Mujhe Teri kami Mehsoos Hoti Hai "Khwaish"

by khwaish on June 14, 2010, 01:26:33 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 16, 2010, 04:51:16 PM »
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Waah Waah Khwaish Ji
Badi kashish hai is ghazal me

Lafz to "Khwaish" tumhare hain magar ahsaas se
Kyun tadap ye apni si mahsoos hoti hai

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«Reply #16 on: June 17, 2010, 08:10:20 AM »
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Quote from: MANOJ6568 on June 14, 2010, 06:20:48 PM

bahut khub

shakale sab insaano ki ek se hoti hai
kyu kisi ek ke liye jindgi rooti hai

nikalta to aankh se sirf paani hai mager
kisi ke liye aansu kisi ke liye mooti hai



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«Reply #17 on: June 17, 2010, 08:11:20 AM »
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Bahoth Qoob Khawish Saheb , Dad Hazir hai , Qubool karen , Allah apko hamesha rakhe


Apka Bhai

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«Reply #18 on: June 17, 2010, 09:19:23 AM »
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Quote from: mamta bajpai on June 15, 2010, 01:28:26 AM
kami jis ki hoti hai wo kya ye jaan paayega
paigam ye tera kabhi us tak pahunch paayega
bata koi or bhi hai raahon me badhawaas sa
kholega jab bhi palken bas usi ko paayega

Jo Hardum Chup Rahe Woh kabhi kuch na keh paayega
Par yeh Baat Bhi Sach Hai Ke Aur Dard Naa Seh Paayega
Hai Yakeen Bas Itna Ke Woh Har Pal Saath hai!!!
Haqeeqat mein Naa sahi par Yaadon mein To uske saath Reh Paayega
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«Reply #19 on: June 17, 2010, 09:21:20 AM »
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Quote from: raminder kaur on June 15, 2010, 11:14:10 AM
Thumbs UP Thumbs UP :thumbup:KWAISH PR AAPNE ITNA ACHA LIKHA HAI
AANKHEN SACH ME NUM HONE LGTI HAN.

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«Reply #20 on: June 17, 2010, 06:23:47 PM »
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Hamesha ki tarah bahut hi umda , bahut hi khoob.... bahut pasand aayi humein aapki ye ghazal aapke har ghazal ki tarha... bahut khoob likha hai Khwaish ji...!!!
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«Reply #21 on: June 18, 2010, 08:14:28 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on June 15, 2010, 05:17:09 PM
bahut khoob khwaish ji aur sabne bhi bahut acha sath diya hai khwaish ji ka..

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Geetji.. icon_flower
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«Reply #22 on: June 21, 2010, 01:20:52 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 14, 2010, 01:26:33 PM

Adhuri Si zindagi mehsoos Hoti hai
mujhe Teri kami mehsoos Hoti hai

Yeh Palkein Shabnami Si Kyon Hui Hai Aaj!!!
Inn Aankhon Mein Ek Nami si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Uske Honton par Mera Naam Kaampta sa Reh gaya
Judai mein Ek Tadap Si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Humesha Se saath Rehne Ki Kasam Khaai Thi!!!
Woh Kasam Teri Badi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Dil To Tera Hai par Dhadkane Meri
Haqeeqat yeh Kabhi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Faasle To bahut Hai Par Phir Bhi Hum Door Nahi!!!
Har jagah Teri Hi Sar-Zameen Mehsoos Hoti Hai

"Khwaish" Likhta Hai Sirf Dil Ki kalam Se!!!!
Padhne mein Kyon Yeh Ek ghazal Si mehsoos Hoti hai

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

"Faasle To bahut Hai Par Phir Bhi Hum Door Nahi!!!
Har jagah Teri Hi Sar-Zameen Mehsoos Hoti Hai"

khwaish ji!Bahut achchhey!

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«Reply #23 on: July 01, 2010, 09:52:18 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 15, 2010, 10:33:23 PM
bhut khoob...........achi takhleeq hai khwaish sahb keep writing


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«Reply #24 on: July 04, 2010, 12:05:53 PM »
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Quote from: nazar ghouri on June 16, 2010, 12:45:29 AM
bahot khoob khwaish sahab..achha likha janab


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«Reply #25 on: July 12, 2010, 11:49:45 AM »
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Quote from: SARVESH RASTOGI on June 16, 2010, 04:51:16 PM
Waah Waah Khwaish Ji
Badi kashish hai is ghazal me

Lafz to "Khwaish" tumhare hain magar ahsaas se
Kyun tadap ye apni si mahsoos hoti hai

SARVESH RASTOGI

Bahut bahut Shukriya Sarveshji..

Aapke Comments Padhkar, Yakeen maniye Behad khushi Hui hai.. icon_flower
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«Reply #26 on: July 12, 2010, 12:07:35 PM »
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hmmmm........wakai kaabile tareef hain aap khwaish ji....koi lafz nahin mere pas ab kehne ko......
suresh ji aapne bhi bht hi pyara reply diya hai..
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«Reply #27 on: July 20, 2010, 10:42:05 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 16, 2010, 10:45:55 PM
Wah Khwaish Bhai Kya Kehne Aapke
Dilke Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Ki Shaql Mein
Aapne BaDI Khoobsurti Se Pesh Kiya Hai.

Kashkar Yeh Line Mujhe Badi Achchi Lagi

Adhuri Si Zindagi Mehsoos Hoti Hai
 Mujhe Teri Kami Mehsoos Hoti Hai.

Bahut Khub Bhai...

Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #28 on: October 08, 2010, 01:27:45 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 14, 2010, 01:26:33 PM
Adhuri Si zindagi mehsoos Hoti hai
mujhe Teri kami mehsoos Hoti hai

Yeh Palkein Shabnami Si Kyon Hui Hai Aaj!!!
Inn Aankhon Mein Ek Nami si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Uske Honton par Mera Naam Kaampta sa Reh gaya
Judai mein Ek Tadap Si mehsoos Hoti Hai

Humesha Se saath Rehne Ki Kasam Khaai Thi!!!
Woh Kasam Teri Badi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Dil To Tera Hai par Dhadkane Meri
Haqeeqat yeh Kabhi Mehsoos Hoti Hai

Faasle To bahut Hai Par Phir Bhi Hum Door Nahi!!!
Har jagah Teri Hi Sar-Zameen Mehsoos Hoti Hai

"Khwaish" Likhta Hai Sirf Dil Ki kalam Se!!!!
Padhne mein Kyon Yeh Ek ghazal Si mehsoos Hoti hai

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
Ek aur laajwaab peshkash..aap kehte hai ki merri rachnayo mein haqiqat nazar aati hai per apki kavitaye,ghazals,nazm mein bhi sachai ki jhalak nazar aati hai...umda ji bahut umda......sach mein bahut achi kavitaye maine miss ki hai...
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«Reply #29 on: October 09, 2010, 07:50:35 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 16, 2010, 10:45:55 PM
Wah Khwaish Bhai Kya Kehne Aapke
Dilke Ehsaasaat Ko Lafzon Ki Shaql Mein
Aapne BaDI Khoobsurti Se Pesh Kiya Hai.

Kashkar Yeh Line Mujhe Badi Achchi Lagi

Adhuri Si Zindagi Mehsoos Hoti Hai
 Mujhe Teri Kami Mehsoos Hoti Hai.

Bahut Khub Bhai...

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

Teh Dilllllllll Se Shukriya Majid Bhai  icon_flower
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