"mujhme rehta hai"

by aaina on June 15, 2009, 11:11:00 AM
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Wo aain.o si misaal rakhata hai
Apna chehra swaal rakhta hai

Mujh mai rehta aur meri tarhaan
Chupne mai bhi kamaal rakhta hai

Wo jab nikalta hai raat dhale
Chaand shrmaye aisa Jamaal rakhta hai

Ajeeb sa ittefaaq hai kabhi pooch to
Jo mere zehen mai ho wohi sawaal rakhta hai

Aslam faqr karo ki tumko usko saath mila
Jo dosti ki misaal rakhata hai
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2009, 11:28:18 AM »
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 LAJAWAAB !BAHUT ACHCHE ASLAM JI,
MILE THE NA AAP HAME JAB TAK,HAME IS ZINDAGI SE KOI SHIKAYAT NA THI,EK BAAR JO MILKE HUE HAI JUDAA,HAME IS ZINDAGI SE AB MOHABBAT NA RAHI
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«Reply #2 on: June 15, 2009, 11:32:46 AM »
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Nice one Aslam bhai....
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«Reply #3 on: June 15, 2009, 08:19:44 PM »
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Quote from: shab on June 15, 2009, 11:28:18 AM
LAJAWAAB !BAHUT ACHCHE ASLAM JI,
MILE THE NA AAP HAME JAB TAK,HAME IS ZINDAGI SE KOI SHIKAYAT NA THI,EK BAAR JO MILKE HUE HAI JUDAA,HAME IS ZINDAGI SE AB MOHABBAT NA RAHI

bhut bhut shukriya shab ji aur mashallah bhut acha kaha hai very nice
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«Reply #4 on: June 15, 2009, 08:20:26 PM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on June 15, 2009, 11:32:46 AM
Nice one Aslam bhai....

shukriya rahim
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2009, 09:09:37 AM »
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Wow Aslam ji,beautiful creation.bahut acha likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause
hmm,kaun hai wo dost, Giggle Giggle
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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2009, 10:07:22 AM »
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Quote from: aaina on June 15, 2009, 11:11:00 AM
Wo aain.o si misaal rakhata hai
Apna chehra swaal rakhta hai

Mujh mai rehta aur meri tarhaan
Chupne mai bhi kamaal rakhta hai

Wo jab nikalta hai raat dhale
Chaand shrmaye aisa Jamaal rakhta hai

Ajeeb sa ittefaaq hai kabhi pooch to
Jo mere zehen mai ho wohi sawaal rakhta hai

Aslam faqr karo ki tumko usko saath mila
Jo dosti ki misaal rakhata hai



Waah....kya baat hai, behad pyari ghazal hai...!! Kaun hai wo khushnaseeb dost ?

Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji
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«Reply #7 on: July 15, 2009, 10:49:41 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 16, 2009, 09:09:37 AM
Wow Aslam ji,beautiful creation.bahut acha likha aapne. Applause Applause Applause
hmm,kaun hai wo dost, Giggle Giggle

thnxxx madhu lol itni asaani se kabhi nhi...lol
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«Reply #8 on: July 15, 2009, 10:54:46 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 16, 2009, 10:07:22 AM
Waah....kya baat hai, behad pyari ghazal hai...!! Kaun hai wo khushnaseeb dost ?

Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji

thnxxxx so much talat for ur appriciation, sahi kaha aapne talat dost khushnaseeb hi hua karte hain aisa kuch nhi hai talat aap to khud mashallah itni achi shayra hain to mujhse behtr jaanti hongi
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«Reply #9 on: July 16, 2009, 06:38:43 AM »
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wow aaina ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 17, 2009, 03:09:46 PM »
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Quote from: pandit on July 16, 2009, 06:38:43 AM
wow aaina ji

thnxxxxxxxx pandit ji
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