mein rahti hai kabhi aahon mein rahti hai.
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2010, 09:25:27 PM »
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Nice
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2010, 06:54:25 AM »
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Wah wah Khamosh ji,bahut badiyaa,beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation.lovely lines by Manoj ji and Pandey ji.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: May 25, 2010, 08:52:47 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bohut khub khamosh j
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2010, 08:56:17 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Khamosh Awaaz Ji..

Bahut Khoobsurat peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache DrPandeyji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: May 25, 2010, 09:04:35 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on May 24, 2010, 06:59:57 PM
                        MERI TANHAI KO AUR VEERANAA BANAA GAYA.!
                        BAAT CHOTI THI USEY AFSAANAA BANAA GAYA.!!

                        hain chamaktey shabnum chandni raat main,
                        moti dikha kar gulshan ko diwaanaa banaa gaya,
     
                        rahaa saath merey aashiyaney mein muddaton,
                        khud ki pehchan dekar mujhey begaanaa banaa gaya,

                        mohabbat bahut thi shaher key loagon mein kabhi,
                        firqa dekar  ek naya zamaanaa banaa gaya,

                        muskuraye they chiraag jo meri tarikion mein khamosh...,
                        ulfat itna kiya unsey ki unhain apnaa banaa gaya.....!!!!!


Bahut khoob KA Ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2010, 02:13:54 PM »
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buhat khoob !
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«Reply #10 on: May 25, 2010, 11:48:35 PM »
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Bekhudi me ham the awaz bhi khamosh thi
Itani si baat ka koi hangama bana gaya
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«Reply #11 on: May 26, 2010, 01:43:56 AM »
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    Bahut Khoob K.A ji , 4th sher to bas kamaal hai ji.
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«Reply #12 on: May 26, 2010, 01:52:48 PM »
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bahoot khoob.... happy3
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«Reply #13 on: May 27, 2010, 10:14:09 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on May 24, 2010, 07:13:38 PM
nice gazel

likh kar sher tu apne dil se khamosh
jagah apni,dil me logo ke banaa gaya

thanx manoj ji
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«Reply #14 on: May 27, 2010, 10:14:35 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on May 24, 2010, 07:40:12 PM
bahut khoob K_A ji...!!!

thanx klaskar ji
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