moom aur pathar...A.B

by adil bechain on September 04, 2011, 10:16:16 AM
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              na ho khowahish to mokhtasar bhi hai bahut,
              pyaar ko ek khamosh nazar bhi hai bahut,

              darte nahin toofaan se maut ko pahchan ne wale,
              warna khauf ke liye ek lahar bhi hai bahut,

              ujaadein kise, basaaein kise hain pareshaan woh,
              inqalaab ke liye ek pathar bhi hai bahut,

              de tumhein jo awaz uski zarur sunoo,
              waise akhbaar ki khabar bhi hai bahut,

              gar saliqe se hi pighal jaaye pathar to kya kahna,
              bechain yahaan ab moom ka zor bhi hai bahut..........!
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«Reply #1 on: September 04, 2011, 01:51:56 PM »
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waaaaah bahut bahut sundar aur kamaal ka nagma--

ye poetry lajawaab hai--
kya kahne  --  ekdum sahi baate kahi aapne
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«Reply #2 on: September 04, 2011, 05:04:00 PM »
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achhi peshkash.
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«Reply #3 on: September 04, 2011, 05:12:44 PM »
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab aapke to darshan hi durlabh ho gaye.. ?
KahaaN gayab rahte hai aajkal... ?

Wel behad khoob kalaam lekar aayeN hai aap..
Behad gehre aur sidhe se ashaaroN ne kalaam
ko khub pur asar bana diya hai.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab ...
Humari dili daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Aate rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile          


Quote from: adil bechain on September 04, 2011, 10:16:16 AM

              na ho khowahish to mokhtasar bhi hai bahut,
              pyaar ko ek khamosh nazar bhi hai bahut,

Kia kahne janab bahut khoob behad ... khub matla kaha hai aapne daad Usual Smile
          

              darte nahin toofaan se maut ko pahchan ne wale,
              warna khauf ke liye ek lahar bhi hai bahut,

Waah kia kahne janab bahut achche daad Usual Smile          

              ujaadein kise, basaaein kise hain pareshaan woh,
              inqalaab ke liye ek pathar bhi hai bahut,

Masha Allah kia kahne janab... bada inqalaabi
khayaal kaha hai daad daad Usual Smile          

              de tumhein jo awaz uski zarur sunoo,
              waise akhbaar ki khabar bhi hai bahut,

Achcha hai janab Usual Smile          

              gar saliqe se hi pighal jaaye pathar to kya kahna,
              bechain yahaan ab moom ka zor bhi hai bahut..........!

Kia baat hai janab bahut khoob .. Usual Smile
          
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«Reply #4 on: September 06, 2011, 09:30:36 AM »
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Quote from: sarfira on September 04, 2011, 01:51:56 PM
waaaaah bahut bahut sundar aur kamaal ka nagma--

ye poetry lajawaab hai--
kya kahne  --  ekdum sahi baate kahi aapne


thank you sarfira ji
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«Reply #5 on: September 06, 2011, 09:39:23 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on September 04, 2011, 10:16:16 AM

              na ho khowahish to mokhtasar bhi hai bahut,
              pyaar ko ek khamosh nazar bhi hai bahut,

              darte nahin toofaan se maut ko pahchan ne wale,
              warna khauf ke liye ek lahar bhi hai bahut,

              ujaadein kise, basaaein kise hain pareshaan woh,
              inqalaab ke liye ek pathar bhi hai bahut,

              de tumhein jo awaz uski zarur sunoo,
              waise akhbaar ki khabar bhi hai bahut,

              gar saliqe se hi pighal jaaye pathar to kya kahna,
              bechain yahaan ab moom ka zor bhi hai bahut..........!

Waah Waah Waah

Bahut bahut Khooob Adil Ji...

Har Ek A'shaar lajawaab!!!

Kya Kehne Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 04, 2011, 05:04:00 PM
achhi peshkash.

thank you hasan sahab
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«Reply #7 on: September 07, 2011, 06:15:13 AM »
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Adil sahab Adaab
Very nice. Lekin sahi me aap apka kalam bahut dino ke baad padha. Apko mai hamesha yaad rakhta hu.
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Adil sahab Adaab
Very nice. Lekin sahi me aap apka kalam bahut dino ke baad padha. Apko mai hamesha yaad rakhta hu.


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Quote from: khwaish on September 06, 2011, 09:39:23 AM
Waah Waah Waah

Bahut bahut Khooob Adil Ji...

Har Ek A'shaar lajawaab!!!

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thank you khawaish ji
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Bechain Sahaab Aadaab!

Janab aapke to darshan hi durlabh ho gaye.. ?
KahaaN gayab rahte hai aajkal... ?

Wel behad khoob kalaam lekar aayeN hai aap..
Behad gehre aur sidhe se ashaaroN ne kalaam
ko khub pur asar bana diya hai.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe janab ...
Humari dili daad O mubarakbaad kabul kijiye...


Likhate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye..
Aate rahiye.... Usual Smile
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile         



shukriya parwaaz sahab
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