Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka daar bhi hai - Qadeertoopchi

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Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai

Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai
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Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai

Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai

gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai

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«Reply #1 on: June 13, 2011, 04:22:25 PM »
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Bahut Khoooooooob... Kya Baat hai Qadeer Bhai... ek Mukammal Gazal Padhne ko Mili Bahut Dino baad.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Daad Kuboool Karen dil se.. Applause Applause Applause




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«Reply #2 on: June 13, 2011, 05:38:00 PM »
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Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai

Good One ... Qadeer Sahab !

Very Impressive & Good Expressions ...

dilee mubaaraqbaad aur daad qubuul kareN .. !
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Waah waah Waah Kya baat hai Qadeer Ji.. Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai... Ak Ak sher Mea ak Sachi baat chupi hai.. Bahoot Umda !

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«Reply #4 on: June 13, 2011, 06:34:03 PM »
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Ek mukamal ghazal hai yeh Qadeer sahab..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Tariff kay lavz nahin hai mere paas..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #6 on: June 14, 2011, 07:22:08 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 13, 2011, 04:02:22 PM
Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai

Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai
...
Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai

Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai

gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai

Qadeertoopchi


Bahut Bahut Aur bahut Khoob!!!

Pehle Do A'shaar Par To Hazaaro Daad Qadeer Bhai..

Bahut Khooooooooob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 14, 2011, 09:37:51 AM »
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Waah...waah Abdul Qadeer Sahab kya baat hai..
maza aa gaya...dili mubaraqbaad qubool karen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #8 on: June 14, 2011, 10:08:49 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 13, 2011, 04:02:22 PM
Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai

Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai
...
Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai

Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai

gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai

Qadeertoopchi


    paseejti hain aakhein kisi ke guzar jaane par bechain,
    lakin tumhein maloom kya ye qaatilo.N ka shahar bhi hai



 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
    
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«Reply #9 on: June 14, 2011, 12:19:01 PM »
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Qadeer Sahaab Aadaab!


Waah janab bazm meiN aapki shirkat aur us par aik nayi
kalaam bahut khushi huyi aapko jald hi padhkar .. Usual Smile

Laa jawaab ahsaas O khayaal aur umda kavish par likha hai aapne
janab ....... aapki is khub khayaal aur dilfareb kalaam par
dil se hazaaroN daad hazir hai.... Usual Smile
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Likhate rahiye...... Usual Smile


Aate rahiye.......
Khush O aabaad rhaiye...
Khuda Hafez Usual Smile



Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 13, 2011, 04:02:22 PM
Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai

Kia kahne janab waah.. behad khub matla kaha hai..
behad tanziyaa aur behad sahiN farmaya janab daad daad Usual Smile


Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai
...
Gazab janab gazab ...... Masha Allah kia soch ko
anjaam diyaa hai aapne.. behad khoob janab daad daad daad Usual Smile

Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai

Bahut sahiN janab.... Usual Smile

Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai

Achcha hai janab daad Usual Smile

gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai

Waah janab bahut khoob daad daad daad Usual Smile

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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2011, 10:57:55 AM »
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kyaa baat hai qadeer sahab......bade lambe arse bad padha aaj apko dil khush ho gaya~
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«Reply #11 on: June 17, 2011, 03:13:23 PM »
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Qadeer saheb,bahut khoobsoorat,sanjeeda kalaam se nawaaza.Maqta mei.n  hausla bakhsh optimism bahut achhi lagi. Dil se daad. Hasan
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«Reply #12 on: June 20, 2011, 08:15:25 AM »
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Quote from: qadeer_junaid on June 13, 2011, 04:02:22 PM
Haaye shahr-e-munsif kya ye tujhe khabar bhi hai
Sar kataane ki saff me begunah ka sar bhi hai

Betiya.N meri yun to khush hamesha raheti hain
Mufliso.N ke ghar lekin khudkushi ka darr bhi hai
...
Haat sainkdo.N yun to uthte hai.N duao.N ko
Khuch hain beasar lekin khuch me to asar bhi hai

Kya kahon ke tere bin hai mera guzar kaise
Roz marta jeeta hon kya tujhe khabar bhi hai

gham qadeer aate hain par ye dars dete hain
mushkilo.N ke har shab ki khushnuma saher bhi hai

Qadeertoopchi


BAHUT BAHUT KHOOB QADEER SAHAB
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«Reply #13 on: June 22, 2011, 10:46:52 AM »
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Quote from: Mann on June 13, 2011, 04:22:25 PM
Bahut Khoooooooob... Kya Baat hai Qadeer Bhai... ek Mukammal Gazal Padhne ko Mili Bahut Dino baad.. Bahut Bahut Khooooob.. Daad Kuboool Karen dil se.. Applause Applause Applause




**~** Mann **~**

janab-e-mann , mann sahab aadab ,,

ghazal pe apka tabsera faqr ka baaic bana ,, apne meri bharpoor hausla afzai ke hai jiske liye mai apka dil ki tamamtar gaheraiyun se shukriyah ada karta hon ..Allah apko khush rakhe ..

dua go

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