Mujhe Sagar ne Pyasa Rakha -Panna 5:Ghazals

Sonu

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«Reply #60 on: May 21, 2009, 05:09:16 AM »

your most welcome sanju..

bahut bahut shukria apko humri tuti phuti shayri passend ahye.. Usual Smile

Quote from: pandit on May 20, 2009, 05:52:41 AM

THANKS SONU..
AAPNE BAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI..


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Sonu

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Re: Mujhe Sagar ne Pyasa Rakha

«Reply #61 on: May 21, 2009, 05:13:13 AM »

kea bat hai Sanju her bar ki thra mind blowwing yaar..

tere dedaar ke tarse huye hai hum
teri ek jhalak pane ko bechain hia hum
to kab ahyga eh jalim
meri ahkhey or sanse teri ek deedar ke lea atki huye hia..

Quote from: pandit on May 20, 2009, 06:10:26 AM

BAHUT SE HASEEN CHEHRE DEKHE HUMNE,
BUSS TERE EK DEDAAR NE PYASA RAKHA..


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Sonu

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Re: Mujhe Sagar ne Pyasa Rakha

«Reply #62 on: May 21, 2009, 05:14:05 AM »

Jeetu ji bahut bahut shukriya... thik hai

Quote from: Sager4u on May 20, 2009, 12:25:20 PM

Bahut khoob sonuji !! Aapko jawab main raat me dunga.wait for me.


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Sonu

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Re: Mujhe Sagar ne Pyasa Rakha

«Reply #63 on: May 21, 2009, 05:20:48 AM »

Jeetu ji bahut bahut shukriya..

apse ek gujaish thi hia ager app mane to..

kea app her line ko seprate kerke likh sakte hai keo ki apni shayri to bahut achi huti hai per app ek hi phere me likh dete hai to padhne ka maja nahi ahta hai ager her line ko seprate likhenge to her line ka ek alag hi matlab hu jata hia or pedne me bhi bahut acha legta hia nahi to esa legta hia je koi essay hi huga eslea jayda dhiyan nahi jaa pata hai..

to ager app her line ko seprate kerke likhenge to bahut mehrbani hugi..

gumu ki bidh me ab to hume rehne ki adadet si hu gaye hia
unke na lout ahne ki ab to sabhi hade paar hu gaye hia
unki yaad ko dil se mitaya nahi ja sakta hia
dil to kho hi chuke hai unki rah me
ab to sirf jaanza uthna baki rha.

Quote from: Sager4u on May 21, 2009, 01:19:05 AM

Sonu ji kuch aapke liye........

aankhen band karne se aisa nahin k koi yaad nahin aata hai,
aankhen band karne se dil ka dard aankhon me uter jata hai,
kisi k jaane ka gum,hum chahe jitna manaale,
lekin such hai k gum manane se jaane wala wata hai.


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pandit

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Re: Mujhe Sagar ne Pyasa Rakha

«Reply #64 on: June 15, 2009, 12:21:48 PM »

Quote from: Sonu on May 21, 2009, 05:20:48 AM

NICE SUGESSTION SONU...


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