Mujhe chaahne ki woh khata karta tha.............................Aqsh..

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«Reply #15 on: December 23, 2013, 02:51:37 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on December 23, 2013, 02:04:20 PM
Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Aqshji.Bahut khoobsurat ghazal hai hai. Dili daad qabool kijiye.
thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttttt Sudhir ji...
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«Reply #16 on: December 23, 2013, 02:52:38 PM »
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Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on December 23, 2013, 02:42:23 PM
Khubsurat khayalaat aur khubsurat andaz e bayan  ki is pyari si ghazal me liye tag edil se mubarakbad.
Hasan ji aapka bahut bahut shukriya...
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«Reply #17 on: December 23, 2013, 03:34:20 PM »
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Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha

Bohat hi pyaara likha hai Aqsh jee..behtareen peshkash..likhte rahiye
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«Reply #18 on: December 23, 2013, 04:47:07 PM »
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Beautiful....
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«Reply #19 on: December 23, 2013, 04:47:46 PM »
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«Reply #20 on: December 23, 2013, 05:51:13 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
Ek shaks ne mere dil par apna aisa asar chhod diya hai
Ghanton aaine ke saamne khade khud ko nihaar rahi hoon


Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha


 icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower laughing4 laughing4

Bahut hi khubsurat Gazal likhi hai Aqsh ji aapne. Dheron daad.
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«Reply #21 on: December 23, 2013, 08:21:07 PM »
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badaa hee khoobsoorat bayaan dheron daad ek rau bhee
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«Reply #22 on: December 23, 2013, 09:36:55 PM »
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Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Ek rau haazir hai aqsh ji
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«Reply #23 on: December 23, 2013, 09:56:47 PM »
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Wah Kya Kehne Bahut Khub Aqsh Sis Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


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«Reply #24 on: December 23, 2013, 10:15:35 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
Ek shaks ne mere dil par apna aisa asar chhod diya hai
Ghanton aaine ke saamne khade khud ko nihaar rahi hoon


Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha




achchcha likha hai Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #25 on: December 24, 2013, 03:20:50 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
Ek shaks ne mere dil par apna aisa asar chhod diya hai
Ghanton aaine ke saamne khade khud ko nihaar rahi hoon
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard =))mere saath ek baar aisa hua tha phir nahin

Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha
kaash mere saath bhi aisa hota. mujh pe ghazal to nahin joke zaroor kisi ne likha hai baad mein bataao.n gi Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!
Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha
shaayad usne mujhe nahin dekha tha Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard!


wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #26 on: December 24, 2013, 10:38:43 AM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
Ek shaks ne mere dil par apna aisa asar chhod diya hai
Ghanton aaine ke saamne khade khud ko nihaar rahi hoon


Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha



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«Reply #27 on: December 24, 2013, 01:18:30 PM »
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 Applause Applause
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«Reply #28 on: December 24, 2013, 11:31:19 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
Ek shaks ne mere dil par apna aisa asar chhod diya hai
Ghanton aaine ke saamne khade khud ko nihaar ra


Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha

waah lajawab ghazal aqsh jee,.......
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«Reply #29 on: December 25, 2013, 06:30:19 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
Ek shaks ne mere dil par apna aisa asar chhod diya hai
Ghanton aaine ke saamne khade khud ko nihaar rahi hoon

 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

 Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP Thumbs UP

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha

 Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle Giggle





Bechara na jaane kya kya karta tha..Laughing hard Laughing hard

Achha hai bahut achha likha hai aqsh jee..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9
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