Muddat Hui Mar Gaye Hum......!!! -Panna 3:Ghazals

Talat

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«Reply #30 on: May 12, 2010, 10:39:33 AM »

Quote from: Shihab on April 30, 2010, 06:41:38 PM

Bahut Khub Talat Ji
Mafi Chahta Hun Deri Ke Liye...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~

Aapne padha aur saraha, yehi khushi ki baat hai...Bohot shukriya....


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Talat

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Re: Muddat Hui Mar Gaye Hum......!!!

«Reply #31 on: May 12, 2010, 10:47:57 AM »

Quote from: Bharat on May 07, 2010, 07:37:55 PM

Hi Talat,
bohot hi khubsurat likha hai, hamesha ki tarah !!!
Bohot khuub...

Aakhri sher to lajawaab hai...

muddat hui mar gaye the ki jab hum
saanso ka haan bas raha aana jaana!

sisakte labon par, kyun ubhar aaya ek geet purana
yaado ki dhuul ke tale, kab se daba tha yeh tarana

yeh ranj-o-ghum, yeh bekhudi, kuch to kaam aayenge
humein zindagi se gila karne ka, mila ek aur bahana

bikharega ghaunsalaa jab tutegi shajar ki kamjor dali
do masuum panchhiyon ka badal jayega aab-o-dana

kaarwanh guzar chuka aur gubbar bhi tham gaya
hamari kismet mein reh gaya, saaye ka saath nibhana

kya soch kar shikwa kar baitha samandar se, “Bharat”
lahron ka yehi kaam hai, ret par likhe naam ko mitana!

Bharat,

Thanks so much...aapke comments humesha dil khush kar jaate hain !!

...aur bohot hi lajawab ghazal likhi hai aapne..it's so beautiful....so nice to see your work..har sher bohot khoobsurat hai.....Bohot bohot khoob !! Applause


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Bharat

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Re: Muddat Hui Mar Gaye Hum......!!!

«Reply #32 on: May 28, 2010, 06:58:32 PM »

Quote from: Celmira on May 12, 2010, 10:47:57 AM

Talat,
Thank you very much for appreciation.

ghazal pasand aayi, is ke liye bohot shukriya !!!


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Intezar

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Re: Muddat Hui Mar Gaye Hum......!!!

«Reply #33 on: August 12, 2012, 07:33:21 PM »

awesome poetry and feeling...

bahut khoobsurat peshkash Talat ji... !!!

Intezar !


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