mokhalif..............(K_A)

by khamosh_aawaaz on May 24, 2010, 06:59:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 27, 2010, 10:15:11 AM »
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Bahut Khoobsurat Peshkash Hai Khamosh Ji
Kashkar Ye Line Mujhey Badi Achchi Lagi
Good Job....


Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


shukriyaa shihab ji
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«Reply #16 on: May 27, 2010, 10:15:49 AM »
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Bahut khoob K_A Ji..

Mohabbat vo taqaza hai jo har raahon mein rahti hai,
Kabhi dil mein machalti hai kabhi baahon mein rahti hai.

Mohabbat ye 'Adab' ki hai jo bas pahloo badalti hai,
Kabhi baahon mein rahti hai kabhi aahon mein rahti hai.


bahut khoob dr sahab
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«Reply #17 on: May 27, 2010, 10:16:19 AM »
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Nice

shukriyaa S_G
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«Reply #18 on: May 27, 2010, 09:26:30 PM »
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bahot khoob janaab .behtreen aur umda hai aapka andaz e bayaan,
                       
     
                        rahaa saath merey aashiyaney mein muddaton,
                        khud ki pehchan dekar mujhey begaanaa banaa gaya,

                        mohabbat bahut thi shaher key loagon mein kabhi,
                        firqa dekar  ek naya zamaanaa banaa gaya,

                       

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«Reply #19 on: May 28, 2010, 09:29:12 AM »
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bahot khoob janaab .behtreen aur umda hai aapka andaz e bayaan,

shukriyaa nazar sahab
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«Reply #20 on: May 28, 2010, 09:30:04 AM »
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Wah wah Khamosh ji,bahut badiyaa,beautiful gazal,mindblowing creation.lovely lines by Manoj ji and Pandey ji.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx madhu ji
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«Reply #21 on: May 28, 2010, 09:32:17 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause bohut khub khamosh j

thank u rayees sb
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«Reply #22 on: May 28, 2010, 09:33:21 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Khamosh Awaaz Ji..

Bahut Khoobsurat peshkash!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Ache DrPandeyji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thanks khawaish ji
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«Reply #23 on: May 29, 2010, 01:08:35 PM »
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buhat khoob !

thanx vb
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«Reply #24 on: May 31, 2010, 06:24:28 PM »
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Bekhudi me ham the awaz bhi khamosh thi
Itani si baat ka koi hangama bana gaya

thanx mamta ji
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«Reply #25 on: June 04, 2010, 05:44:19 PM »
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    Bahut Khoob K.A ji , 4th sher to bas kamaal hai ji.

thanx tamanna ji
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«Reply #26 on: June 06, 2010, 05:51:41 PM »
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bahoot khoob.... happy3

thanx skd
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«Reply #27 on: June 10, 2010, 10:33:51 AM »
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wah khamosh aawaaz! aik achchhi tahreer hai aur purkashish bhi. Daad qubul kijiye janaab.

                        MERI TANHAI KO AUR VEERANAA BANAA GAYA.!
                        BAAT CHOTI THI USEY AFSAANAA BANAA GAYA.!!

                        phoolon per chamakti shabnum chandni raat main,
                        moti dikha kar gulshan ko diwaanaa banaa gaya,
     
                        rahaa saath merey aashiyaney mein muddaton,
                        khud ki pehchan dekar mujhey begaanaa banaa gaya,

                        mohabbat bahut thi shaher key loagon mein kabhi,
                        firqa dekar  ek naya zamaanaa banaa gaya,

                        muskuraye they chiraag jo meri tarikion mein khamosh...,
                        ulfat itna kiya unsey ki unhain apnaa banaa gaya.....!!!!!

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«Reply #28 on: June 21, 2010, 12:44:10 PM »
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wah khamosh aawaaz! aik achchhi tahreer hai aur purkashish bhi. Daad qubul kijiye janaab.


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«Reply #29 on: July 20, 2010, 07:33:50 PM »
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                        MERI TANHAI KO AUR VEERANAA BANAA GAYA.!
                        BAAT CHOTI THI USEY AFSAANAA BANAA GAYA.!!

                        phoolon per chamakti shabnum chandni raat main,
                        moti dikha kar gulshan ko diwaanaa banaa gaya,
     
                        rahaa saath merey aashiyaney mein muddaton,
                        khud ki pehchan dekar mujhey begaanaa banaa gaya,

                        mohabbat bahut thi shaher key loagon mein kabhi,
                        firqa dekar  ek naya zamaanaa banaa gaya,

                        muskuraye they chiraag jo meri tarikion mein khamosh...,
                        ulfat itna kiya unsey ki unhain apnaa banaa gaya.....!!!!!



nice ghazal
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