Mujhe Mott'abar Kar De...... !!!

by Talat on May 16, 2009, 09:48:48 AM
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Ek nayi Ghazal peshe qidmat hai, shayad pasand aaye !!
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«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2009, 10:50:00 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 16, 2009, 09:48:48 AM

Ek naya kalaam peshe qidmat hai, shayad pasand aaye !!



Wah Wah bhot bahoot Khubsurat Gazal likhi hai aapne Di Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2009, 11:18:01 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 16, 2009, 09:48:48 AM

Ek nayi Ghazal peshe qidmat hai, shayad pasand aaye !!


kya baat hai celmira ji aapki jawaab nhi hai bhut khoob likha hai matla aur maqte ka to jawaab hi nahi hai bhut hi khoobsurat ghazal.................dil se daad qabool karai.n,

jo is raah ke musafir hain unko mere moula
kahaniyo.n ki qataaro.n mai harf e sar kar de
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2009, 11:24:53 AM »
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Bahut khoob Celmira Ji
Bahut hi khoob.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2009, 11:29:15 AM »
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subhan allah bahoth qoob bahen acha likha hai apne muddath ke baad pada to ajeeb sa lutf hasil howa matla me to jitna suncho utna doobte jayenge shauda !! Allah khush rakhe !!

karde rahem ki barish baksh de sare gunah aye khuda !!
jall rahe hain jo paude tamazat se ab unhe shajar kar de !!

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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2009, 01:44:21 PM »
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Ab main kya kahu jo bhi kehna tha Qadeer aur Aslam ne keh diya hain is kalam ke bare me......Aur subhan_allah tumhari khoobsurat peshkash ka asar dekho behan Aslam aur Qadeer ke kitne lajawab sher likhe hain.....darte darte maine bhi ek koshish ki hain.

Itna rahe hain sath, har safar me hum

Mangi dua khuda se, dard ko humsafar karde...


Woh logh bhi ajeeb the, bhookhe rahe sada

Bas me jinke tha, path_thar ko samar kar de...

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2009, 01:57:42 PM »
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Bahut khoob dear Talat...

Qadeer bhaiya, dear Aslam ji  and SG ji ... Nice lines
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2009, 04:01:52 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on May 16, 2009, 10:50:00 AM

Wah Wah bhot bahoot Khubsurat Gazal likhi hai aapne Di Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Divs Usual Smile Thanks for the appreciation.
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«Reply #8 on: May 16, 2009, 04:07:12 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat!!!Itni Khoobsurat Ghazal Padhkar,Insaan Sirf wah Wah Hi kar Sakta Hai..Bahut Khoob Mere Dost!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 16, 2009, 04:15:07 PM »
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bahut khoob

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«Reply #10 on: May 16, 2009, 04:15:35 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat likha hia Talat...

As usual most beautiful..
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«Reply #11 on: May 16, 2009, 05:04:33 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 16, 2009, 11:18:01 AM
kya baat hai celmira ji aapki jawaab nhi hai bhut khoob likha hai matla aur maqte ka to jawaab hi nahi hai bhut hi khoobsurat ghazal.................dil se daad qabool karai.n,

jo is raah ke musafir hain unko mere moula
kahaniyo.n ki qataaro.n mai harf e sar kar de

Bohot bohot shukriya Aslam Ji ... haula afzai ke liye bohot  mashkoor hoon.... !!

Aapne bhi bohot khoobsurat sher kaha hai..Waah kya baat hai....Bohot Khoob.. Is Ghazal ko mukkammal kar diya aapne is sher se !
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«Reply #12 on: May 16, 2009, 05:12:14 PM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on May 16, 2009, 11:24:53 AM
Bahut khoob Celmira Ji
Bahut hi khoob.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Getting comments from a poet of your calibre means a lot to me...Thanks a lot Sarvesh Ji for always being appreciative and encouraging !
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«Reply #13 on: May 16, 2009, 05:18:59 PM »
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Quote from: junaidqadir on May 16, 2009, 11:29:15 AM
subhan allah bahoth qoob bahen acha likha hai apne muddath ke baad pada to ajeeb sa lutf hasil howa matla me to jitna suncho utna doobte jayenge shauda !! Allah khush rakhe !!

karde rahem ki barish baksh de sare gunah aye khuda !!
jall rahe hain jo paude tamazat se ab unhe shajar kar de !!

Qadeer

Khushnasiibi hai is ghazal ki, Qadeer Bhai jo aapko yahan kheench laayi....Bohot bohot shukriya iss hausla-afzaai ka.....!

Aapke sher ka kya kehna....ek sher ne poori ghazal ko sharminda kar diya...Bohot hi gehra bohot hi khoob!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 16, 2009, 07:27:04 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause ApplauseWah Wah Talat di Wah...Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai...Akhri line toh bas chuu gayi... Applause Applause
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