Mujhe tumne kya se kya bana diya..................................Aqsh..

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Aaj ki yeh ghazal mai apne dono bachchon ko dedicate karti hoon...Meri sweet beti Safa aur cute little Hashir......

Meri har saans qarzdaar rahegi us rabb ki
“Aqsh” ki zaat ko usne maa ka darja diya


Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchoN mujhe tum ne, kya se kya bana diya

Na hi tumhe chaand kahooN, na hi suraj samjhooN
Zindagi ki tasveer ko tumne, apne rang se saja diya

Mere shikam mein rahe, tum mera hi hissa bankar
Mere andar mere zinda hone ka, ehsaas jaga diya

Us ek pal pe sadke jaaoN, qurbaan apni jaan karooN
Jab bhi meri baanhoN mein, tumne khud ko sama diya

Kitni suni aur tanha thi, meri zindagi tumhare bagair
Apni meethi aawaaz se, tumne maa lafz suna diya

Tumhare laboN par khilti hansi, yuNhi barkarar rahe
Tumhare hisse ke har gam ko, maine apna bana diya

Kabhi koi mushkil na aaye, tumhari zindagi mein
Ladh jaaongi har toofan se, tumko maine yeh wada diya

Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchon mujhe tumne, kya se kya bana diya..
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«Reply #1 on: September 23, 2013, 02:00:24 PM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob, Ghar ki yaad dila di aapne...bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: September 23, 2013, 02:09:17 PM »
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Beautiful! beautiful!!  beautiful!!! Kya khubsurat takhleeq hai . Maa par bahut kalaam padhe hain . Lekin yeh kalaam eik maa ki aankh se ek maa ke wujood bayan karta hai . Jitni tareef karoon kum hai. Eik Rau bhi qubool kijye.
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«Reply #3 on: September 23, 2013, 02:12:36 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 23, 2013, 01:26:41 PM
Aaj ki yeh ghazal mai apne dono bachchon ko dedicate karti hoon...Meri sweet beti Safa aur cute little Hashir......

Meri har saans qarzdaar rahegi us rabb ki
“Aqsh” ki zaat ko usne maa ka darja diya


Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchoN mujhe tum ne, kya se kya bana diya

Na hi tumhe chaand kahooN, na hi suraj samjhooN
Zindagi ki tasveer ko tumne, apne rang se saja diya

Mere shikam mein rahe, tum mera hi hissa bankar
Mere andar mere zinda hone ka, ehsaas jaga diya

Us ek pal pe sadke jaaoN, qurbaan apni jaan karooN
Jab bhi meri baanhoN mein, tumne khud ko sama diya

Kitni suni aur tanha thi, meri zindagi tumhare bagair
Apni meethi aawaaz se, tumne maa lafz suna diya

Tumhare laboN par khilti hansi, yuNhi barkarar rahe
Tumhare hisse ke har gam ko, maine apna bana diya

Kabhi koi mushkil na aaye, tumhari zindagi mein
Ladh jaaongi har toofan se, tumko maine yeh wada diya

Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchon mujhe tumne, kya se kya bana diya..


congratulations dear SAFA N HASHIR
pehli do lines padhte hi mere romte khade hogaye literally,

AQSH ji isse zyada kuch ni keh saka ,MAA ki azamat bayaan karna
mumkin nahi hai ,is ghazal se apne Mamta ki misaal di hain,
RAU bhi kam lage ,phir bhi dunga.
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«Reply #4 on: September 23, 2013, 02:20:32 PM »
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बहुत बहुत खूब अक्श जी....

ये जो माँ और बच्चे का रिश्ता है इससे ऊपर कुछ नहीं
और आपकी इस बेहतरीन पेशकश से भी ऊपर कुछ नहीं

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«Reply #5 on: September 23, 2013, 02:25:18 PM »
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Maa..
koi itna bhi likh de..to kaafi hai mere liye. uske baad technicality ke koi maayne naheen.

maa bacchon par fakhra karen aur..bacche maa par.
duaayen
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«Reply #6 on: September 23, 2013, 02:44:17 PM »
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speechless ek mother kaa wonderful and true dedication I salute u
bravo
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«Reply #8 on: September 23, 2013, 03:42:50 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 23, 2013, 01:26:41 PM
Aaj ki yeh ghazal mai apne dono bachchon ko dedicate karti hoon...Meri sweet beti Safa aur cute little Hashir......

Meri har saans qarzdaar rahegi us rabb ki
“Aqsh” ki zaat ko usne maa ka darja diya


Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchoN mujhe tum ne, kya se kya bana diya

Na hi tumhe chaand kahooN, na hi suraj samjhooN
Zindagi ki tasveer ko tumne, apne rang se saja diya

Mere shikam mein rahe, tum mera hi hissa bankar
Mere andar mere zinda hone ka, ehsaas jaga diya

Us ek pal pe sadke jaaoN, qurbaan apni jaan karooN
Jab bhi meri baanhoN mein, tumne khud ko sama diya

Kitni suni aur tanha thi, meri zindagi tumhare bagair
Apni meethi aawaaz se, tumne maa lafz suna diya

Tumhare laboN par khilti hansi, yuNhi barkarar rahe
Tumhare hisse ke har gam ko, maine apna bana diya

Kabhi koi mushkil na aaye, tumhari zindagi mein
Ladh jaaongi har toofan se, tumko maine yeh wada diya

Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchon mujhe tumne, kya se kya bana diya..



