Mout aatee hai; lout jaatee hai!

by abdbundeli on May 11, 2013, 02:50:58 PM
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Din guzartaa hai, raat aatee hai!
Zindagee yuun hi guzar jaatee hai!!

Jab wahee baahuoun mein bhartaa hai:
Zeest aab-e-hayaat paatee hai!

Sirf ehsaas-e-lab sey kis but key,
Andleeb-e-wisaal gaatee hai?

Jaagtey hain hazaar khwaab naye:
Neend aatee hai, kyaa dikhaatee hai?

Sar chhupaataa hai aalam-e-taareek,
Subh gaatee hai, muskuraatee hai!

Paa hamain shaad ham-aagosh, ‘abd’,
Mout aatee hai; lout jaatee hai!

    - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)
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«Reply #1 on: May 11, 2013, 07:46:04 PM »
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Din guzartaa hai, raat aatee hai!
Zindagee yuun hi guzar jaatee hai!!

Matla lazawaab hai.
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«Reply #2 on: May 11, 2013, 09:10:26 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on May 11, 2013, 07:46:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Wah,Wah,Wah Very nice.
Din guzartaa hai, raat aatee hai!
Zindagee yuun hi guzar jaatee hai!!

Matla lazawaab hai.

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Sudhir ji!
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«Reply #3 on: May 12, 2013, 12:17:11 AM »
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Din guzartaa hai, raat aatee hai!
Zindagee yuun hi guzar jaatee hai!!

Jab wahee baahuoun mein bhartaa hai:
Zeest aab-e-hayaat paatee hai!

Ghazal to behatreen hai hi par ye ashaar to...kya kahne
Bahut umda Sir
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«Reply #4 on: May 12, 2013, 02:36:19 AM »
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subhanaallah............bahoot hi koob janab
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«Reply #5 on: May 12, 2013, 09:49:55 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on May 12, 2013, 12:17:11 AM
Din guzartaa hai, raat aatee hai!
Zindagee yuun hi guzar jaatee hai!!

Jab wahee baahuoun mein bhartaa hai:
Zeest aab-e-hayaat paatee hai!

Ghazal to behatreen hai hi par ye ashaar to...kya kahne
Bahut umda Sir


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Mukesh ji!
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«Reply #6 on: May 12, 2013, 09:50:45 PM »
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Quote from: 1tarun on May 12, 2013, 02:36:19 AM
subhanaallah............bahoot hi koob janab

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Tarun ji!
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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2013, 02:51:18 PM »
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Quote from: abdbundeli on May 11, 2013, 02:50:58 PM

Din guzartaa hai, raat aatee hai!
Zindagee yuun hi guzar jaatee hai!!

Jab wahee baahuoun mein bhartaa hai:
Zeest aab-e-hayaat paatee hai!

Sirf ehsaas-e-lab sey kis but key,
Andleeb-e-wisaal gaatee hai?

Jaagtey hain hazaar khwaab naye:
Neend aatee hai, kyaa dikhaatee hai?

Sar chhupaataa hai aalam-e-taareek,
Subh gaatee hai, muskuraatee hai!

Paa hamain shaad ham-aagosh, ‘abd’,
Mout aatee hai; lout jaatee hai!

    - abd bundeli (Ram Prakash Garg)


wah wah bahut umda ghazal likha hai aapne abd bundeli jee. bahut daad
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2013, 02:59:03 PM »
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umdaa adaaygi bundeli saaheb, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapke kalam se aur bhi umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheNge...!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2013, 08:32:11 PM »
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Quote from: suman59 on May 17, 2013, 02:51:18 PM
wah wah bahut umda ghazal likha hai aapne abd bundeli jee. bahut daad

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Suman ji!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 17, 2013, 08:36:27 PM »
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Quote from: Taish on May 17, 2013, 02:59:03 PM
umdaa adaaygi bundeli saaheb, umeed karta hun ki aage v aapke kalam se aur bhi umda kalaam padhne ko milte raheNge...!!

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Taish ji! Aap dua banaaye rakheyn, aaj kal kuchh kam hee likh paa rahaa hun!
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