Mujhe Mott'abar Kar De...... !!!

by Talat on May 16, 2009, 09:48:48 AM
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«Reply #15 on: May 16, 2009, 08:37:46 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on May 16, 2009, 01:44:21 PM
Ab main kya kahu jo bhi kehna tha Qadeer aur Aslam ne keh diya hain is kalam ke bare me......Aur subhan_allah tumhari khoobsurat peshkash ka asar dekho behan Aslam aur Qadeer ke kitne lajawab sher likhe hain.....darte darte maine bhi ek koshish ki hain.

Itna rahe hain sath, har safar me hum

Mangi dua khuda se, dard ko humsafar karde...


Woh logh bhi ajeeb the, bhookhe rahe sada

Bas me jinke tha, path_thar ko samar kar de...

-Sajid Ghayel-

Sajid Bhai,

Aapka bohot bohot shukriya, aapne jis izzat se nawaza hai aaj !

Sach kaha aapne, is Ghazal ki khushkismati hai ki use behtareen Asha'ar se nawaza gaya hai....!!

Aut bohot hi khoobsurat sher nazar kiya hai aapne, bohot hi khoob ! Yunhi nazar-e-karam banaye rakhiyega !
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«Reply #16 on: May 16, 2009, 09:18:19 PM »
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Tallu,

Superb creation  Applause Applause Applause

Maine yeh ghazal subah he padh li thee...magar phir busy ho gaya weekend chores mein Usual Smile

Ab doobara yeh ghazal padhi aur sabke comments bhi padhe aur daad dene ki liye banda haazir hai  Usual Smile Thumbs UP

Well done everyone! Shabash ! Yun he saath dete rahiyega ek doosre ka  Hats off to you!
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«Reply #17 on: May 17, 2009, 08:41:42 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 16, 2009, 01:57:42 PM
Bahut khoob dear Talat...

Qadeer bhaiya, dear Aslam ji  and SG ji ... Nice lines

Thanks a lot Roja dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #18 on: May 17, 2009, 09:06:34 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 16, 2009, 04:07:12 PM
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Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat!!!Itni Khoobsurat Ghazal Padhkar,Insaan Sirf wah Wah Hi kar Sakta Hai..Bahut Khoob Mere Dost!!

Thanks so much for your lovely comments my dear Friend..Aap humesha mera yunhi hausla badhate hain....yunhi badhate rehna humesha......Thanks so much Khwaish Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: May 17, 2009, 02:08:19 PM »
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Quote from: javedarshad on May 16, 2009, 04:15:07 PM
bahut khoob

Talat







javed

Thanks a lot Javed...for appreciations...Thanks for all your encouragement and suggestions...Tah-e-dil se aapk ka shukriya...!
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«Reply #20 on: May 17, 2009, 02:14:28 PM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 16, 2009, 04:15:35 PM
Bahut khoobsurat likha hia Talat...

As usual most beautiful..

Thanks Angel for always reading and appreciating...thanks so much dear ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #21 on: May 17, 2009, 02:19:53 PM »
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Its my pleasrue to read such beautiful work from such beautiful person.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: May 18, 2009, 11:09:36 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on May 16, 2009, 05:44:53 PM
Waah waah bahot khoob Talat ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahot khoob likha hai aapne..har ash'aar lajawaab hai...behad achi ghazal..it's seems 2 b easily written but that's bcoz it required efforts n involvement n peace..iske lafz behad surbadh se hain..ummeed hai aap tajammul ko aage bhi barkaraar rakhengi.. Ek koshish asha hai pasand aaye                                                                                                                                                     kaarwa-e-zeest kayam hai kayam rahega,manzilon ki manzil raahon me hai Khuda tu ata vo nazar kar de, ghamgusaari zehen-o-dil ki badhti hai kalam ke sayon se,  siyaahi-e-tasavvur  me yun hi sukooniyat basar kar de   

Thanks so much Kaash Ji...I am really delighed to see your lovely comments... I will try to improve upon the work...Please feel free to suggest anything, always...! Tah-e-dil se shukriya...!!

Aur bohot khoobsurat sher nazar kiya hai aapne....Bohot Khoob...Bohot khoob !!
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«Reply #23 on: May 18, 2009, 11:16:24 AM »
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really nice gazal celmira ji,also very nice lines by j qadeer ji and sajid ji
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«Reply #24 on: May 18, 2009, 01:18:45 PM »
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Quote from: dead heart on May 16, 2009, 07:27:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause ApplauseWah Wah Talat di Wah...Bahaut bahaut acha likha hai...Akhri line toh bas chuu gayi... Applause Applause

Thanks so much Rahim dear for reading and appreciating this ghazal....!
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«Reply #25 on: May 18, 2009, 08:54:41 PM »
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Quote from: Rajbir on May 16, 2009, 09:18:19 PM
Tallu,

Superb creation  Applause Applause Applause

Maine yeh ghazal subah he padh li thee...magar phir busy ho gaya weekend chores mein Usual Smile

Ab doobara yeh ghazal padhi aur sabke comments bhi padhe aur daad dene ki liye banda haazir hai  Usual Smile Thumbs UP

Well done everyone! Shabash ! Yun he saath dete rahiyega ek doosre ka  Hats off to you!

Thank You So much for your lovely comments...It always inspiring to see you in my threads !!

Thanks so much !!
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«Reply #26 on: May 18, 2009, 09:41:31 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 16, 2009, 09:48:48 AM

Ek nayi Ghazal peshe qidmat hai, shayad pasand aaye !!


BAHUT KHOOB TALAT JEE..
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«Reply #27 on: May 19, 2009, 10:36:45 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 17, 2009, 02:19:53 PM
Its my pleasrue to read such beautiful work from such beautiful person.. Usual Smile

You are welcome dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #28 on: May 19, 2009, 10:37:15 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on May 18, 2009, 11:16:24 AM
really nice gazal celmira ji,also very nice lines by j qadeer ji and sajid ji
 Applause Applause Applause

Thanks so much Madhu
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«Reply #29 on: May 20, 2009, 10:11:42 AM »
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Quote from: {Angel} on May 17, 2009, 02:19:53 PM
Its my pleasrue to read such beautiful work from such beautiful person.. Usual Smile

Thanks so much Angel Usual Smile
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