mujhko tu uske patharo ka nishaana hi bana de

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Ai junoon e ashiqui, deewana hi bana de
Gumnaami ka tu mere fasaana hi baana de

Kab tak tere fareb mein zinda rahenge hum
Ab mout  ka tu koi bahaana hi baana de

Mujhpar nazar pade, kisi keemat magar pade
mujhko tu uske patharo ka nishaana hi bana de

tere naam ki khushi nahi toh gham tera sahi
tu dil ko mere dard ka thikaana hi bana de

meri zindagi toh teri inaayat se hi sajegi
manzil nahi banaaya, toh mehkhana hi bana de

shamma ki tarah rounak e mehfil bani “deepak”
mumkin hai har saksh ko parwana hi bana de
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«Reply #2 on: July 02, 2014, 12:49:20 AM »
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waah waah waah bahut khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: July 02, 2014, 02:16:31 AM »
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wah bohut khub ,,,,,,,,,,,
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Ai junoon e ashiqui, deewana hi bana de
Gumnaami ka tu mere fasaana hi baana de

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Kab tak tere fareb mein zinda rahenge hum
Ab mout  ka tu koi bahaana hi baana de
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Mujhpar nazar pade, kisi keemat magar pade
mujhko tu uske patharo ka nishaana hi bana de
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tere naam ki khushi nahi toh gham tera sahi
tu dil ko mere dard ka thikaana hi bana de
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meri zindagi toh teri inaayat se hi sajegi
manzil nahi banaaya, toh mehkhana hi bana de
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shamma ki tarah rounak e mehfil bani “deepak”
mumkin hai har saksh ko parwana hi bana de
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on July 02, 2014, 12:44:16 AM
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bahut bahut shukriyaa
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waah waah waah bahut khoob.
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Quote from: livingbytheday on July 01, 2014, 11:50:59 PM
Ai junoon e ashiqui, deewana hi bana de
Gumnaami ka tu mere fasaana hi baana de
Kab tak tere fareb mein zinda rahenge hum
Ab mout  ka tu koi bahaana hi baana de

Mujhpar nazar pade, kisi keemat magar pade
mujhko tu uske patharo ka nishaana hi bana de

tere naam ki khushi nahi toh gham tera sahi
tu dil ko mere dard ka thikaana hi bana de

meri zindagi toh teri inaayat se hi sajegi
manzil nahi banaaya, toh mehkhana hi bana de

shamma ki tarah rounak e mehfil bani “deepak”
mumkin hai har saksh ko parwana hi bana de


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बहुत खूब......
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«Reply #10 on: July 02, 2014, 09:15:21 PM »
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Quote from: livingbytheday on July 01, 2014, 11:50:59 PM
Ai junoon e ashiqui, deewana hi bana de
Gumnaami ka tu mere fasaana hi baana de
Kab tak tere fareb mein zinda rahenge hum
Ab mout  ka tu koi bahaana hi baana de

Mujhpar nazar pade, kisi keemat magar pade
mujhko tu uske patharo ka nishaana hi bana de

tere naam ki khushi nahi toh gham tera sahi
tu dil ko mere dard ka thikaana hi bana de

meri zindagi toh teri inaayat se hi sajegi
manzil nahi banaaya, toh mehkhana hi bana de

shamma ki tarah rounak e mehfil bani “deepak”
mumkin hai har saksh ko parwana hi bana de



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wah wah wah kya khoob kahaa hai ek rau deti hoon icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!

pathar ko chukar naggena banana
hunarwalo tum yeh hunar jaantey ho

bahut bahut shukriya for kind words, aur rau ke liye bhi, keep reading what i write and help me to improve.
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Deepak Jee Aadaab ... !

Waah janab waaH kia kahne ... badi hi pyaari aur khoobsurat gazal kahi hai janab ...
Behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal aur behad umdaa aNdaaz e bayaaN raha janab ...

Is pyaari kalaam par humaari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...
Likhte rahiye ... apne kalaamoN se bazm ko rubaru karte rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ...

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