MUKAMMAL JAHAAN......///..........................................///......IFTAKHAR

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ZameeN    ho    gai     aasmaaN    ho    gaya
Mukammal   mera   ab   jahaaN   ho   gaya

Tujhe    paa    ke     raushan    hui    zindagi
DarakhshaaN falak  kehkeshaaN  ho gaya

Nazeer-e-qamar   ka    jo   charcha   chida
Tera   naam   mujh   se   bayaaN  ho  gaya

Chupaaye   rakha    muddatoN   haal-e-dil
Wo    ek    roz    aakhir    ayaaN    ho   gaya

Giraaya   jo  ghooNghat   hai  tune  sanam
Qamar  baadloN   meiN    nihaaN   ho  gaya

Usse  dekh  ke   yak   ba  yak  bazm  meiN
Nazar    ruk    gai     be-zubaaN    ho    gaya

Tujhe   paa   ke    dilbar    mere   ‘Iftakhar’
Chaman   ho   gaya    aashiyaaN  ho   gaya



*DarakhshaaN: Raushan
*Nazeer-e-qamar: ChaaNd ka mukaabla
*AyaaN: Ujaagar
*Yak ba yak: Achaanak se
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2013, 09:21:12 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2013, 10:45:28 AM »
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Bahut khoob Iftakhar bhai
ghazab ki peshkash rahee..
par in asharoN ka javaab nahee..
Chupaaye   rakha    muddatoN   haal-e-dil
Wo    ek    roz    aakhir    ayaaN    ho   gaya

Giraaya   jo  ghooNghat   hai  tune  sanam
Qamar  baadloN   meiN    nihaaN   ho  gaya

Usse  dekh  ke   yak   ba  yak  bazm  meiN
Nazar    ruk    gai     be-zubaaN    ho    gaya  Applause Applause

Tujhe   paa   ke    dilbar    mere   ‘Iftakhar’
Chaman   ho   gaya    aashiyaaN  ho   gaya
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2013, 11:54:43 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 15, 2013, 08:12:51 AM

ZameeN    ho    gai     aasmaaN    ho    gaya
Mukammal   mera   ab   jahaaN   ho   gaya

Tujhe    paa    ke     raushan    hui    zindagi
DarakhshaaN falak  kehkeshaaN  ho gaya

Nazeer-e-qamar   ka    jo   charcha   chida
Tera   naam   mujh   se   bayaaN  ho  gaya

Chupaaye   rakha    muddatoN   haal-e-dil
Wo    ek    roz    aakhir    ayaaN    ho   gaya

Giraaya   jo  ghooNghat   hai  tune  sanam
Qamar  baadloN   meiN    nihaaN   ho  gaya

Usse  dekh  ke   yak   ba  yak  bazm  meiN
Nazar    ruk    gai     be-zubaaN    ho    gaya

Tujhe   paa   ke    dilbar    mere   ‘Iftakhar’
Chaman   ho   gaya    aashiyaaN  ho   gaya



*DarakhshaaN: Raushan
*Nazeer-e-qamar: ChaaNd ka mukaabla
*AyaaN: Ujaagar
*Yak ba yak: Achaanak se

Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2013, 12:14:47 PM »
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excellent kalaam mubarak ho
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2013, 12:30:52 PM »
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superbbb ghazal Iftikhar saahab
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2013, 07:14:21 PM »
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Bohat Khub!!!

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Quote from: nandbahu on April 15, 2013, 09:21:12 AM
bahut khoob
Shukriya Nandbahu Jee.
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«Reply #8 on: April 15, 2013, 10:20:25 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on April 15, 2013, 10:45:28 AM
Bahut khoob Iftakhar bhai
ghazab ki peshkash rahee..
par in asharoN ka javaab nahee..
Chupaaye   rakha    muddatoN   haal-e-dil
Wo    ek    roz    aakhir    ayaaN    ho   gaya

Giraaya   jo  ghooNghat   hai  tune  sanam
Qamar  baadloN   meiN    nihaaN   ho  gaya

Usse  dekh  ke   yak   ba  yak  bazm  meiN
Nazar    ruk    gai     be-zubaaN    ho    gaya  Applause Applause

Tujhe   paa   ke    dilbar    mere   ‘Iftakhar’
Chaman   ho   gaya    aashiyaaN  ho   gaya

Mukesh bhai bahut bahut shukriya tawajj: dene aur hausla afzaai karne ke liye.
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2013, 03:49:07 AM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 15, 2013, 08:12:51 AM

ZameeN    ho    gai     aasmaaN    ho    gaya
Mukammal   mera   ab   jahaaN   ho   gaya

Tujhe    paa    ke     raushan    hui    zindagi
DarakhshaaN falak  kehkeshaaN  ho gaya

Nazeer-e-qamar   ka    jo   charcha   chida
Tera   naam   mujh   se   bayaaN  ho  gaya

Chupaaye   rakha    muddatoN   haal-e-dil
Wo    ek    roz    aakhir    ayaaN    ho   gaya

Giraaya   jo  ghooNghat   hai  tune  sanam
Qamar  baadloN   meiN    nihaaN   ho  gaya

Usse  dekh  ke   yak   ba  yak  bazm  meiN
Nazar    ruk    gai     be-zubaaN    ho    gaya

Tujhe   paa   ke    dilbar    mere   ‘Iftakhar’
Chaman   ho   gaya    aashiyaaN  ho   gaya



*DarakhshaaN: Raushan
*Nazeer-e-qamar: ChaaNd ka mukaabla
*AyaaN: Ujaagar
*Yak ba yak: Achaanak se


wah wah ...............!
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2013, 02:55:15 PM »
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Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab..!



WaaH waaH waaH janab kia baat hai behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab.... bade hi umdaa aur dilkash ahsaas O
khayaal rahe... Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: April 16, 2013, 06:18:36 PM »
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Behad umda kalam rahi iftakhar ji. har ek ashaar khoob rahe. padhkar dil khush hua. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare
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«Reply #12 on: April 16, 2013, 09:59:16 PM »
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bahut khoob , mashaallah bahut achhi ghazal hai .
har sher khubsurat . bahut si daad aur mubarakbad.
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«Reply #13 on: April 17, 2013, 09:37:13 PM »
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Quote from: dksaxenabsnl on April 15, 2013, 11:54:43 AM
Bahut Khoob.
Shukriya Saxena Jee.
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«Reply #14 on: April 17, 2013, 09:37:59 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on April 15, 2013, 12:14:47 PM
excellent kalaam mubarak ho
Shukriya Saini Sir.
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