Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!:Ghazals

abdbundeli

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Deykhiye, ho chaley khwaab mumkin naye!
Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!!

Sust gunchey jagey, lo bahaar aa gayee;
‘Na-nukar’ chuk gaye, ‘ba’ad’-o-‘leykin’ gaye!

Bahr mein qaafiley lahrioun key badhhey;
Khojney key liye sabz saakin naye!

Shaakh dar shaakh par chahakateen bulbulain;
Saaqiyaa, din bahut beet un bin gaye!

Dahkatee aatish-e-hijra bujhney lagee,
Lutf-e-meelaad paa dard key jin gaye!

Eik din bhee raheyngey alhadah na ab;
Rukhsatee maang sab, ley key dulhin gaye!

Dil ganwaaney sey aashiq pareyshaan they;
Aaj khush haal hain jin key dil chhin gaye!

Maykadah aashiyaan! Saaqiyah dilrubaa!
Chal ‘abd’, jis jagah ‘Jigar’-o-‘Momin’ gaye!!

- abd bundeli


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Roja

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2009, 03:13:59 PM »

Nice creation... Good gazal..


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salma786

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2009, 03:27:23 PM »

Good work.. As usual Abd ji Clapping Smiley


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abdbundeli

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #3 on: February 16, 2009, 03:32:41 PM »

Quote from: Roja on February 16, 2009, 03:13:59 PM

Nice creation... Good gazal..

Thanks Roja for reading it; and, also admiring it!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #4 on: February 16, 2009, 03:34:01 PM »

Quote from: salma786 on February 16, 2009, 03:27:23 PM

Good work.. As usual Abd ji Clapping Smiley

Thanks salma786 ji, for reading it; and, also admiring it!
- abd bundeli


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divyam

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #5 on: February 23, 2009, 03:47:13 PM »

Garg saahab,

pranaam,

sach kahuu.n to ham aap ke fikr-o-fann ke qaa'el ho gaye hai.n.. aur ab koii lafz bhi nahiii rahaa jis se Ghazal ki taareef ki jaaye! Usual Smile

matla, matle ke baad ka sher aur maqta yeh to behad dil fareb hai.n.. meri aur se daad haazir hai, qubool keejiyegaa.. aap ke kuchh kitaabe.n to zaruur shaaya ho chukii hogii, mai.n bhi usay paDhna chaahunga.. Usual Smile

apna khayaal rakhiyega...


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abdbundeli

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #6 on: February 23, 2009, 04:11:21 PM »

Quote from: divyam on February 23, 2009, 03:47:13 PM

Garg saahab,
pranaam,
sach kahuu.n to ham aap ke fikr-o-fann ke qaa'el ho gaye hai.n.. aur ab koii lafz bhi nahiii rahaa jis se Ghazal ki taareef ki jaaye! Usual Smile

apna khayaal rakhiyega...

Shukriyah divyam ji! Koyi 33-34 kitaabeyn shaayaa huyiin hain; par Urdu mein abhi dahaayi kaa 'aankrhaa' paar naheen huaa hai! Meyraa ziyaadahtar kalaam Hindi mein hai! English mein chouthee par kaam kar rahaa hoon!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #7 on: February 23, 2009, 04:23:30 PM »

Quote from: salma786 on February 16, 2009, 03:27:23 PM

Good work.. As usual Abd ji Clapping Smiley

salma786 ji!
Gulaab key phool sey lagaataar chooteen 'makrand' (flower honey) kee raseelee boondoun sey damaktey aapkey 'wyktitwa' jaisey hi lagtey hain aapkey 'prashansaatmak' shabd! Dhanyawaad!
- abd bundeli


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divyam

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #8 on: February 23, 2009, 04:28:12 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on February 23, 2009, 04:11:21 PM

lagta hai aap ko jitna jaano utna kam hai, dheer dheer aap ke baare me.n jaan hi le.nge.. Usual Smile

aap ki hindi, urdu, english me.n itni kitaabe.n shaaya ho chuki hai.n, to aap waqaii ek khaas sakhshiyat ke maalik ho.nge.. behad khushi huii jaan kar.. mujhe to urdu paDhni bhii nahii.n aatiii....

aap yuu.n hi likhte rahe.n, ab ham to aap ko paDhte hi rahe.nge, meri ooparwaale se prathana hai ki aap ko lambi umr ,sehat de aur aap ki muraad puuri kare... Usual Smile

Mayank


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abdbundeli

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #9 on: February 24, 2009, 06:07:22 AM »

Quote from: divyam on February 23, 2009, 04:28:12 PM

lagta hai aap ko jitna jaano utna kam hai, dheer dheer aap ke baare me.n jaan hi le.nge.. Usual Smile

Mayank

Dhanyawaad! Aap khoob aagey badhheyn, yeeshwar karey!
- abd bundeli


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abdbundeli

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Re: Mousam-e-wasl hai; hijra key din gaye!

«Reply #10 on: February 24, 2009, 09:10:07 AM »

Quote from: @kaash on February 24, 2009, 08:45:50 AM

waah Abd ji behad achi compstn... Applause

bahut hi ache ashaar... Clapping Smiley

Shukraguzaar huun @kaash ji aapkey 'meethhey' alfaaz key liye!
- abd bundeli


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