"Maa" Yeh Lafz Hi Bahut Hai Kisi Bhi Kalaam Ko Chaar Chand Lagaane Ke Liye...Aur Phir Aap ne Jo Ehsaas Darshaaye Hai...Unn Ehsaaso Par Dil Se Duayen Aur Daad...

Har Lafz Mammta Ek Ehsaas Ko Jaagrit Karta Hua.Aqsh Ji One Of Your Best Creations Kyunki iss Kalaam mein Kuch Bhi Banawti Nahi tha..Dil Se Nikle Jazbaat, Sab ke Dil Tak Pahunche..


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«Reply #9 on: September 23, 2013, 03:49:22 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 23, 2013, 01:26:41 PM
Aaj ki yeh ghazal mai apne dono bachchon ko dedicate karti hoon...Meri sweet beti Safa aur cute little Hashir......

Meri har saans qarzdaar rahegi us rabb ki
“Aqsh” ki zaat ko usne maa ka darja diya


Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchoN mujhe tum ne, kya se kya bana diya

Na hi tumhe chaand kahooN, na hi suraj samjhooN
Zindagi ki tasveer ko tumne, apne rang se saja diya

Mere shikam mein rahe, tum mera hi hissa bankar
Mere andar mere zinda hone ka, ehsaas jaga diya

Us ek pal pe sadke jaaoN, qurbaan apni jaan karooN
Jab bhi meri baanhoN mein, tumne khud ko sama diya

Kitni suni aur tanha thi, meri zindagi tumhare bagair
Apni meethi aawaaz se, tumne maa lafz suna diya

Tumhare laboN par khilti hansi, yuNhi barkarar rahe
Tumhare hisse ke har gam ko, maine apna bana diya

Kabhi koi mushkil na aaye, tumhari zindagi mein
Ladh jaaongi har toofan se, tumko maine yeh wada diya

Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchon mujhe tumne, kya se kya bana diya..

Applause Applause Applause Applause bhut acha likha hai ap nay
Realy so loving poem
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«Reply #10 on: September 23, 2013, 05:02:13 PM »
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Quote from: aqsh on September 23, 2013, 01:26:41 PM
Aaj ki yeh ghazal mai apne dono bachchon ko dedicate karti hoon...Meri sweet beti Safa aur cute little Hashir......

Meri har saans qarzdaar rahegi us rabb ki
“Aqsh” ki zaat ko usne maa ka darja diya


Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchoN mujhe tum ne, kya se kya bana diya

Na hi tumhe chaand kahooN, na hi suraj samjhooN
Zindagi ki tasveer ko tumne, apne rang se saja diya

Mere shikam mein rahe, tum mera hi hissa bankar
Mere andar mere zinda hone ka, ehsaas jaga diya

Us ek pal pe sadke jaaoN, qurbaan apni jaan karooN
Jab bhi meri baanhoN mein, tumne khud ko sama diya

Kitni suni aur tanha thi, meri zindagi tumhare bagair
Apni meethi aawaaz se, tumne maa lafz suna diya

Tumhare laboN par khilti hansi, yuNhi barkarar rahe
Tumhare hisse ke har gam ko, maine apna bana diya

Kabhi koi mushkil na aaye, tumhari zindagi mein
Ladh jaaongi har toofan se, tumko maine yeh wada diya

Mujhe maa kahkar, mere wajood ko mehka diya
Mere bachchon mujhe tumne, kya se kya bana diya..



salute to the feelings of a woman with rau,ma'am
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«Reply #11 on: September 23, 2013, 05:26:21 PM »
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INCREDIBLE..................................


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«Reply #12 on: September 23, 2013, 06:32:06 PM »
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Baajee aapki es rachnaa ne ak ghatnaa yaad dila di...... Sochaa aap sab se share kar lu......
Baaat jyada puraanii nahi hai, ba-mushkil ak saal gujraa hogaaa.....
Lagbhag dophar ka time tha.... Meri mom ki call aayii "Tujhe kuch huaa to nahii, tu theek to hai na". Mom bahuut ghabraayi huyi thii....  .
"Haa theek hu.. Q kyaa huaa" maine bari safayi se jhhot bola,, halanki subah hi mera pair stairs se fisla tha aur maiN apna ek taang tudwa baitha tha
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"Wo ak sapna aaya tha ... Jisme tujhe chhot lag gayi thi" Meri baat sunkar mom ki ghabraahat kam huyii thii..
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Jabki dusri taraf m bilkul hairaan thaa.... MaiN apni mom se lagbhag 300km door tha aur mom hamesha ki tarah jaan gayi thi ki unke bete ko chhot lagii hai....
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By the way mai aapki es poem ko salaam kartaa hu.... Aur apni baat Munavvar Rana saahab ki do line se khatam karta hu

ye aesa karz hai jise mai adaa kar hii naheeN sakta.
Mai jab tak ghar na lotuuN, meri Maa sajde me rahti hai.
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«Reply #13 on: September 23, 2013, 06:35:23 PM »
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++1 for You
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«Reply #14 on: September 23, 2013, 07:27:33 PM »
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Quote from: Bishwajeet 'Musaahib' on September 23, 2013, 02:00:24 PM
waah waah waah bahut khoob, Ghar ki yaad dila di aapne...bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut shukriya musaahib ji...aage bhi saath dete rahiye..
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