Mujhe chaahne ki woh khata karta tha.............................Aqsh..

by aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
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«Reply #30 on: December 26, 2013, 10:45:45 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on December 23, 2013, 12:54:40 PM
Ek shaks ne mere dil par apna aisa asar chhod diya hai
Ghanton aaine ke saamne khade khud ko nihaar rahi hoon


Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha


nice.ma'am
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«Reply #31 on: December 27, 2013, 02:13:01 PM »
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Quote from: admani on December 23, 2013, 03:34:20 PM
Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha

Bohat hi pyaara likha hai Aqsh jee..behtareen peshkash..likhte rahiye

thanksssssssss a lotttttttttttt admani ji....
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«Reply #32 on: December 27, 2013, 02:14:05 PM »
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Quote from: Samir Dil Se on December 23, 2013, 04:47:07 PM
Beautiful....
thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt samir ji...
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«Reply #33 on: December 27, 2013, 02:14:50 PM »
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Quote from: nandbahu on December 23, 2013, 04:47:46 PM
bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt nandji....
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«Reply #34 on: December 27, 2013, 02:15:57 PM »
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on December 23, 2013, 05:51:13 PM
icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower laughing4 laughing4

Bahut hi khubsurat Gazal likhi hai Aqsh ji aapne. Dheron daad.
thank you soooooooooooo much saxena ji...
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«Reply #35 on: December 27, 2013, 02:16:45 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 23, 2013, 08:21:07 PM
badaa hee khoobsoorat bayaan dheron daad ek rau bhee
thank you soooooooooo much sirji...
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«Reply #36 on: December 27, 2013, 02:17:32 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on December 23, 2013, 09:36:55 PM
Jab bhi milta tha, bas mera chehra padha karta tha
Meri aankhoN ki jumbish par, ghazal likha karta tha

Khudara kabhi koi harf na aaye, meri zindagi par
Is khauf se woh chhup kar, mujhse wafa karta tha

Kaisa pagal shaks tha ki, aksar chaandni raat meiN
Mere tasawwur ko saath liye, akela phira karta tha

Tanhai meiN kuch lafzoN ke, phooloN ko chunkar
Us rabb se din raat, sirf mere liye hi dua karta tha

Jab kabhi judaai ke ranj se, pareshaan ho jaata tha
Zamane se chhupkar, meri tasveer se tazkiraa karta tha

Na jaane aisi kya baat thi, meri fitrat meiN “Aqsh”
Ke baar baar mujhe, chahne ki woh khata karta tha
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Ek rau haazir hai aqsh ji

saru ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka meri ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye aur rau ke liye bhi...
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«Reply #37 on: December 27, 2013, 02:19:16 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on December 23, 2013, 09:56:47 PM
Wah Kya Kehne Bahut Khub Aqsh Sis Clapping Smiley


Shad o Aabaad Rahiye


Shihab
thnxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttt shihab ji...
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«Reply #38 on: December 27, 2013, 02:20:10 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on December 23, 2013, 10:15:35 PM


achchcha likha hai Applause Applause Applause Applause
thnxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt adil ji...
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«Reply #39 on: December 27, 2013, 02:21:45 PM »
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Quote from: Sheba on December 24, 2013, 03:20:50 AM


wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard.chalo sheba ji usko tumhari tasveer dikha hi dete hai kam se kam mera peecha toh chootega.. Giggle Giggle..thnx a lottttttttttt for the lovely comments...
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«Reply #40 on: December 27, 2013, 02:22:36 PM »
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Quote from: Miraj. on December 24, 2013, 10:38:43 AM

waah waah super one..........
thnxxxxxxxx a lottttttttttt miru ji...
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«Reply #41 on: December 27, 2013, 02:23:10 PM »
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Quote from: ekta3 on December 24, 2013, 01:18:30 PM
Applause Applause
thnxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttt ekta ji...
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«Reply #42 on: December 27, 2013, 02:24:16 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 24, 2013, 11:31:19 PM
waah lajawab ghazal aqsh jee,.......
thnxxxxxxx a lottttttttttt laaiba ji..
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«Reply #43 on: December 27, 2013, 02:25:27 PM »
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Quote from: nashwani on December 25, 2013, 06:30:19 PM


Bechara na jaane kya kya karta tha..Laughing hard Laughing hard

Achha hai bahut achha likha hai aqsh jee..

Dhero dhero daad..happy9
Ashwani aur bhi bahut kuch karta tha baaqi baatein next ghazal mein sunoaaongi.. Giggle Giggle Giggle thnxxxxxxxxxx a lottttt for the lovely comments...
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«Reply #44 on: December 27, 2013, 02:26:44 PM »
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Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on December 26, 2013, 10:45:45 PM
nice.ma'am
thnxxxxxxxxxxxx a lotttttttttttt MB ji...
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