Muddat Hui Mar Gaye Hum......!!!

by Talat on September 22, 2009, 04:04:33 PM
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«Reply #15 on: September 23, 2009, 04:14:18 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 22, 2009, 04:04:33 PM


Awesome One Talat di.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob .. Bahoot khoob di.. Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #16 on: September 23, 2009, 05:49:53 PM »
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 Applause bahoot khoob talat ji
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«Reply #17 on: September 24, 2009, 10:49:37 AM »
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Quote from: cara on September 23, 2009, 06:37:23 AM
KYA BAAT HAI....CELMIRA JI.....

MUDDAT HUI MANN SE MAR GAYE HUM..
AB KAHAN HAI UNSE MILNA-MILAANA.

HAAN KHAYALON MEIN AB TAK RAHETE HAI HAMARE,
KUN KI MUSHKIL HAI UNKO BHOOLPANA.

ROOTH GAYE HAIN HAMSE KYA MAALUM KON KASOORWAAR HAIN,
PAHELE BHI CHAH THA UNKO,AAJ BHI WO MERA PYAAR HAIN.

YUN TOH MUDDAT HUI MAR GAYE HUM..
KYA KAREN SAANSEN BAKI HAI TAB TAK HAI NIBHANA.

Thanks Cara Ji...Nice one from you too.
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«Reply #18 on: September 24, 2009, 02:16:43 PM »
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Quote from: -Saahil- on September 23, 2009, 06:50:36 AM

bahut achche di....

kucch der jo thehra main oonki mazaar par
ek gujre huye kal ka fasana yaad aa gaya
ponch li aankhen aur muskura kar chal diye
toote huye dil ka taraana yaad aa gaya
dekar jo gaya malham k badle zakhm dosto
woh gujra kissa,woh yaar puraana yaad aa gaya


Thanks Salil...aur bohot khoob likha hai dear.
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«Reply #19 on: September 27, 2009, 09:13:04 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 22, 2009, 04:04:33 PM


Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #20 on: September 27, 2009, 09:15:32 AM »
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Quote from: HumTum on September 23, 2009, 09:24:32 AM
Talat Ji ....


Wohi Dour Phir Se Chalo Dohraye
HasieN Khush rhe chalo Muskuraye

Suno Tumko Dil Ki Sada Keh Rhi Hai
Muhhobat ke Nagme Chalo Gungunaye

Abr Mein Chamakte sitaroN Ki Maniid
KyuN Na Mil Kar Chalo JagMagaye

Juda Hokar "HumTum" Jee Na Sakenge
Ranjish Ko Dono chalo Bhul Jaaye!!


HumTum



Quote from: -Saahil- on September 23, 2009, 06:50:36 AM

bahut achche di....

kucch der jo thehra main oonki mazaar par
ek gujre huye kal ka fasana yaad aa gaya
ponch li aankhen aur muskura kar chal diye
toote huye dil ka taraana yaad aa gaya
dekar jo gaya malham k badle zakhm dosto
woh gujra kissa,woh yaar puraana yaad aa gaya


Quote from: cara on September 23, 2009, 06:37:23 AM
KYA BAAT HAI....CELMIRA JI.....

MUDDAT HUI MANN SE MAR GAYE HUM..
AB KAHAN HAI UNSE MILNA-MILAANA.

HAAN KHAYALON MEIN AB TAK RAHETE HAI HAMARE,
KUN KI MUSHKIL HAI UNKO BHOOLPANA.

ROOTH GAYE HAIN HAMSE KYA MAALUM KON KASOORWAAR HAIN,
PAHELE BHI CHAH THA UNKO,AAJ BHI WO MERA PYAAR HAIN.

YUN TOH MUDDAT HUI MAR GAYE HUM..
KYA KAREN SAANSEN BAKI HAI TAB TAK HAI NIBHANA.

Bahut Bahut Khoob HumTumji,Saahil Aur Cara Ji..

Aap Sab Ne Bhi Bahut Khoob Likha.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #21 on: February 26, 2010, 09:49:31 AM »
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Quote from: HumTum on September 23, 2009, 09:24:32 AM
Talat Ji ....


Wohi Dour Phir Se Chalo Dohraye
HasieN Khush rhe chalo Muskuraye

Suno Tumko Dil Ki Sada Keh Rhi Hai
Muhhobat ke Nagme Chalo Gungunaye

Abr Mein Chamakte sitaroN Ki Maniid
KyuN Na Mil Kar Chalo JagMagaye

Juda Hokar "HumTum" Jee Na Sakenge
Ranjish Ko Dono chalo Bhul Jaaye!!


HumTum



Bohot Khoob HumTum..will try to write here soon...
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«Reply #22 on: February 26, 2010, 09:50:13 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on September 23, 2009, 03:48:47 PM
bahut khub calmira ji apne bahut khubb likha h :clap :clap :clap

Thanks a lot Rishi Ji
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«Reply #23 on: February 26, 2010, 09:51:42 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 23, 2009, 04:14:18 PM
Awesome One Talat di.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob .. Bahoot khoob di.. Bahoot khoob!

Thanks so much Divs for appreciating my ghazal Usual Smile
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«Reply #24 on: February 26, 2010, 09:52:13 AM »
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Quote from: bekarar on September 23, 2009, 05:49:53 PM
Applause bahoot khoob talat ji

Thanks a lot Sanjeev Ji
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«Reply #25 on: February 26, 2010, 09:52:53 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on September 27, 2009, 09:13:04 AM
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot Khwaish Dost aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayi...
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«Reply #26 on: February 26, 2010, 09:59:19 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on September 23, 2009, 04:14:18 PM
Awesome One Talat di.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob .. Bahoot khoob di.. Bahoot khoob!

abhi to tumhari zaroorat bahut he
akelay hamien chod kar yoon na jaana!!:)
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«Reply #27 on: April 30, 2010, 02:47:32 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on February 26, 2010, 09:50:57 AM
behad ache ashaar aur bahut hi umda ghazal likhi hai aapne Talat ji
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
HT ji,Cara ji aur Sahil dear aapne bhi bahut acha likha  Applause Applause Applause


Bohot shukriya Kaash Ji
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«Reply #28 on: May 07, 2010, 07:37:55 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on September 22, 2009, 04:04:33 PM


Hi Talat,
bohot hi khubsurat likha hai, hamesha ki tarah !!!
Bohot khuub...

Aakhri sher to lajawaab hai...

muddat hui mar gaye the ki jab hum
saanso ka haan bas raha aana jaana!




sisakte labon par, kyun ubhar aaya ek geet purana
yaado ki dhuul ke tale, kab se daba tha yeh tarana

yeh ranj-o-ghum, yeh bekhudi, kuch to kaam aayenge
humein zindagi se gila karne ka, mila ek aur bahana

bikharega ghaunsalaa jab tutegi shajar ki kamjor dali
do masuum panchhiyon ka badal jayega aab-o-dana

kaarwanh guzar chuka aur gubbar bhi tham gaya
hamari kismet mein reh gaya, saaye ka saath nibhana

kya soch kar shikwa kar baitha samandar se, “Bharat”
lahron ka yehi kaam hai, ret par likhe naam ko mitana!
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«Reply #29 on: May 11, 2010, 10:24:24 PM »
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ajeeb dard ka rishat dikhaaii daita hai
ke har gham aashna apna dikhaaii daita hai
aapki ye ghazal paD kar achanak waseem bareilvy sahab ka ye sher zehen ke ghoshe mai ghr kar gaya,
aapki takhleeqon ke baare mai kya kaha jaaye mashallah se bhut aca likhti ho aap, daad hazir hai qubool keejiye


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