Mujhe Teri kami Mehsoos Hoti Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 14, 2010, 01:26:33 PM
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Adhuri Si zindagi mehsoos Hoti hai
mujhe Teri kami mehsoos Hoti hai

Yeh Palkein Shabnami Si Kyon Hui Hai Aaj!!!
Inn Aankhon Mein Ek Nami si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Uske Honton par Mera Naam Kaampta sa Reh gaya
Judai mein Ek Tadap Si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Humesha Se saath Rehne Ki Kasam Khaai Thi!!!
Woh Kasam Teri Badi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Dil To Tera Hai par Dhadkane Meri
Haqeeqat yeh Kabhi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Faasle To bahut Hai Par Phir Bhi Hum Door Nahi!!!
Har jagah Teri Hi Sar-Zameen Mehsoos Hoti Hai

"Khwaish" Likhta Hai Sirf Dil Ki kalam Se!!!!
Padhne mein Kyon Yeh Ek ghazal Si mehsoos Hoti hai

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: June 14, 2010, 01:59:16 PM »
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Bahut khub khwaish ji wah maza aa gaya padh ke inn lines ko.
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«Reply #2 on: June 14, 2010, 04:37:29 PM »
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WOW MARVELLOUS EXCELLENT KHWAISHJI.
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Kare koi baaten jab tere baare mein
tau mujhe dilkash ghazal mehsoos hoti hai.

main guzroon jis gali se,jis raste se
samne se aati teri hasti mehsoos hoti hai.

jab dil gaane lage khushiyan manane lage.
teri hansti hui soorat mehsoos hoti hai.

jab aasmaan se barsate hain baadal.
mujhe tere geeton ki dhun mehsoos hoti hai,

jab aa jaye teri yaad dil jhoom jaye
khoobsurat khwabon ki doonia mehsoos hoti hai.


Quote from: khwaish on June 14, 2010, 01:26:33 PM
Adhuri Si zindagi mehsoos Hoti hai
mujhe Teri kami mehsoos Hoti hai

Yeh Palkein Shabnami Si Kyon Hui Hai Aaj!!!
Inn Aankhon Mein Ek Nami si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Uske Honton par Mera Naam Kaampta sa Reh gaya
Judai mein Ek Tadap Si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Humesha Se saath Rehne Ki Kasam Khaai Thi!!!
Woh Kasam Teri Badi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Dil To Tera Hai par Dhadkane Meri
Haqeeqat yeh Kabhi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Faasle To bahut Hai Par Phir Bhi Hum Door Nahi!!!
Har jagah Teri Hi Sar-Zameen Mehsoos Hoti Hai

"Khwaish" Likhta Hai Sirf Dil Ki kalam Se!!!!
Padhne mein Kyon Yeh Ek ghazal Si mehsoos Hoti hai

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #3 on: June 14, 2010, 04:52:03 PM »
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Khwaish ji apne dil ki kalam se hi likhte rahiye, ham sab ke dilon tak khud raasta  aa jayega. P1.Dhillon
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«Reply #4 on: June 14, 2010, 06:20:48 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 14, 2010, 01:26:33 PM
Adhuri Si zindagi mehsoos Hoti hai
mujhe Teri kami mehsoos Hoti hai

Yeh Palkein Shabnami Si Kyon Hui Hai Aaj!!!
Inn Aankhon Mein Ek Nami si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Uske Honton par Mera Naam Kaampta sa Reh gaya
Judai mein Ek Tadap Si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Humesha Se saath Rehne Ki Kasam Khaai Thi!!!
Woh Kasam Teri Badi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Dil To Tera Hai par Dhadkane Meri
Haqeeqat yeh Kabhi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Faasle To bahut Hai Par Phir Bhi Hum Door Nahi!!!
Har jagah Teri Hi Sar-Zameen Mehsoos Hoti Hai

"Khwaish" Likhta Hai Sirf Dil Ki kalam Se!!!!
Padhne mein Kyon Yeh Ek ghazal Si mehsoos Hoti hai

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~


bahut khub

shakale sab insaano ki ek se hoti hai
kyu kisi ek ke liye jindgi rooti hai

nikalta to aankh se sirf paani hai mager
kisi ke liye aansu kisi ke liye mooti hai
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«Reply #5 on: June 15, 2010, 01:28:26 AM »
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kami jis ki hoti hai wo kya ye jaan paayega
paigam ye tera kabhi us tak pahunch paayega
bata koi or bhi hai raahon me badhawaas sa
kholega jab bhi palken bas usi ko paayega
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«Reply #6 on: June 15, 2010, 02:59:27 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 15, 2010, 01:28:26 AM
kami jisi hoti hai wo kya ye jaan paayega
paigam ye tera kabhi us tak pahunch paayega
bata koi or bhi hai raahon me badhawaas sa
kholega jab bhi palken bas usi ko paayega
bahut khub
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Quote from: baadal102 on June 14, 2010, 01:59:16 PM
Bahut khub khwaish ji wah maza aa gaya padh ke inn lines ko.
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Bahut Bahut Shukriya Baadal Ji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #8 on: June 15, 2010, 11:14:10 AM »
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Thumbs UP Thumbs UP :thumbup:KWAISH PR AAPNE ITNA ACHA LIKHA HAI
AANKHEN SACH ME NUM HONE LGTI HAN.
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«Reply #9 on: June 15, 2010, 02:46:13 PM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on June 14, 2010, 04:37:29 PM
WOW MARVELLOUS EXCELLENT KHWAISHJI.
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Kare koi baaten jab tere baare mein
tau mujhe dilkash ghazal mehsoos hoti hai.

main guzroon jis gali se,jis raste se
samne se aati teri hasti mehsoos hoti hai.

jab dil gaane lage khushiyan manane lage.
teri hansti hui soorat mehsoos hoti hai.

jab aasmaan se barsate hain baadal.
mujhe tere geeton ki dhun mehsoos hoti hai,

jab aa jaye teri yaad dil jhoom jaye
khoobsurat khwabon ki doonia mehsoos hoti hai.




Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sureshji...

Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much For Giving Your Precious Time..

Aur Sach Kehta Hoon, Aapne Bahuttttttttttttttt Hi khoob Likha..Too Good!!! Thumbs UP

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«Reply #10 on: June 15, 2010, 05:17:09 PM »
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bahut khoob khwaish ji aur sabne bhi bahut acha sath diya hai khwaish ji ka..
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«Reply #11 on: June 15, 2010, 10:33:23 PM »
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bhut khoob...........achi takhleeq hai khwaish sahb keep writing


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«Reply #12 on: June 16, 2010, 12:45:29 AM »
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bahot khoob khwaish sahab..achha likha janab
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«Reply #13 on: June 16, 2010, 08:31:56 AM »
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tahe dil se shukriya khwaishji.
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Quote from: khwaish on June 15, 2010, 02:46:13 PM
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sureshji...

Thankyou Sooooooooooooo Much For Giving Your Precious Time..

Aur Sach Kehta Hoon, Aapne Bahuttttttttttttttt Hi khoob Likha..Too Good!!! Thumbs UP

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Quote from: p1dhillon on June 14, 2010, 04:52:03 PM
Khwaish ji apne dil ki kalam se hi likhte rahiye, ham sab ke dilon tak khud raasta  aa jayega. P1.Dhillon

Pasand Farmane Ke Liye Teh Dil se Shukriya Dhillon Ji.. icon_flower
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