MUKAMMAL JAHAAN......///..........................................///......IFTAKHAR -Panna 2:Ghazals

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«Reply #15 on: April 18, 2013, 09:15:48 AM »

bahut ahcha likha hai iftakhar saaaheb, khaas taur pe 2nd last sher haasil-e-ghazal laga mujhe, aage v bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...


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Re: MUKAMMAL JAHAAN......///..........................................///......IFTAKHAR

«Reply #16 on: April 18, 2013, 09:03:54 PM »

Quote from: sarfira on April 15, 2013, 12:30:52 PM

superbbb ghazal Iftikhar saahab

Subhash bhai, bahut bahut shukriya tawajj: dene aur hausla afzaai karne ka.


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«Reply #17 on: April 18, 2013, 09:05:33 PM »

Quote from: Shireen Hakani on April 15, 2013, 07:14:21 PM

Bohat Khub!!!

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Shireen jee, hausla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.


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«Reply #18 on: April 19, 2013, 01:55:00 AM »

Quote from: Sheba on April 16, 2013, 03:49:07 AM

wah wah ...............!

Sheba jee bahut bahut shukriya.


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«Reply #19 on: April 19, 2013, 01:56:30 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on April 16, 2013, 02:55:15 PM

Ifteqaar Sahaab Aadaab..!

WaaH waaH waaH janab kia baat hai behad khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai janab.... bade hi umdaa aur dilkash ahsaas O
khayaal rahe... Is khoobsurat aur umdaa kalaam par humari hazaaroN
dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye...

Likhate rahiye... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez..

Bahut bahut shukriya Parwaaz saheb meri ghazal pe tawajj: dene aur iss qadar hausla afzaai ke liye.


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«Reply #20 on: April 19, 2013, 01:57:34 AM »

Quote from: aqsh on April 16, 2013, 06:18:36 PM

Behad umda kalam rahi iftakhar ji. har ek ashaar khoob rahe. padhkar dil khush hua. dili mubarakbad ko qubool kare

Aqsh jee, bahut bahut shukriya.


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Re: MUKAMMAL JAHAAN......///..........................................///......IFTAKHAR

«Reply #21 on: April 20, 2013, 02:08:11 AM »

Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on April 15, 2013, 08:12:51 AM

ZameeN ho gai aasmaaN ho gaya
Mukammal mera ab jahaaN ho gaya

Tujhe paa ke raushan hui zindagi
DarakhshaaN falak kehkeshaaN ho gaya

Nazeer-e-qamar ka jo charcha chida
Tera naam mujh se bayaaN ho gaya

Chupaaye rakha muddatoN haal-e-dil
Wo ek roz aakhir ayaaN ho gaya

Giraaya jo ghooNghat hai tune sanam
Qamar baadloN meiN nihaaN ho gaya

Usse dekh ke yak ba yak bazm meiN
Nazar ruk gai be-zubaaN ho gaya

Tujhe paa ke dilbar mere ‘Iftakhar’
Chaman ho gaya aashiyaaN ho gaya

*DarakhshaaN: Raushan
*Nazeer-e-qamar: ChaaNd ka mukaabla
*AyaaN: Ujaagar
*Yak ba yak: Achaanak se

3rd sher khoob rahaa Applause


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«Reply #22 on: April 20, 2013, 02:12:51 AM »

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on April 16, 2013, 09:59:16 PM

bahut khoob , mashaallah bahut achhi ghazal hai .
har sher khubsurat . bahut si daad aur mubarakbad.

Bahut bahut shukriya Hasan saheb hausla afzaai ke liye.


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«Reply #23 on: April 20, 2013, 02:14:54 AM »

Quote from: Taish on April 18, 2013, 09:15:48 AM

bahut ahcha likha hai iftakhar saaaheb, khaas taur pe 2nd last sher haasil-e-ghazal laga mujhe, aage v bas yuNhi likhte rahiye...

Bhusan jee, bahut bahut shukriya hausla afzaai ke liye.


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«Reply #24 on: April 20, 2013, 02:15:52 AM »

Quote from: adil bechain on April 20, 2013, 02:08:11 AM

3rd sher khoob rahaa Applause

Shukriya Aadil saheb.


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«Reply #26 on: June 12, 2013, 03:00:50 AM »

Quote from: iAdmin on May 29, 2013, 06:34:11 PM

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